CRIMES OF PASSION part 23 page 144 - Page 44

geet ko pyaar hogaya

n bahubali maan jo kisi se nahi dartha

vo aaj geet se dhar raha hai

n y is he telling sorrrrrryyyyy

 

geet has become so caring

i think geet will stop him from saying that with a kiss!!!

con't soon

Anyways, a grand one....love it how you portray their feelings so simply...

Maan and Durga seem to be of the same age 😆 Loved Maan's innocence....they seem to compliment each other so well...

i think maan is not confused abt his feeling but he is confused y geet has changed her attitude towards him...........well most of the ppl in his life have hated him so he expects the same from geet..

but when she is showering her love, affection, care and concern on him he is dead worried that he might lose it again and he is fearing of losing her...........i dont feel that he is insecure of her being intelligent than him.............

now i really wanna know wats gonna happen next..........

r u updating the next part today or r u going to update pinjar...............