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~When They Collide~ (AY, TR, SV FF)-Prt76Updt. (Page 65)

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Posted: 02 July 2011 at 11:48am | IP Logged
lizzie ... thanks for liking the parts Tongue ... now you will update abt the bhootni LOL

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Posted: 03 July 2011 at 8:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BUBLAI

lizzie ... thanks for liking the parts Tongue ... now you will update abt the bhootni LOL
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~~Part 46~~


Yuvi could see  fear in her eyes. It was a feeling which she hardly expressed. And that too in front of him? She was always the tough one. He remembered the school days where he scared the hell out of her during the election time. But she was still strong then. This time, he couldn't see any hope in her eyes. He couldn't take the sight any more. He remembered the talk with the achariya and vrinda. Whatever the hell this 'saya' was, she had to go.. he would make her leave for good. He quickly got the lighter out, and handed it over to ashi.

Ashi was still staring outside. The cab had been moving at a good speed, and the vision of saya moved along the speed. Yuvi forced her to light the lighter, and she finally does it.

Yuvi looks at her as she keeps staring at the flame. He figures out that the weird vision has left ashi. He quickly pulls her in a hug and kisses her forehead. She is still numb as she was before.

Yuvi- (caressing her)- "baby, are you okay?"

Ashi (still numb)- "huh?"

Yuvi- "ashi, we have found a key to your problem. Last night when vrinda saw me leaving the hotel, I had gone to talk to some learned men, and the villagers. I learnt that saya was in pain when she died. No one knew about it, but her weakness was fire…"

Ashi- ".. and wherever she finds fire, she leaves.. right?"

Yuvi- "yes. And she has been haunting you coz you went up to her grave the other day.

Ashi- "mujhe kya sapna aayega ki who ek grave hai psycho"

Yuvi- "psycho toh tum ho! Raat ko akele ghost hunting karne ki kya zaroorat thi?"

Ashi- "aur ab ghost haunting ho raha hai.. so whats the plan yuvi.. hw do we get rid of her?"

Yuvi (thought for a while)- " we will have to dig in her grave and burn her remains. This is the only way she will stop haunting and troubling you"

Ashi- "lets get done with it."

They take the cab in the jungles and walk towards the grave. Ashi is busy holding yuivi's hands and carefully entering the jungle, while yuvi is lost in deep thoughts.

'if this is wht ashi is feeling, or hallucinating, thn ill have to make it more real to her tht saya will leave if she is burnt.. but how?'

He quickly collects some dry wood and lights it.

Ashi- "idiot! Itni tension mein tumko bonfire bonfire khelneki sooj rahi hai?"

Yuvi- "ashi, while we dig in your missy ghost's grave, do you want her to chew you up before you burn her skelly's?? but I even like the way you think! Bonfire!"

Ashi (annoyed)- "yuvi…. Don't push it!"

Yuvi slightly smirked and strted digging in.

 

Dinner time. Hotel.

Sheetal didn't seem to be in the best of her mood that day. She had been throwing tantrums since the past one hour. It was her birthday in the next few hours, and her favourite sister wasn't around. Se had been suspecting sid and sany for the ghost fiasco. She was quite sure they where the master minds behind it.

Sid (confused)- "huh??"

Sany- "have u lost it little pug! Why would I and sid do that."

Sheetal- "isn't that obvious. You think that she has faltered in their relationship, and you want to teach her a lesson coz you like yuvi bhayyia!"

Sany- "she left yuvi, and she has already learnt her lesson! Do I need to teach her something? Oh yeah!! I need her some sorta manners and I HAVE to teach her how to trust people!"

Kabeer (growled)- "trust?? Thn you shld be teaching yuvi how to not break trust!! Oh am so sorry.. am sure it will be a problem for you too.. as you're his-sis… friend right??"

Sany looked up at him, almost in tears and shook her head.

Tia looked at both of them and knew this situation would worsen soon.

