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CRIMES OF PASSION part 23 page 144 - Page 58

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Posted: 13 years ago
tat was so sweet.
Amazing part...............love it!!!
baby talk was cute.
gr8 update!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowwww.............party,hope it doesn't turn to a mayhem.
wonderful update!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i am actually loving this moments bw the intellectual and the rustic robin hood..................
part 12 was awesome showing their happiness together
part 13 as usual hamhari mirchi ne sabko nachaya....................
cant wait for the party scene............
kisko mili tappad....................i know u will update late..............but thanks for updating 2 parts..........
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great updates - both of them...

Loving it how Maan and Geet are discovering each other...Geet may be a very modern woman very vocal about her needs but every woman has a very feminine hidden soft side which she wants her man to uncover...she might be very tough outside but only her man knows how soft she is inside...

I am amazed at how Maan has opened up with her and wants to continue his studies...I am sure they will help each other in their character development....

Love their mischievous sides....now let me be mischievous and ask you to spice their mischiefs a bit by being somewhat more descriptive perhaps?πŸ˜†

EDIT : Oh haan, I forgot to mention about one thing - I admire Maan's ideology on doing his bit for the people in his country - from bringing justice to having a limited family...its astounding that inspite of no proper education and staying in that environment, he still maintains his ideals..bravo for taking this up in your story
Edited by mystique_girl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
different kind of ff.. hats off plz plz pm me  when update .
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great updates! I'm glad that Maan has decided to go back and finish his education. The shopping scene was cute. I hope it's not maan who gets slapped again! Looking forward to he next part continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice Geet fighting for Maan with his family. Bravo girl.πŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update, and the precap is interesting. plssssssssssssssssssss continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

bahubali maan ................ joru ka gulam........................ loved it..................... continues getting slap from wife................... lovely............................... kc circuss ki to ab geet band baja degi............... will take all the control in thier own hands................ family is going to pay now for their sins.........

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Posted: 13 years ago


Edited by DILIBADAAT - 13 years ago