CRIMES OF PASSION part 23 page 144 - Page 87

all ur updates were superb 2d

Hey loved the part dear
it was fab
that was quite unpredictable really i tot that was maan was going to b kidnap
which he actually bt by his own wife
ooo i loved the part so much
who the hell said u are unromantic
atleast in part i cant say that this written by sum unromantic
nd i personally believe every woman have a romantic side its just we can say sum dont show up
bt every women is romantic 4rm inside coz she is full of feelings nd emotions
i reallly liked the part yaar i really enjoyed the way geet made him tempted ooo he was going out of control
bt loved at the end the way maan confessed her wat she means to him
nd she tou already explained wat is his place in her life or he is her life
oooooo im so falling in love with this joru ka ghulam
love u dear
i just loved the part
du continue soon
im sure that idiot maan bro will cum to myt have a claim on durga
bt sure he will repent to even thnk abt it
keep writing
god bless u

loved it .... Geet is truly a sherni 😆

Wow i liked how geet descrived her love for maan in bahubali style. plssssssssssssssssssssssss continue soon.

Awwww Paulomi..that was bouncer........I was hell sacred reading that Maan would be tied up.........that was really a sweet part....love Geet.....she rocks......can't wait for the next part.

this was such a nice part..........totally loved it.........n hot as well....continue soon.....

awesome update
Got scared wen Maan got kidnapped but den wen he smelt woman's perfume i knew it was geet
Luvd Geets seducing Maan & Maan really wanted 2 touch geet so badly
Nice precap---fink geet is Sayin dis 2 the one ov the Khuranaz
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

So Geet cleared all doubts of Maan. Nice update. Precap confusing????? plz update soon.

🤣🤣...waah waah...kya jodi hei maan aur geet ki...😆😆..luved the update...continue soon..!!

Rohini

Yaar why do u always keep underestimating yourself that u are not good at romance and all
let me tell you one thing you are very very very good in whatever u right . U have your own unique way of writting stories . Its not that you only right stories for entertainment you creating a general awakening in each one of us. Your stories are related to day to day happenings of our suroundings .               I truly love all your stories like ruhaniyat , pinjar, cop guns and roses .
And my faviorate one is pinjar.                        And once again i m telling u that u are the best in whatever u write.


Love
kanika