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YEH KAISA PYAAR HAI..chp 22(part 1n2) pg 143n146 - Page 39

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: surbhisachwani

awww nextt is ur parttt dearr ..just writingg it now ...aww u'll experience all these swett momentss ..now i'll update regularlyyy toh aur maza aayegaa πŸ˜ƒ
thankk uuu πŸ˜³

 
no thanx yaaar:D yeaahhh update it in the evening or tommorow:P i cnt w8 haha
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Posted: 12 years ago


HOSTEL 

surbhi was humming her fav song and entered her hostel room and lay flat on the bed.she was in her own world .didnt see rolli and abida in the room seeing her.

surbhi- she blushed and smiled  to herself.😳 πŸ˜³

rolli-ahem ahem ..aheemm ahemmm 

surbhi turned and saw them.

surbhi- abida ...tu aagayi ..patah mai kitna darr gayi thi ..tu mujhe akele kyon chodkar gayi .she got up and hugged her.

abida hugged her back ..abida- awww my shona .tujhe darr laga.

surbhi- haa .tu kyon gayi thi.

rolli- ha tabhi tu itni khush lag rahi hai .gana ga rahi hai .has rahi hai aur kehti hai dar gayi thi .jhootiii 

surbhi-😭 nahin mein sacchi mein bahut dar gayi thi ..she started crying when she remebered that moment.

rolli and abida- aree hum toh mazak kar rahe the surbzz ..dekh chup ho ja naaa 

rolli- surbzz meri jaan chup ho ja ...

abida- dekh tu wapas aa gayi na ..ab plss mat ro .

surbhi stopped crying slowly .

abida tujhe arhaan sir ne theek se chodo na .

surbhi- she heard arhaan and that smile returned on her face. ..haaa unhone theek se pahunchaya ...

rolli- ohh hoo to surbzz arhaan behll ke saath aayi hai ...

surbhi-😳 πŸ˜³

main change kar ke aati hoon ..she ran to the washroom with her blushing face .

 

ARHAAN 'S ROOM 

arhaan ka bhi wahi haal tha ..he too was experiencing the same feelings what surbhi wsa ..

arhaan - he wsa playingg his guitar ..a lovely romantic tune and was smiling to himself .

he took out the payal and kissed it .

arhaan- jis din mein tumhe apne pyaar ka isaahar karunga us din tumhe yeh payal doonga .hamari pehli mulakkat ki nishani ..πŸ˜›

arhaan- MERIII BLUSHINGGG QUEENNN ...😳 πŸ˜³

 

both of them slept with each others thoughts in their mind..

morning

arhaan got up early as he had imp work in the office .he left without having breakfast

surbhi too woke up early ..

she was combing her long hair infront of the mirror and thinking abt arhaan '

abida got up as the lights were on ..

abida- surbzz itni subah subah kahan ja rahi hai ??

surbhi- ajj mujhe office jaldi jaana hai .arhaan ne bulaya hai

abida- ahem ahem kya bolaaa fir se boliyon

surbhi- kya bolu

abida- arhaaannn ..oiye hoyee arhaan sir se arhaan ..dheere dheere arhaan se arry ho jayega

surbhi- dhatt ..kya kya bole ja rahi hai mujhe kuchh samajh nahi aa raha

abida- haaa tujhe thodi na kuch samajh aayegaa ..sab kuchh toh arhaan aur hum sabko samajh aa raha hai 'hainaa

surbhi- aachha mujhe ek baat bata ..kal tu ammar sir ke saath aayi thi naa ..πŸ˜‰

abida- haa ..to kya hua

surbhi- main kaha ki kuchh hua hai 'main to bas aise hi pooch rahi thi '.lekin abi woh to bahut khadoos haina ..fir

abida- haa ..par ab unhone kaha ki mein drop kar deta hoon toh mana karma achha nahi lagta naa '.

