CRIMES OF PASSION part 23 page 144 - Page 31

loved the breakfast scene......................

hehheheeeeeeeeeee bahubali maan geet ki ek promise keliye chuha bangeya......heheheheeeeeeeeeeee

heyy
im commenting on ur this FF,for the first time....
just loveeeeedddd it..
in the starting i was hating maan but in the end(part 7) i fell in love with maan...
liked the way you described maan's personality.
i.ve read manyy urduu novels which have this antihero type of characters and those which dealt with the social problems...
all these problems are same here too
cont. soon....


love,,,
Adeena...

Edited by DILIBADAAT - 13 years ago

Haha only geet can do this,,,,,breakfastscene was hilarious.omg maan poor guy uski biwi to use shock p shock de rahi h.gr8 part.

luved d breakfast table scene
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continue soon

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awesome update continue soon

very very very nicely writen

Edited by smj1977 - 13 years ago

that was too good they were about to get close

Why does Maan always have to lust women in your FF'z . . . all ur three Maan's have a grey shade in their character . . .i hate this Maan😡 . . . Geet's pain was too much to bear . . . I hate Maan . . . I am not in condition to say much as I m just hating him to the core . . . golden heart my foot, a man who couldn't respect women considers himself a social server . . . he is rapist and a bloody criminal . . . even if he repents in future . . . he can never undo his deeds . . .