~When They Collide~ (AY, TR, SV FF)-Prt76Updt. - Page 30

Originally posted by: 00123trisha

@lizz🤗awsome part once again

"par tumne apne dad se nahi ki.. kyunke unke paas hai hi nahi"

"Kya?"

"duh- uh brains yuvi"🤣

DOG & BITCH🤣

uv trying to change the topic😳wow

Originally posted by: elizaa

ahahaa!! lol .. ikr..

trishu.. mein likhte hue nahi hasti, par tum sabke comments read karke bohot hasti hoon!!

thanks haan..

today sana will give a part😳

kyu hum itne funy hai kya..😆

Originally posted by: sanjna4

okay lizz finally aftr so much poking by you m commenting
it ws super-scary update
i dnt knw abt others
br 4 me it ws cz
u knw i hate blood
and blood ko chod kr i can handle abything dat is scary
okay now tum horror movie bna sakti ho
and dat mom se acting wala part was highlight of the update
yr remix ke dialogues yaad aa gaye vo padh ke
bindass tha
and yr i loved it so much
and lizz tumne unka raasta dhoondne k liye jhagda nahi krvaaya pots ki tarah
i loved it and i hav read it sveral tyms by now
specially ending

plz lizzzzzzzzzzzzz
itni badi [unishment mat do and
ya m writing it

Originally posted by: 00123trisha

kyu hum itne funy hai kya..😆

@eliza : OMG !!! 2-2 updates ... !!!! the last part was damn scary ... thanks for making it like that ... the descriptions were gory and the way Ashi attacked Yuvi was superb ...all the skin-shredding and blood, the eye expressions , bleeding nose -- it's just perfect👏 this is the kind I wanted ...the 2nd last part was really cute ... loved the way you described the making of the wax-model .... the pic was just perfect ... the entire flashback sequence was really good ... the scenes before that where Ashi was expressing her anger for yuvi-sany was very nicely written ...
the last part where Ashi thinks yuvi was kidnapping her and actually punched him was hilarious 😆
bechara yuvi 😛 both the parts are very well-written 👏

Originally posted by: elizaa

nahi.. mere updates par tum haste ho, tab mujhe bhi hassi aa jaati hai😆

it's true

Originally posted by: sanjna4

plz lizzzzzzzzzzzzz
itni badi [unishment mat do and
ya m writing it

Originally posted by: BUBLAI

@eliza : OMG !!! 2-2 updates ... !!!! the last part was damn scary ... thanks for making it like that ... the descriptions were gory and the way Ashi attacked Yuvi was superb ...all the skin-shredding and blood, the eye expressions , bleeding nose -- it's just perfect👏 this is the kind I wanted ...the 2nd last part was really cute ... loved the way you described the making of the wax-model .... the pic was just perfect ... the entire flashback sequence was really good ... the scenes before that where Ashi was expressing her anger for yuvi-sany was very nicely written ...
the last part where Ashi thinks yuvi was kidnapping her and actually punched him was hilarious 😆
bechara yuvi 😛 both the parts are very well-written 👏

Originally posted by: 00123trisha

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it's true

mujhe v mere frnds ko hasana bohot achha lagta h..........skool frnds k sath v aisa hi karti hoon specialy jub vo tifin khatey h🤣