~When They Collide~ (AY, TR, SV FF)-Prt76Updt. (Page 53)

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 1:54am | IP Logged
 lizz comment updated=]]

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Meeko IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 2:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanjna4

lizz be happy finally m ediing my comment. this will be shock tym 4 ur life but u r not kess den me u also gave me shock by making yuvi and sany bro and sis but m lil angry on uv since when he fears people and is not accepting sany publicallyAngryAngryAngry... doesn't she deserve respect from whole world and now i just wish that kabeer's behaviour towards sany changes and he respects her and  m liking dere fights alot
and specially that dialogue finally u r at ur place ws awesome

And i love sany being yuvi not acceoting her whole heartedly she is calling him angel...

liz awesome update and u knw very well how to bring twists and turns in the story and really it ws big tym shock

finally IDIOT!! finally u commented...
thanks btw...Hug
so wanted to see urs and ashu's reaction on thisLOL
i love to give shockers.. and i had to do this coz we all have this lil creeps bout her.. as in we knw she is here for kabeer, but we all will love her ore coz of the suhani samrat angle- ashu calls it thatLOL

Edited by elizaa - 06 May 2011 at 3:07am

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Posted: 06 May 2011 at 5:27am | IP Logged
itna chotu...any ways
gud partSmileashi know the truth of uv n sany gud to see that
who will next??

Edited by 00123trisha - 08 May 2011 at 9:02am

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 11:17am | IP Logged

Hey !!! Akshu ... the update was really good .. I just loved the way you used incomplete sentences to show the tumbling feelings inside ClapClap both of their unspoken questions was described beautifully ...TongueTongue loved kabeer - sany too Smile really liked the way you described yuvi's frustration and Ashi's silence ... Tongue although the update was short but the style made it great Wink

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Meeko IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 11:26am | IP Logged
aah!! finally.. am commenting..
uff.. kitna kaam hota hai.. and am doing this so pahlease do write a new part today
wen i was glad ki kuch hoga, tab yuvi was on his attention seeking issues.. accha khaasa ASHI WAS SAYING A SRRY, PAR.. BEWAKOOF!! i wonder hw his pissed offf nature didnt make him kiss her :P
and then he doesnt let her say anything!!LOL
keeps cutting her off wen she opens her mouth!! there again i strt liking him1!!!
and u unveiled the mystery tht she broke up with him coz she saw him kissing someone!!LOL

and then back to sany kabeer!!
now these r the soulmates id always want to read bout.. lol.. i mean these r the kind i sorta like moreLOL
tho i see a bit of ashi uv in them... just a bit tho :P
kya karey, bro sis jo hai :P
kabeer calls uv a douche, and then is scared of sany, and then keeps quite :P
he is just so adorablE!!!!!LOL lmao
and then he laughs it out, making her go so mad tht she falls on him!!!
so love u for this part!! ur a total genius.. no1 cld have done it better!! u just give me the flavour of sany kabeera.. the flavour i wish to see :P erm... taste maybeLOL

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 4:38pm | IP Logged
~~Part 35~~

Yuvi saw Kabir's name flashing on the screen. He handed the phone over to her without meeting her eyes. ''Here, your ''boyfriend'' is on the line.''

Ashi took the phone. ''Kabir?''

''Ashi?'' Kabir paused and looked at Sanaya. ''Can I talk to Yuvi?''

She looked at him, he didn't even move to take the phone back. ''I don't think he wants to talk right now..''

''Ashi, there is something he needs to know..''


''There is something you need to know..''

Sanaya pulled the phone from Kabir and whispered. ''No, don't tell her. He doesn't want to accept me as his sister in front of everyone – that's his choice.'' She blinked. ''Please.''

''But, Sanaya, you have a right..''


Kabir looked at her for a minute, before pulling the phone back.

''What is it, Kabir?'' Ashi was saying.

''Nothing, I'll talk to Yuvi later. Shouldn't you two be at the caves right now?''

''Cave-what? I thought we're going to the temple.'' Ashi yelled. That got Yuvi's attention, and he turned back to look at her.

''Nobody was going to the temple. We were supposed to go to the tourist attractions, remember?''

''But, Tia.. Ranveer..They said that we have to come to the temple?''

''Ashi, slow down, will you? People are staring at us.'' Yuvi moved forward.

