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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: _Akanksha_

Thank you, Trish! ðŸ¤—  You keep on updating The Way I Loved You, and join us whenever you want..Just gimme that update everyday! :P

everyday is not possible😭
but i'll try😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: 00123trisha

everyday is not possible😭
but i'll try😃

 
2 days ho gaye... ab toh rehem karke update de do. ðŸ˜­
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG !!! Akanksha ... I am just speechless after reading this .. I know there's no rona-dhona in this part , but the way you expressed ashi's feelings brought tears to my eyes ... this is so beautiful .. you write so well that i always wish it never comes to an end .... each and every word in this part was special and it will always be close to my heart .... loved it a lottttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt ... this update has very close resemblance to my life .. but the difference was that the person never returned
( atleast not yet )
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: BUBLAI

OMG !!! Akanksha ... I am just speechless after reading this .. I know there's no rona-dhona in this part , but the way you expressed ashi's feelings brought tears to my eyes ... this is so beautiful .. you write so well that i always wish it never comes to an end .... each and every word in this part was special and it will always be close to my heart .... loved it a lottttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt ... this update has very close resemblance to my life .. but the difference was that the person never returned

( atleast not yet )

Thank you, Appy! ðŸ¤— Rona dhona and Ashi do not go along .. and if they do, she needs her psycho to comfort her. I won't stretch the parts on as senti though .. AY need to be their wacky crazy self..but yes, there would be a gap of comfort level in the beginning. Aww, I'm so sorry .. I hope this FF doesn't depress you much, you know? 

Liz.. UPDATE. TODAY. ðŸ˜¡

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Posted: 13 years ago
guyyyys
koi to update karo
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: 00123trisha

guyyyys

koi to update karo


haan haan dono.. aaj mein likhooongi...
chill maaro😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: elizaa


haan haan dono.. aaj mein likhooongi...
chill maaro😆

fast fast fast😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 2

"yuvi, sweetie, what is it. Why do u always have to be late? We cant afford to miss this flight. Tumhare intezaar mein sid soya pada hai." She looked at sid with her baby brown eyes and then looked back at yuvi, "dekho kaise moo khol kar so raha hai"

How he loved to see her with her hair left loose. She never did so except for him. She even knew he loved to see her in white, and as today she was accompanying him to meet his world, it had to be white. "hair left loose, white tiny dress, and glowing as ever, what is it sanaya?" he kissed her on her left cheek.

"dude, these are your old techniques, u keep getting late, and I keep forgiving u. but not today. Sid ne toh mujhe bore hi kar diya. And itni der… Try something new yuvi!" she narrowed her eyes.

"my charms work on the whole world except you right?" he nodded his head

"you don't need your charms here, your already mine" she hugged him, "chalo, abhi is ghade ko uthao"

Yuvi shook sid hard to wake him up till sid jumped out of his seat.

"AM COMING BABY, YOUR SO SOFT AND WHITE, AND YOUR BRAKeS ARE AWESOME.  TUM MUJHE INDIA POHCHAOGE!!" he screamed.

"hush sid!! We r at the airport! Kya hua?" asked sanaya.

"huh? Airport?"

"nahi, mantralaya.. tumhein kya laga?"

"heyy bhaggu!!" sid scratched his head as yuvis expressions changed.

"What an amazing dream it was, I was riding on a while unicorn, all the way to ladakh.. and guess what, tum dono ne mujhe wahaan pohochne se pehle utha diya!" he looked at them as they picked up their bags and moved ahead.

"and what about the awesome brakes sid?" asked sanaya.

"duh! His horn.. Unicorn pe jaata toh flight ke wajah se ear blockage ki problem nahi hoti"

"and what about your mind blockage sid?" yuvi kept his arm around sid's shoulder

"udao mera mazaak, aur udao. Its not your fault. You do not know that this legendary creature represents freedom and open-mindedness with power and strength mixed with….."

