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CRIMES OF PASSION part 23 page 144 (Page 51)

basicquestion1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 10:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by smj1977

continued from page 51
about four years back my maids daughter who was 16 yrs old (10th pass) was married to a man 28 yrs (5th pass) of age, it happens all the time here.
the girl was quite insecure as she heard a lot of bakwaas about SR she was hell scared,............................................

OMG these men are so foolish, that 28 yr old man owner of two laundry shops and very sucesful a sper his society norms was completely inoccent about such matters
I took her to a counsellor nearby who gave her a talk about how to pursue her husband and now she is happy in her life and has a 2 yr old daughter and is expecting again
these things happen quite often
awww that's such a jaanu story. i sumtimes think media has alot to do with men's attitude. they always show that whn girls keep on saying "stop it"..they r actually enjoying itAngry. secondly other aspect that disturbs me is that media shows girls having fun on their first night.Angry what n women have equal needs but for girls the fun kicks in a little somberly...yeah then whn the cat is out of the bag.. that's another story.Wink

Edited by basicquestion1 - 15 March 2011 at 10:15am

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bluedreamz953 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 10:10am | IP Logged
OMG. This is really an epic tale. I love ur FF yaar
This update was truly heart-wrenching!
Loved it. Maan has really been through a lot!
Thanks a lot for the update yaar
Love you

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RageOfAnAngel IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 10:22am | IP Logged
Part 7 - The breakfast scene was hilarious  ROFL Loved how Geet confronted Maan's family  Thumbs Up

Part 8 - Hmmm. So Geet was also attracted to Maan . She herself admitted ; nice. Tongue Poor Maan bahubali se joru ka ghulam ban gaya LOL

Part 9 - OMG !!! I am in love with this Maan  Cry I feel like protecting him Cry Very painful past of Maan  Cry

Clap     Clap   Superb parts ...   Clap

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muskaan_cute19 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 10:23am | IP Logged
hi dear i just read all ur 9 parts just ryt now
as yesterday it was recommeded by rakhi
thnx rakhi 4 this otherwise i would have missed sumthing really god or shall i say gr8
i started readig tot will reach till weekend bt believe me i simply cudnt resist knowing there are already sum parts further i continued nd continued nd now here i am i also read the part u have just posted
i thnk u can call this craziness bt i am like this bt i really get into sumthing i really deep inti it
nd now im like i wanna next part too bt i tnk thats nt possible
bt dear i loved the ff thru out really wen it started i was like wat the damn thing is going on
o gosh rakhi wat u said its gr8 read it nd den reading whole part i was like ahan now that wat i would call it different although i loved the characters already at  start bt eventually i have fallen in love wen i read the 3rd part o god their marriage wat he did to her was quite hurtening bt then sumhow loved his soft part the care sumhow he tried to show that was gr8

bt then i really loved the part s further there coffee nd that sattoo
idiot her bf that wastou gr8 simply i felt liked hitting him
nd then  there trip to delhi o gosh his family is horrible simply horrible i srsly believe this attitude is still in our world that too around us nd we so helpless cant du
loved geet there her step nd maan was such a sweet heart
o my lord loved the breakfast scene that was hilarious awesum i read it around 3 to 4 tymz
nd then her promise loved the way maan showed his concern nd she said her getout that was cool
he is really
nd now reading this part felt like crying
his family is really horrible nd this dadi feel like kiiling wish if i could
ooo she finally fallen in love with him
dear du continue soon
nd aad me in ur pm list
loved wat u wrote awesum
charaters story every thing abt iy
every bit of it
keep writing dear
god bless u

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..hinal.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 10:40am | IP Logged
wowwwwwwww loved it n maan has suffered so much n precap is awesome
-Veritaserum- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Awesome part... loved it

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smallville IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Awesome update!!! Update soon !!!
mandymore IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 10:58am | IP Logged

awww.feel sad 4 maan he suffered a lot nd due to his past he is like dis,bt koi ni humari tikhi mirchi geet h na uska dard batne k lie.nice part...

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