''They did it again.'' Ashi's mouth fell open in an O. ''Don't you see? They did all this just to send us two alone here, like they used to do in Maurya..''

''Who?'' Yuvi paused. ''Where are the others?''

''The goddamned caves.'' She put the phone down. ''I'm going to strangle them both, I swear.''

''But, in order to strangle them, we have to go to the caves, and in order to go to the caves, we have to go back down the way we came.'' Yuvi looked back at the cable car.

He turned his attention back to her, who had gone as pale and white as a ghost. He kept a reassuring hand on her shoulder. ''Don't worry, I trust you.''

'''' She looked at him, partly surprised, partly frightened.

''Yeah.'' He paused, looking straight forward. ''I know you can be a dramaqueen, a complete wacko, but what happened in the cable car…'' Another pause. ''You won't do anything like that for attention..I think I know you enough to say that.''

''So, you believe that the ghost exists?''

''No, but, I don't think you're lying, either. There has to be a perfectly rational explanation behind this. And we need to find it.''

''No, YOU need to find it.'' She answered, stressing on the word 'you'. ''I'm gonna back to Tia and Ranveer and enjoy what's left of my vacations and just .. forget whatever's going on with me, with us, with the bhoot aunty since I came here. I am gonna go back to my normal life. You can be a ghosthunter all you want, all by yourself.''

He looked at her, surprised at her outburst.  He opened his mouth to say something, and shut it again. ''Should we go back?''

She nodded.


At the caves

''Sid!'' Sheetal shouted. ''I can't walk anymore, I need you to carry me.''

''I am NOT carrying you.'' Sid kept on walking. ''What do you think I am?''

''My official gadha.'' She grinned. ''Please. My legs hurt.''


She rolled her eyes in frustration while he walked over to the other side of the cave. She got up and walked over to Vrinda. ''Didi..''

''Kya hai, Sheetal?''

''Vo.. Sid..''

''Ab usne kya kiya?'' She turned around, her arms crossed across her chest.

''Vo gum gaya..''

''What? Sheetal, tum theek toh ho na? Tum Sid ko jaanti ho .. hoga vo yahin kahin..''

''No, vo chala gaya.. on the opposite side.'' Sheetal made her most innocent face and pointed to the other side of the cave. ''I swear maine usse jaate hue dekha.''

Vrinda looked at where she was pointing, the passageway looked dark, there were hardly any lanterns around. Knowing Sid, he would so easily walk in a place like that..'coz he's just that weird. She looked back at Sheetal. ''What do you want me to do?''

''Go after him. What if he gets lost?''

Vrinda debated with herself for a minute, before turning away. ''He'll be back..''

''What if he isn't? Didi, go look for him.. bechaara, what if he gets lost? You see how dark it is. And he didn't even take a torch.'' She handed her a torch. ''Here, you have one. Now, please, go after him.''

Vrinda looked at her for a minute, she flashed an innocent smile, she rolled her eyes and walked to where Sid had gone. 

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Meeko IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 4:43pm | IP Logged
woah!! if i knew tht IF i unreserved, ud post so soon, mein toh KAB ka unres kar detiLOL

idiot!! stupid!!
it is nt at all a useless part!!
it was hilarious...
specially ashi telling uv thtnow its ur headache- saya.. the bhoot aunty is ur going to enjoy my vacation with the gang.. u take careof thetension..
she knws hw much this bhoot thingy has scared her.. she cldnt breathe. but then the trust she has in him, like even now.. wen she knew he was there for her, she left alll her freaking tensions on his head.. like she is the only one  who he has to handle.. she knws tht.. lol.. and she is all in for her trip masti..

on the other hand kabeer sanu part was so small.. and sany thinks tht yuvi doesnt want to accept her in front of his friends.. but does she knw wht ashi and yuvi share is much much much more higher thn thtLOL

and SID vrinda!! as u said, u handle this... theyrtoo delicate for me to experiment on.. sanu took care of them properly.. now the torch is in ur hand.. lol..
sheetal is just too much, vrinda ko caves mien ghooma diyaLOL total pagal!! total tiashiLOL
and now she will send sid behind her... haww.. another jungle sceneLOL oh sry, lost in the cave sceneLOL

Edited by elizaa - 13 May 2011 at 5:04pm
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sany thinks that uv will not eccept her n sid shel's gadhaROFL& upar se khow bhi gaya so sadUnhappy

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