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CRIMES OF PASSION part 23 page 144 - Page 82

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hope everything goes well with Maaneet.
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely 
present track is wonderful
please don't  make Maan  to take any wrong decision
 hope u update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow..............wow...................wow............wow.
LOVE UR FF...
u  r amazing writer.............
ohhhhhhh ur concept is very strong and different ...just fantastic...
ohh MAAN'S chareacter is SO DIFFERENT and wow...........😍😍😍
and the way u described about INDIA AND THE RURAL areas....
that is out of the WORLD.....
love each part and enjoyed....all part....
OMG LOVED the part when maan saw geet first time...😲😲
OMG AND HIS CHEAP DIALOGUES. πŸ‘ πŸ˜†..amazing...every line u wrote ..and theway u describe MAAN'S AND HOW HE BEHAVES H.HAAYYYYYY..
AMAZING..ohh what a family he has..😑😑..they r so means....but fikir NOT geet is with him;;;
geet is so lovely...in what a bad situation she got married...😭😭
but loved that scene....wow geet is amazing...THE BREAKFAST WITH KHURANAS!!!!!!!! THAT WAS DAMN SOOOOOOOOOOO FUNNY🀣🀣🀣

and uff their cute nhok jhok....LOVE THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh actualy he is so cute and innocent.. πŸ˜³πŸ˜³
his past was very bad....but love that in everything geet helps maan...
LOVE THAT U PMED ME....
AND KEEP IT UP..
GOD BLESS U...
πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ₯³πŸ‘πŸ€—

Edited by RukhluvMaan - 13 years ago
mitzi11 thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
wow love how maan taking
care of geet brilliant
update the precap sounds
scary pls cont
soonnnnnnnnnnn
thanks pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it n geet got shocked so much but precap is scary
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Posted: 13 years ago
precap is scary πŸ˜•. i hope its one of Geet's bad dreams 
gr888 update as usual
sorry for late comment ws out of town
cont sooooon'
thnx for d PM πŸ€—
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 14
 
liked the way Geet handled the press conferenceπŸ‘
loved the slapπŸ˜‰
 
and its not true that she fed him to cover up his lack of skills
but its her habit to feed himπŸ˜†
 
OMG Maan asked them to leave the KM in 7 days wowπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago

part 15

Maan fearing on Durga being vaccinated
how sweet😊
the way he said sorry to the little bundle
it was heart touching😊
 
the kidnap
so very rustic so very romantic
and you call your self unromantic
your college mates should read it before calling you heart less
 
I think the way you potray emotions
your heart is soft and bubbling with love
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey paulami 

u updating?
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Posted: 13 years ago
gr8 update!!!
feeling sad 4 maan!!!