Surbhi- mana karna accha nahi lagta ya tera mana karne ka man nahi kara ..πŸ˜‰

Abida- who wohh 'she stammered '..hum toh arhaan sir ki baat kar rahe the ..tu ammar sir ko beech mein kyun le aayi ..aur tujhe toffice ke liye der ho rahi hai naa ..tu jaaa

Surbhi- acchaaa ..kuchh toh ho gaya hai meri abii ko

Abida- meri surbhi ko toh bahutt kuchh hua haii .πŸ˜‰

Surbhi- main ja rahii hoon ..i m getting late .she didn't wanted to show her blushing face

Abida- byeee

She remembered abt ammar .the way he held her at her waist and helped her claim the stairs .held her hand and took her the car .prevented her from falling .

Woh itne bhi khaddos nahi hai .she spoke to herself .i like him ..she slightly hit her forehead and went to freshen up .

 

Arhaan's cabin

Arhaan- surbhi abhi tak kyon nahi aayi hai .he kept his cabin's door open to have a direct look at her seat.

He called her with his blackberry.

Surbhi was in the rickshaw ..she picked up the phone.it was an unkown no.

Surbhi- hello

Arhaan- hello

Arhaan's voice made her jump .her heart skipped a beat.

Arhaan- hello ..surbhi r u dere

Surbhi- yes sir

Arhaan- tum abhi tak office nahi aayi.   Surbhi- I m coming sir I m on my way.

Arhaan- okk 'come fast ..mein intezaar kar raha hoon.

Surbhi- yes sir .arhaan's words made her blush .

They didn't cut the line .but none spoke 'after 5 mins.

Surbhi- sir mein phone cut kar do 'she asked cutely

Arhaan- nahi ..mera matlab haa 'rukoo..save my no.this is my mobile no.

Surbhi- ji sir .

She cut the lineand saved his no.

She reached the office.she went to her seat and quickly opened her laptop and started doing her work

Arhaan saw her and was mesmerized by her beauty.her hair were stil wet and had curls.she looked refreshing .no make up .simple natural beauty

She started working on her laptop.didnt realize that arhaan was watching her.

While working strands of long hair kept falling on her face and troubled her.she took out banana clip and tied them up.

Arhaan- he smiled looking at her cute troubled face'.main tumhe kabhi bhi tumhare baal bandhne nahi doonga '..i lub ur long staright hair.πŸ˜› He spoke to himself.

It had been almost 15 miins

Arhaan was busy gazing surbhi.

Surbhi- abhi tak arhaan sir ne bulaya kyon nahi.she thought in her mind.

Finally arhaan sent a peon to call her.

Peon- surbhi ma'am apko arhaan sir ne bulaya hai.

Surbhi- arhaan sir ne.main abhi aati hoon.

Surbhi went and opened his cabin.

Both looked up at each other.surbhiarhaan got akind of satisfactionon seeing each other.it seemed as if ages had passed and they both didn't look at each other.

She was gonaa step in when the receptioninst called surbhi.

Surbhi- aa rahi hoon.

Arhaan- πŸ˜•come soon.

It was rolli's call.

Surbhi- hello .

Rolli- hello surbzz ..mai tujhe lene aarahi hoon ..i wana go to the mall with u .patah abi ka b'day aana wala hai aur humne kuchh tyaari bhi nahi ki hai.

Surbhi- par main abhi office main hoon .main kaise aa sakti hoon.

Roli- surbzz ek din ka off le naa plss ..accha mai ab rakh rahi hoon .i have to get ready.

Surbhi- par rolli .meri 'the phone line got cut.

Surbhi went back to arhaan's cabin.

Surbhi- may I come in sir.

Arhaan-yes πŸ˜ƒ.he was waiting for her eagerly.

Surbhi- main sir se kaise kahoon ki mujhe jaana hai.

Surbhi- sir who who.

Arhaan-kya hua.

Surbhi- sir mujhe aaj ka off chahiye.i have to go somewhere.

