wow... another wonderful ff i read in one go!!! i loved dadi's revenge and now this one too...
in both the ff's i felt very bad for rajveer... poor thing almost had a stroke after seeing arjun and the broken bed 😆 i wish the cv's would've followed this storyline!
love your writing... please write more... there are a few situations where i felt the story could've been better... i would love to read if you can write on these lines too:
1) the holi scene... instead of the dream sequence arohi should've manoed arjun in her own unique way
2)the super hot promo... well everyone was waiting for an episode or events based on that promo but it never happened :(((
3) jay's wedding... there could've been some situations where arohi-arjun are forced to almost confess their feelings for each other
4) arohi's bday party... instead of having a bday party somehow arjun manages to crash the ahluwalia party with dadi, rashi romit and raj and they celebrate her bday together
Edited by cherry227 - 12 years ago