Tia- "oh shut up guys!! Tia cannot tke this anymore! Why are we guys fighting coz of them. Theyare adults and they know how to deal with their problems, and shells, don't worry, ashi will be back soon. And we all have a surprise for you.. so calm down"

Sid- "right! Sheetal, I didn't know it was your birthday.. so I dnt have anything for you. So…. What do you want as a gift??"

 "aah!! Finally kuch kaam ki baat hui! Erm.. mere surprise birthday party ke liye mujhe ek cute sa date chahiye!" she blushed

Vrinda- "sheetal! Yeh kya battameezi hai?? Isn't he too big for you??"

Sheetal (smiling)- "gussa kyun hoti ho?? He isn't my types!! He mite be your types, but not mine.. I said I want a cut date..duh uhh!!"

Vrinda gulped at her sisters reply and planned to keep her mouth shut. Like forever.

Tia- (confused)- "tia ne toh tumhe kisi bhi surprise birthday party ke bare mein nahi bataaya.. fir kisne bataaya?? Ab yeh surprise kaise hua??"

Ranveer (taunted)- "har saal sheetal ke liye tumhare paas ek hi surprise hota hai.. it wasn't hard to guess I think!"

Tia- shut up dehaati! Surprises ke bare mein tumhe kya pata.. kabeer nahi hota toh tia is sure ke tum tia ke birthday ke liye bhi kuch nahi kar paate!"

Ranveer- "hello!! Good morning!"

Tia- "good morning?? Good night dehaati!"

Kabeer (imitating tia)- "par kabeer ne ranveer ki help kab ki??"

Everyone burst out laughing including sany. She kept staring at kabeer as he smiled and tried making it up to tia. This was such an amazing experience. Such wonderful people. Just like a small happy family. 'friends' she sighed. She knew everyone hated her there coz they looked at her as if she had stolen their yuvi from them. But tia had suddenly turned nice. She had been actually nice to her. And on the other hand, she never hated yuvi. She just didn't want yuvi to go through hell all again. And kabeer.. he was so rude and mean. Chivalry never existed in his dictionary. So raw and irritating. A part of her just wanted to strangle him to death, while the other part wanted to just go and pull his cheeks. 

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Posted: 03 July 2011 at 9:53am | IP Logged
hey !!! lizzie ... I was expecting an update from you ...Tongue and I got it ...
the part was really nice ... yeh sany ki bhoot ko bhagaoge kaise yaar ... grave digging aur scary ho sakta hai ... if something else happens Shocked
But ashi-yuvi are just impossible --- yeh dono kabhi bhi bade nahi honge ... they will always keep fighting --- how sweet Tongue
abb sheetal's surprise party ... hmmm ...
kabeer-sany part was good too ... abb ashi-yuvi ke beech misunderstanding kyun hua tha --- we have to think about it ...
enjoyed reading this update Tongue

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Posted: 03 July 2011 at 9:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BUBLAI

hey !!! lizzie ... I was expecting an update from you ...Tongue and I got it ...
the part was really nice ... yeh sany ki bhoot ko bhagaoge kaise yaar ... grave digging aur scary ho sakta hai ... if something else happens Shocked
But ashi-yuvi are just impossible --- yeh dono kabhi bhi bade nahi honge ... they will always keep fighting --- how sweet Tongue
abb sheetal's surprise party ... hmmm ...
kabeer-sany part was good too ... abb ashi-yuvi ke beech misunderstanding kyun hua tha --- we have to think about it ...
enjoyed reading this update Tongue

appy, next part coming up sweetheart!
misunderstanding ka reason toh bataya tha na previous updates mine.. u forgot i guess :P
it was yuvis bday, and ashi went to give him a surprise.. and she saw him making out with a girl is his hotel, so she left from there...
but yuvi doent knw the reason.. he thinks tht she left him coz of kabber!
sigh!