Arhaan- what.par abhi toh tum aayi ho ''his face agin became sad.πŸ˜”

Surbhi- yes sir .par abhi meri frnd ka phona aaya tha and I have to go .

Arhaan- he couldn't deny to surbhi's innocent plss and said yes.

Arhaan didn't said anything but it was evident from his face that he was very sad.

Surbhi slowly went .when she reached the door she looked back to have a look at his face.

She didn't wanted to go but had to.

 

In abt half anhour roli reached the office and they both went to the mall.

Afternoon .

Abida- while working she got confused somewhere.

Ab main kisse poncho .surbzz bhi nahi hai.

Abida- ammar sir se poonchu 'nahi nahi who toh mana hi kardenge'

Abida- par who itne bhi kadoos nahi hai.ek baar try kerke dekhti hoon'she slowly got up and went to his cabin limping .

Abida- may I come in.

Ammar- yes .he looked up and saw her.

Abida cme in .ammar- u shouldnt have come .ur foot is stil not fine.

Abida- I m fine sir.she took her seat.

Ammar- yes tell .

Abida- sir mujhe iss acc mein kuchh problem hai.

Ammar got up from his seat and went to her seat and stood behind her.

The words were very small .to have a clear view of the acc ammar bent down a bit such that his face was very close to abida's right cheek ..

His masculine fragrance intoxicated her .the same was with ammar .

He was looking at the acc but his more attention was towards abida's increased heartbeat.

Ammar-pen ..he asked her for a pen.

Abida- no reply ..she was busy looking at his face.they were only a few inches apart.

Ammar- abida can I have the pen.

Abida- ohh yeah suree.she handed him the pen.he quickly made some changes and explained her'

Abida- thank u sir.

Ammar- welcome .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edited by surbhisachwani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOWOOO AWSOME WRTTIEN SUBHIII WELLDONE SIS LOVE TO READ & 
ENJOY MUCH MCUHπŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
arhaan called you blushing quin😳
very nice πŸ‘β­οΈlovely sweety
keep it up πŸ˜›πŸ˜ƒ
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Edited by Mitaly.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
HIii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! finally u updated after like wat so many years πŸ€” lol sorry i no i exxaggeratedd a little 2 much there but u dnt no how eagerly i was waiting πŸ˜’.. lekin wo kehte hai na intezaar ka phal meetha hota hai so samjho wahi hua πŸ˜† aaj ka part OMG wooh it was so rockingg... now definiely LOVE IS IN THE AIRRR!!!!!!! β˜ΊοΈ story bahut acchi tareeke se chal rahi hai & i jus luv luv luv ittt πŸ˜›... ok now plzzz jaldi se update karna meri blushing queen warna warna 😲 main aakar blush chura lungi lol (i no lame and stupid joke, but i cudnt come up with anything sorry πŸ˜•) ok enough of my bak bak & its time for u to get 2 work and write the rest of the part and update okkk... Thank uuu πŸ˜Š... & btw my name is shagufta πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice work... well dne waiting fr d next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Baby... Me back to ur FF. I hav read ur updates & will comment ASAP.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww LUVLY LUVLYYY:D surbhi i want to do sumthing special for uuur FF:D in each part i will add sumthinggg, let me do it n i will post it here for u:P
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: KriYa_life

Baby... Me back to ur FF. I hav read ur updates & will comment ASAP.

awww aajjao aajaoo jii ..missedd uuu πŸ€—
okkiee will wait for ur wonderfull commentsss😳
Edited by surbhisachwani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Abida0201

awww LUVLY LUVLYYY:D surbhi i want to do sumthing special for uuur FF:D in each part i will add sumthinggg, let me do it n i will post it here for u:P

thankkuuu ..muahhh ..ur b'day is comingg nextt :) :) πŸ˜›
awww sacchiii ..thankk uuu thankkuuu...u cann add jii ..its my and ur FF πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³
waitingg forr ittt πŸ˜› πŸ˜³ πŸ˜›