Originally posted by: luv_wacko
ok part 7 by lizzie: liz ur mad! n u dnt even hide it which is absolutely awesome ππ hahahahahahahaha loved d last part when yuvi constantly ignores ashi hahahahaha too awesome!!
part 8 by aki!awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww like srsly awwwwwwww...loved d ay moment..both of dem r so cautious ki wat to do or say to each oder..yet so comfy! loved it! πpart 9 by lizzie: arent u my rock! ahhhhhh wonderful part!ashi n her complex web of feelings! its hard to read her bt here she wore her heart on her sleeves! her love.tender care for yuvi( MERA YUVI) finally showed through her panicky state!ps: ye sanaya grrrrrrrrrr i sorta dnt like her n kabir both...pps: guys i noe ur waiting fr my update..i promise ill write n surprise u all one day..just wait for π
Originally posted by: similuvs_ashiuv
lovely update ... nice one ... next update soon ...
Originally posted by: _Akanksha_
res! sanu, i love you. :D i want a similar part for abhisha. π
-EDITED-sanu .. i hate you. aise ache ache parts tum abhisha ke liye kyon nahi likhti? π i'm telling you.. i want a part like that. πahaha, shuru se hi mast tha. .''The great Yuvraj Dev kabhi lift nahi maangega'' π€£ and the way he was leaning against the tree and smirking at her when she couldn't get a lift, aww! π³the whole dirty driver thing reminded me ssooo much of sid-tamanna. π ahahah, our cutie siddy widdy when he appeard out of the back seat and the driver jumped. π you know, i'd have LOVED to see a yuvi like that, poora dramaking. π€£ OMG.. imagine. π€£ but, then again, the whole ''tumhein thand lag rahi hai!'' ''mujhe thand nahi lag rahi'' kinda made up for it! π I mean like..seriously.. ''Meri baat mano TUMHEIN THAND LAG RAHI HAI.'' LOL ! haha, and jab vo nahi chala..acting like he's about to vomit..and he needs to sit in the middle. π€£ and ashi's like. ''tum side pe baithe hue ho already, and tabiyat kharaab ho toh side pe baithte hain.'' π hahahaa, yuvi. <3aww, he picks her up. so TRish ..not that i mind. π and then the bike..woopie hoopie. me lovey, me lovey! continue soon. :D or..i will. π
hey !! sanjana .... the update was really cute ... bechare yuvi ko aur kahan kahan ka king banaoongi ...ππ the names of the places were really funny π€£ Ashi and her creations .... π the way yuvi was getting possessive and concerned for Ashi was really sweet and funny at the same time ... loved the entire truck driver wala sequence ... ππ that was really rocking .... enjoyed a lot reading this update ππ
Originally posted by: luv_wacko
okay so i read part 5 n 6!! yes dnt hit me...im still stuck on part 6!!
sanju: awesomeeeeeeeee loved ur part π@aki: i expected dat dhamaka from u..wen ay both meet! πawesome parts..ill try n read more!
Originally posted by: 00123trisha
hey sana awsome oneπ€
that driver grrrπ‘uv holding ashiπ³awwww
ahhahaahahahahahaha!!!!!!
sanaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamad u r shonaa!!! ahahaah!!kasam se mad.. kya likhi ho? has has ke behaaal ho gayi... i guess i even peeed in my pantsπuv- ab kya?ashu- loser? am i am astrologer?π€£uv will not take lift from ne 1π€£ and then he is like psycho tumhari psychopanti khatam nahi bad gayi hai!!π€£sanu, 4m wer do u get such dialogs? awesome!!Then ashu turns to uv.π²i didnt know tht ashu was ther aswellπlike we discussed bout this scene, it went much much better... loved ur dialogs as well as the way u put it up.. ive been rofling since the time i read the first line.. loved your ideasπtumhein thand lag rahi hai- nahi lag rahi- lag rahi- nahi- haan!!π€£ loved this to the core.. so ay!!finallly done reading this part.. now i can expect another wtc part asap...ashu.. r u liistening?π³
my areaπ
hey thanx alot trishπ€
by d way dese one liners are ur area
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