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CRIMES OF PASSION part 23 page 144 (Page 13)

mitzi11 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 24 January 2009
Posts: 10767

Posted: 12 March 2011 at 1:57pm | IP Logged

it mean sleeping with

the devil love it core
the show begin he he he
but i wonder who is that
person in the precap talking
to Geet both parts super duper
update pls cont soonnnnnnnn
wow love how he manipulate
the family the Handa fool
why cant they who he is
thanks pm

HawtieSeep Goldie

Joined: 11 December 2010
Posts: 941

Posted: 12 March 2011 at 2:12pm | IP Logged

oh can't wait

20tullip2000 Goldie

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Posts: 1466

Posted: 12 March 2011 at 2:15pm | IP Logged
Wow this is a very hatke story                  u mad r man so cheap and chi chi babaji what is he doing           do continue. eagerly waiting 4 next update.                          Do add me 2 your pm list .

Edited by 20tullip2000 - 12 March 2011 at 2:18pm

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sejal1986 Senior Member

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Posts: 405

Posted: 12 March 2011 at 2:17pm | IP Logged
Hi Paulami,

Tumne too hila diya, it is so so hard to imagine Maan's in such a character, tumne too vaat laga di uske character ki, please itna abuse kyon ho raha hai, itna atyachar kyon ho raha hai, but one thing I want is that Geet should stand for herself even if she had to marry Maan but she shouldn't fall in love with him as she should never be able to forget the man who did this to her, no girl can, so please I can't really see that Geet is falling for Maan specially when she loves someone else.

Let's continue and let's see how you turn the story, by the way, u always have a strong script to share.

nazsij Senior Member

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Posts: 964

Posted: 12 March 2011 at 2:28pm | IP Logged
ye maan tho kya hai yaar?geet ki ek bhi nehi chel rehi hai...........
kithni gendi gendi baathe kar reha hai maan.chiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
precap is interestng...zor ka jhatka zorose lega...........................
continue soon.

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PaintedSky IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 3:36pm | IP Logged
very interesting plot! I think u should go little slow. I'd love to read more about the bahubali maan bit more. I thought Geet will be a strong and struggling personality... but after reading the 1st and 2nd part it seems like she give in so easily....Plz make her strong! atleast she could have spat on his face or slap him hard.... just to express her anger, hatred and her frustration.

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_BlackPearl_ IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 5:04pm | IP Logged
wonderful...........interesting flow

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-shamima- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 March 2011 at 5:37pm | IP Logged
Ooh another ff with a gripping concept and ergh I really dislike men like maan who think they can use and abuse women but I'm really annoyed that her family member didn't trust her and believed what they saw and poor geet I wonder how she will escape from this and maybe make maan into a better human being anyways great update and can't wait to read more Smile

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