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Posted: 03 July 2011 at 10:26am | IP Logged
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hey !!! lizzie ... I was expecting an update from you ...Tongue and I got it ...
the part was really nice ... yeh sany ki bhoot ko bhagaoge kaise yaar ... grave digging aur scary ho sakta hai ... if something else happens Shocked
But ashi-yuvi are just impossible --- yeh dono kabhi bhi bade nahi honge ... they will always keep fighting --- how sweet Tongue
abb sheetal's surprise party ... hmmm ...
kabeer-sany part was good too ... abb ashi-yuvi ke beech misunderstanding kyun hua tha --- we have to think about it ...
enjoyed reading this update Tongue

appy, next part coming up sweetheart!
misunderstanding ka reason toh bataya tha na previous updates mine.. u forgot i guess :P
it was yuvis bday, and ashi went to give him a surprise.. and she saw him making out with a girl is his hotel, so she left from there...
but yuvi doent knw the reason.. he thinks tht she left him coz of kabber!
sigh!


Yaa ... I remembered that but I thought uske baad un dono ek argument wala discussion and the final break-up wala ek flashback hota toh it would be more clear ... wat say ??
waiting for your next updateTongue

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Posted: 03 July 2011 at 10:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BUBLAI

Originally posted by elizaa

Originally posted by BUBLAI

hey !!! lizzie ... I was expecting an update from you ...Tongue and I got it ...
the part was really nice ... yeh sany ki bhoot ko bhagaoge kaise yaar ... grave digging aur scary ho sakta hai ... if something else happens Shocked
But ashi-yuvi are just impossible --- yeh dono kabhi bhi bade nahi honge ... they will always keep fighting --- how sweet Tongue
abb sheetal's surprise party ... hmmm ...
kabeer-sany part was good too ... abb ashi-yuvi ke beech misunderstanding kyun hua tha --- we have to think about it ...
enjoyed reading this update Tongue

appy, next part coming up sweetheart!
misunderstanding ka reason toh bataya tha na previous updates mine.. u forgot i guess :P
it was yuvis bday, and ashi went to give him a surprise.. and she saw him making out with a girl is his hotel, so she left from there...
but yuvi doent knw the reason.. he thinks tht she left him coz of kabber!
sigh!


Yaa ... I remembered that but I thought uske baad un dono ek argument wala discussion and the final break-up wala ek flashback hota toh it would be more clear ... wat say ??
waiting for your next updateTongue

ok.. so wait for like 20 mins more. itll come up.. u give the flash back and all tht in the next part..
ok??
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~~Part 47~~

 

Yuvi and ashi had been busy digging up the grave. Ashi was onn with her nonstop curses. Yuvi just sighed as he heard her speak. This was not the right time to argue with her. He loved being her punching bag at times.

Finally they could see the remains. Ashi stood right next to yuvi. Had yuvi moved an inch, she would have burnt him instead. She gulped at looked up to him.

Ashi- "ab??"

Yuvi- "ab kya?"

He smiled at her blank expressions and turned off the flames.  He could feel her fingers twirling around his arm, her nails dug in and her chin behind his shoulder.

Yuvi(whispering)- "ashi, hame saya ko bhagaana hai.. mujhe nahi maarna! Now try calling saya. Once she comes here, we will burn her remains. This is the only way to get rid of the spirit"

Ashi- "aur yeh tumhein kisne bataaya? Kaunse dhongi baba ne?"

Yuvi- "usi dhongi baba ne, jisey is bhoot ki biodata pata thi, aur yeh bhi pata tha ki iski weakness fire hai.. ab jaldi bullao tumari love ko!"

 

Dinner table

"well… I have a gift for you if you like comics!" smiled sid as sheetal growled back when she heard 'comics'

Sheetal- "do you think am a kid???"

Vrinda (rolling her eyes)- "ofcourse!"

Sheetal- "shut up dee! Sid, am no kid… and if he wants me to gift something… it better nt be related to his unicorns.. "

Sany quickly pinched him and shook her head. She didn't want anyone too know what sid was thinking about.but sid was quite adamant on what he wanted to give her.

 

On the other side, it had been a while. There was darkness all over. Yuvi had been staring at her  moonlit face as she was busy waiting for the spirit to come.

