~When They Collide~ (AY, TR, SV FF)-Prt76Updt. (Page 61)

Meeko IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 2:41pm | IP Logged
wow appy!!
ur too good at dialogs! specially tia and ashi's!!
every1s busy annoying tia! its fun to see her annoyed... ths so just her!
and bout ashi! river rafting in the ice! lol!! u knw, i was to put the same thing for the days plan! river rafting! but thnk god bach gayi! yuvi ne ashi ki badi udaayi! tum log bhi mera udaathe!
plz go next na!! pahlease! love to read ur parts

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Posted: 28 June 2011 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
thanks trishu ... and lizzie , thanks for liking my updates but baaki sab kahan gaye ...Confused
sirf hum teen hi reh gaye kya ??
okay ... I 'll go next ...

Edited by BUBLAI - 29 June 2011 at 2:14am

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 2:47am | IP Logged
Part 42 :

They all reached the mountain top .. the view was awesome from there ... the landscape was worthwatching ... everyone was busy admiring the scenes ...

Vrinda : '' wow ! It's so beautiful up here ... ''

Tia : '' yaa Tia totally agrees with you ... Thank you Tia's God that I came up here ''

Ranveer : '' Kyun Tia ... ab aap tareef kyun kar rahi hai?? ... pehle toh itna bhaw kha rehi thi aap''

Tia : '' shut up camel !!! Tia tumse argue karne ki bilkul mood main nahi hai ''

Ashi : '' toh phir tum kis cheez ke mood mein ho , snow spa ki ? ''

everyone started giggling ... she got angry and went and stood a little far away from them ...

Kabeer : '' sany , kya humlog skiing karne jaa sakte hai ''

Sany : '' Ofcourse , but sab ko chalne do , tab ... akele karna iss bad manners ''

kabeer : '' yaa i agree but don't you think if we wait for them to start we will be going back to the hotel doing nothing ''

sany : '' totally agree with you ... recent developments dekhke to aisa hi lag raha hai ''

they both were smiling and talking away ... ashi saw them ..

ashi : '' ye log itne bhi kya baatein kar rahe hai ... kya kuch chal raha hai , inke beech ... I will have to talk to kabeer ''

Ashi : '' Guys !!! kya humlog yahan pe Wordsworth banna bandh karke skiing karne chalein ''

Sheetal : '' yaa di , inlogo ko dekho ... kab se they are going on admiring the nature , lagta hain yahan baithke poetry ka full book compose kar lenge ''

Sid : '' Tumhe usse kya ?? tumlog jao na , aapne aap ... yaa phir darte ho akele jaane mein ''

Sheetal and Ashi ( together ) : '' Darr !! my foot !! ''

The others looked at looked coz of the way they shouted ...
Yuvi : '' wacko ... why are you shouting like hell ... bechare nature ko aise disturb mat karo ''

Ashi : '' Oh I am sooo sorry baby wordsworth ... main bhool gayi thi ke main aapke muse ko disturb kar rahi hoon "" ( she said it in a baby tone )

Ranveer was smiling ... and Tia : '' Guys !!! yeh world war ka kaunsa season chal raha hai ??... abb toh main counting bhi bhool gayi  ''

Ashi : '' come on Timbo we all know you brilliant you are in maths ... haar baar proof dene ki zaroorat nahi hai ''

Tia : '' You punk !!! Tia tumhe taunt kar thi , tumhe mujhpar taunt karne kisne kaha ''

they both started arguing ... the others are shooking their heads like '' they are impossible ''

Yuvi : '' Tia this is not right yaar ... tum mera limelight chheen rahi ho ... not fair !!! "

tia : '' tum dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta ... continue fighting aur sabka holiday ka ek precious day waste kar do ''

Vrinda : '' haan Tia bilkul theek keh rahi hai ... tum dono phirse ladh na maat start karo ... lets go foe skiing ''

ashi was shocked at Vrinda's reply : '' wah maate in waadiyon ne toh tumpar jaado kar diya ... itna skiing karne ke liye tum ucchal rahi ho ? that's unbelievable !!! ''

Ranveer : '' okay guys abb chalte hai "

Kabeer and Sany felt like '' finally '' and they too went to their skiing point ...
 everybody took their respective positions ... Ashi and Yuvi again started fighting with their positions ... ranveer had to intervene to sort it out ... Ashi was busy looking at the edge ... All started with their sport , even Tia ... but Ashi , busy looking below the edge , got engrossed in it and suddenly her head was spinning and she fell of the edge ... she was screaming like hell and all the others were trying their best to reach the edge by skiing ... but it was difficult for them to do so ... as none of them except kabeer and Yuvi are a pro at skiing ... Ashi managed to get a grip by holding a tree trunk , but as the tree was not that strong it was slowly giving away ...