It took a while for sid to come over his dream. Till then sanaya and yuvi wer busy having their telepathic talks. In a while they were seated in the flight. Yuvi looked outside the window, his dreams were always interspersed with his music and the final rendezvous with ashi. She always remained an ethereal supreme human being for him. His vision of her was based on the beauty of her thoughts, he saw her as the most beautiful girl in the world.  His university had beckoned him, they expected his dedication 24 hours a day. She understood everything. She was always there for him. She stood by him in his thick and thin. What went wrong then. They always knew long distance relatationships don't work, but this was not just another relation, this was about ashi and yuvi.

The training did give him great joy, but he didn't have her to share it with. He never forgot ashi.  Last time he saw her was when she was there to meet him, to take away his pain. Leaving all her important cases, she was there for him. He had lost his dad, and the only one he wanted to see then was her. She looked the prettiest then, he wondered how she looked now.

Flashback*

Ashi (holding him)- "yuvi, no man is bad, its only their deeds. Keeping the deeds aside, your dad was a great father."

Yuvi (resting his head on her chest)- "so does that mean I was a bad son?"

Ashi (fondling him like a baby)- "no baby, more than a good son, you are a great human being, forgive your dad yuvi, just let it go."

Yuvi- "ashi…all that am left with now is mom and you, and I don't want to lose either of you"

Ashi (kissing him on his head)- "aunty is here for you yuvi, and me.. do u think I can ever live without you? And don't worry, bhaggu acche logon ko nahi uthate, main and tumhari mom, tumse pehle marne wale nahi"

"ashi.." he smiled

"yuvi.." she hugged him tight.

Flashback ends*

He smiled at how she consoled him at his weakest moment and a tear trickled down his cheek.

Sanaya had been staring at him for a very log time. She didn't say anything coz she wanted to leave him alone then.. but now she just couldn't wait. She took yuvi's hands in hers and turned his face towards herself.

"yuvi, its ashi right?"

"no" he plainly said.

"what else can make mr, yuvraj dev cry?" she sighed, "yuvi, are u sure u want to do this? I don't think your in the state to face her. It was her fault for gods sake, and it's the past, get over it sweetie, I cant see u hurt."

"it wasn't her fault"

"to what I know, it was.  Uve been in so many relationships after that break-up yuvi, but what makes your heart melt again wen you think about her? Are you sure ull be okay? You really want to do this?"

"yes" he nodded

"am here for you, and am with you sweetie. I know ur over her, trust your self.. your feeling nostalgic just coz your going back to your home town. Once youll be there, ulll face her, things will be okay. And weel make sure tht creep stays away from you" she pressed his hands.

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Posted: 13 years ago
yayyyyyyyyyyyy i got update
sid and his stupidity will alws remain in my toplist
and unicorn ki brakes🤣
yr tum log kya kya soch lete ho
i likd d way she is supporting yuvi

😡😡😡bt hw dare she called ashi creep
she is creep 4 sayin ashi a creep😡😡😡
Edited by sanjna4 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Yay! An update, FINALLY.  Kitna intezaar karvaaya tumne. Aaj finally ek update mila.. and vo bhi itna super duper awesome. ðŸ˜ƒ This was just the right mixture of Siddyness and sentiness. ðŸ˜ƒ

Unicorn!? You couldn't stop yourself from writing about unicorns, COULD YOU!? ðŸ¤£ Sid driving on a unicorn all the way to Ladakh. ðŸ¤£ And Sid saying 'Hey Bhaggu!' .. I don't know how I should react here.. I can imagine Yuvi's reactions, and I feel like laughing at how totally absolutely crazy Sid can be. ðŸ˜†

Unicorn ke brakes...uske HORNS. ðŸ¤£ Haha, I love Sid. <3

Sanu hates Ashi a lot, hun? Well, as far as she knows, Ashi broke up with Yuvi and Yuvi is all upset and broken since then, she deserves to hate her. And I love the cordial relationship she and Yuvi share, just one thing, don't make her in love with him, that'd be too typically predictable. ðŸ˜³