HAILA NADIA!!!!! 😲 😃 ☺️
I
was soooo sure if you wrote something it'd be fab, but OMG.. thinking
you would be merely "fab" is somewhat an insult cos woman... your
writing is electrifying!!! like Oh, Em, Geeeeeeeeee how HOT can they
beeeeeeee? 😆
UFF... UFFF... UFFFFFFF!!! ☺️
those were like the YUMMIEST scenes EVAH!! How I wish they could
actually take place / be performed in the show by that smokin' pair!!
ALL THREE OS's are just mmm mmm mmmmm!! ☺️ ☺️ Now you can't shy away from creating your FULL version of and OS with that naughty-mehndi on Geet's hands!!! 😈 😆 😆
"Scene 3" had to be my favourite. Firstly, 👏 👏 👏
hayyyye written amazingly!! secondy, damnnnn Maan is so sexy when he's
all naughty like that. I loved how you had Dadi catch them
and with Geet's lipstick marks on his lips ahahahahhaha!! LOVED it!!!
Whaoooo you are SO brilliant at depicting moments!! Fantastic way of
bringing the whole "payal" idea - the little SR flashback was SO AWESOME
=D, then one of my fav lines / part where Maan "proudly, mentally pats
himself" for gifting the payals to her in the first place hahaha. SO
WONDERFULLY written, smart, funny so damn HOT HOT H. O. T! oh gosh, *I bow to
thee Nadzeee* 😛
And hayye, I'm always like almost dead when it comes to a semi-naked
Maan and ESP when exercising / just out the shower 😳 😆. So of course I
was clinging to every word of "Scene 1" where the image of Maan doing
his Ti-Chi, and then teasing Geet like that..?? HAWWW! He's evil in
sucha cute way!! 😆 LOVED it!! Sweaty Sweaty Sexy Sexy MMMMMMM MMMM
MMMMM Maan Singh Khurana!! FLAWLESS depiction!
Now.. coming to the delicious pallu scene... "Scene 2".. yaar, whatta brilliant
idea. Geet ke haanton me mendhi = helpless Geet having no choice but to
submit to Maan's demands!! YAY!! 🥳 I actually thought you'd have him
fix it, but ohhh my... I sooooo preferred what you had him DO instead... ☺️ UFFFF super sexyyy!!! The entire description, the flow of it... the
feelings and actions of them both... wowzahhh!!!!
LOVE THEM ALLL!! I can't wait for you to update with more scenes!!I D-MAAAN-d More!! Am soooo looking forward to LOTS more from you!!! 🤗
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