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CRIMES OF PASSION part 23 page 144 - Page 42

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wooooooooooooooooow....great update

I know I ask the weirdest of questions, but why did Maan say "Geet mujhse door raho tumhe mujhse pyaar ho jaega", why not "Geet mujhse door raho nahi to mujhe tumse pyaar ho jaega"?  Hmmmmm hmmmmm,   random question? I know i know....Has Maan already fallen in love with Geet...

Really admire Geet's personality in this story...confident and flexible in life 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago


Edited by DILIBADAAT - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

loved the update....

bechara humara bahubali ... waqai bheeki billi ban gaya .,.. he's so adorable .... how can some one not fall in love with him......  yaar plzz aik aur update de do naa
 
pretty plzzz  😍
 
love
Sana
 
Edited by sindu555 - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago

it was lovely . . . i really like the song actually more than the song i like the singer . . . ok . . . Maan wants geet to feed him, is he a kid that he needs to be fed but dont we love kids especially if they so cutely wait for being fed . . . maan is a sweety pie and a moron, why moron well he thought of going to the bar . . . precap . . . no comments as i have no idea whatsoever u planning to do . .. is she gonna try woo him🤔 .. .  i like wooing😳 . ..  since u r rolfing in the precap i get a feeling she will try seduce him but will she☺️ .. .  BTW what is sattoo😆 is it a hard drink or something like tea or whatever😆

Edited by 7thHeaven - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it ........
hmmm both r falling for each other ...
bt i think condition is batanaaa bhi nahi ataaa Jaatayaa bhi nahi jaataa 😆
cont soon ...
ummm wht might be happen aftr he said sorry and move on to her 😉
waiting for it 
cont soon ...🤗........


 PS : waiting for Pinjar tooooo ..dt one is my sabse fav 😳
Edited by sonalinaik2006 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

wonderful part..........love it!!!

yes it will take a person to trust some one,

wen he has undergone many things in his life,

sure geet will win him!!!

con soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
Brilliant part. loved it.
both fall for each other but geet realized it and maan is still fighting with his feelings.
he feels his mother wake him up when geet went to wake him up.
it's so emotional.
 maan is so kid, loved it.
Geet is working on her way.  she is taking all thing on her way.
loved it. she is changing maan's wardrobe , redecorate the room.
only geet can changed him and placed his full of love.
he is insecure and can understand his pain. he needs lots of love, affection to over his insecurity.
only geet can do it.
precap is interesting.
update soon.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

thanks

 
 
 
read the whole part 1 -10 in one go.. loved this ff as the other  onr pinzer......................  loved your writting skil....................... very soon they will be together dil se...................................... hats off to u for writing such ffs................
Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update. So Love is in the air.😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
god. what has geet made out of angry lion??? now this is not fair, he makes her fall in love and hen release her. lets c if his heart would give the same command as his fake tongue did??
would his thirsty eyes move to seek serenity from elsewhere when she is not around?

desperately waiting for ur soon lovely update.