Ashi : '' Help !!! Help !!! please someone help me !! "'

Kabeer : '' Ashi we are coming ... just hold on for some more time ""

Yuvi was still in shock

Ranveer : '' yuvi bana please kuch kariye ... kabeer aur aap jaldi jaiye ... we are tying ropes to both of your waists ''

Sid and sany rushed to get ropes and call the lifeguards , if any , from the hotel ...

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 4:54am | IP Logged
god ashi again in trouble, lovely updt dudeClap
okay i'll go the nextWink
_SnowFlake_ IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 5:37am | IP Logged
Yuvi was still in shock. Ranveer pushed him slowly.

"yuvi banna hosh me ayiye or kuch kijiye"

Yuvi got back his mind n start shouting for her. "Ashi don't worry I'm coming, tumhe kuch nahi hoga"

"guys plz hurry up varna main gir jaaungi, hey bhaggu help me out" ashi cried out

Sid & sany at hotel, they went to the manager.

"sir please help us, we need ropes n if possible then two lifeguards also" sany was saying that very loudly.

"okay calm down, I'll manage ropes & lifeguards" mager replied n went somewhere.

"oh god, I hope ashi ko kuch na ho" sid explained

On the top of the mountain, everyone was in fear n that tree was going to fall. Ashi was screaming more loudly.

"AAA...guys yeh dono kaha mar gaye?"

"oh Tia's god sid or sany ko jaldi vej do, varna ashi niche gir jayegi" praying to god but yuvi got angry to heard that she will fall down. "TIA" he shouts "tumhe pata bhi k tum kya bol rahi ho, how can you say that ki vo gir jayegi?" yuvi was looking so angry on Tia.

"sorry yuvi, Tia didn't mean it, Tia ko bhi Ashi ki utni hi fikar jitni tumhe" tia said to him

"but tumhe soch samajh ke bolna chahiye tha" yuvi replied

"guys enough, concentred on ashi, koi please kuch karo" vrinda said

"I think sany or vo ghochu sid kahi fass gaye hai issi liye der ho rahi hai" shell replied

Ashi was still screaming "Timbo apna pyaar badme jatana but now mujhe upar uthaao this tree is very weak, mera wait handle nahi kar sakta" ashi cried out

"that's it main or wait nahi kar sakta, I'm going" yuvi was loosing his waiting control n going to get ashi without any ropes n anything but Ranveer stopped him.

"banna yeh aap kya kar rahe hai? aise toh aap bhi problem me aa jayenge" Ranveer explained

"but Ranveer ashi...

Even he cloud say something kabir said "yuvi, ranveer is right & ashi? She'll be fine, kuch nahi hoga usse"

Ashi was hearing them, "kabir you're right mujhe kuch nahi hoga lekin agar kisine jaldi nahi kia then I'm sure kuch na kuch hoyega"

At the hotel, the manager was too late.

"kaha hai yeh manager?? He is too late. Isse manager ke post se nikal dena chahiye" sid explained his anger to the manager.

At last, he came there but he could not manage any lifeguard, everyone was busy to save the others so none of them was in hotel. Moreover, there was just one rope the manager had. Sany & sid got angry to heard that n went alone with just one rope.

On the top of mountain, yuvi was so restless.

"no guys I can't wait more" even he could move sany & sid was coming there shouting. They gave the rope to yuvi, he tied the rope to his waist n start coming down to ashi. The tree was braking & ashi was going to fall but yuvi caught her hand at the main time.

"ashi, try to climb up, I'm here for you" he said gently

Ashi was trying to climbing up & on top, others were pulling the rope.

aab koi or ashi ko upar uthaaoLOL

Edited by 00123trisha - 29 June 2011 at 5:42am

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 9:45am | IP Logged
hey trishu ... it was a rocking update ... TongueClap
Clap"AAA...guys yeh dono kaha mar gaye?" -- this was the best one .. she is busy accusing sid n sany LOLLOL

okay I'm trying to pull Ashi up ... I'm going next

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_SnowFlake_ IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 10:20am | IP Logged

dhonnobaad appsLOL

be carefull khud mat gir janaROFL

Edited by 00123trisha - 29 June 2011 at 10:21am

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Posted: 29 June 2011 at 10:24am | IP Logged


kaha ho tum

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