Yuvi finally held her waist and pulled her closer. Ashi was quite shocked at this and pushes him with a jerk

Ashi (calmly)- "yuvi.. I know you have been with me throughout! And am quite thankful for your help.. but trust me.. this is not working.."

Yuvi- "don't worry.. saya will come.. this will work!"

Ashi- "am talking bout wht ur trying to do… its not going to work.."

Yuvi- "whts it ashi, tell me.. what went wrong. i knw this is the wrong time, but till saya plans of coming, we need to do somethin.. you only said tht truth never goes out of fashion. So please. I need to know to know the truth.. what went wrong? Where did I go wrong? Why did you do this to me? I can see.. you still love me.. then why ashi?"

Ashi thought for a while, and finally thought to confront him. She was left with no option. And yuvi did deserve to know, how he ruined it for both of them.

Ashi- "you remember the night I called you on your birthday?"

Yuvi- "and you were in London.. with kabeer.."

Ashi- "yes.. I was there for you.. to give you a surprise!"

Yuvi- "so why was kabeer with you?? A free gift hamper with the surprise??"

Ashi- "shut up yuvi! When I came to your hotel, what I saw was more disgusting than you are.. that girl.. I saw you kissing her.. fon.. making out with this girl, when we both were together.. what were you thinking?"

Yuvi- "ashi… why didn't you tell me about this before? Please let me explain.. it wasn't like how it seemed to be..i didn't realize what happened. That was a random girl who was drunk.. and.."

Ashi- ".. and so were you.. you didn't realize what was coming. You weren't two timing me.."

Yuvi- ".. yes.. and.."

Ashi- ".. and I care less yuvi.. that girl was throwing herself on you right?"

Yuvi- "..yes.."

Ashi- "and you think she will be the last girl who would be wanting to kiss you?"

Yuvi- "no.. but.."

Ashi- "..but there will be many such girls.. and I guess am over you now.. its high time you do the same.."

Yuvi- "are you sure? …"

He was not done yet, but ashi's sudden change in her behavior pointed out to something.

Ashi could feel cold wind blow through her face. She held his hand tighter.

This time she could see her. Her spirit. She could feel her. Her face had all gone pale. Yuvi could feel her ice cold hands. Yui couldn't see anything. He quickly nudged ashi, and she looked at him.

"yuvi.."

"ashi.. are you okay?"

"yuvi.. cant you see her?"

Yuvi knew that ashi could see the spirit. Or mabe was just gave ashi a matchbox.

"ashiii… youuu cant do thisss" was all she could hear. her illusion. And he knew what he had to do next. He quickly left ashi's hands and poured petrol all over the grave. Next he

"I WILL!" she yelled.

"ashiii, am tired of living like this.. I need your body.."

"I AM NOT GIVING MY BODY AWAYY!!" she screeched.

"its not in your hands to save your life ashi.. I need this body of yours!"

Ashi quickly wiped her tears and lit it. She could feel a storm around her. Without wasting a moment, she dropped the matchstick to burn saya's body.

Yuvi looked quite amused as he looked at ashi talking to herself.. or maybe some ghost named saya..

"its over" he sighed.

Ashi could see saya's figure fading as the flames grew. She tried telling her something

"sss….. I tried taking your body away from you.. I tried killing you many times.. but what saved you, was love.. true love.. he didn't let you die. Not even once. The love had proved stronger. And I wanted to feel that love. This will be the last time ill be trying to take your body.. but he will not let it happen.. your love will save you again"

With that, the figure disappeared and ashi felt some force empowering her. she pushed  yuvi and ran towards the fire.

But yuvi was ready for this. He was quick this time. He was with her before she could throw herself in the fire. Yuvi holds her as she faints in his arms..




p.s-  aah! i knw this was too silly, but had to finish this saya track somehow.. bohot ho gaya tha naa.. lots of tension... now we need the gang masti..

whoevers updating next, plz makeay get lost in the jungle.. we wnt then to get their old memories back :P

and haan appy, u can have the flashbacks u wer talking bout!!

plz cont soon :D

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