MNFF..ARDHANGNI.CH:22NOTE N LINK ON PG 148 - Page 31

Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti

Nice upd8

loved it

thnks a loot 😃

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

superb update fiza........mindblowing

luved the samrat n nupur convo....n den eid vala part...luved mayank when he said masha-allah soooo cute

n the last part was gud..luved mayank possessiveness

cont soon dear n happy valentine day

thnks dear

Originally posted by: zarfishan1983

nice update

thx alot for the pm

thnks dear....yaar y india tv is so quite theses days.....

edited my comment
do check it
love ya

Originally posted by: -Faria-

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Wah wah Fiza - tu gin kar rakha kya
main bhul gayi lekin tu nehi bhli.LOL
waise thanx me a lot for reminding abt it..



accha sun ab tere update kaisa tha
waise it was not good update

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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww- aise muh maat banao




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i m telling u the truth - sacchi it was not a good update

becoz it was fantabulous update - totally awesome
Haye sami- he is really very sweet person

i loved sanu convo- and icecram wala part was just WOW

Nad my Mayu- BY GOD he was so possessive yaar-hona he chaiye after all he is our hero mayank.
accha lesson diya Mayu us dusht logo ko

overall it was xcellent update jaanu
simply beautiful.........

lekin plz reveal their past soon= why myaank is suffering frm mental disorder
yaar jaldi kar na- itna satata kyun hai

aur ha jaldi jaldi update kar

take care
 

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago

 

Hey Guys

 

Sorry I know I m tooo late…..woh tu mjhy MAHA ny yaad dilaya warna mein bhool gai thi..tht it has been more thn 10 days I have updated

 

Though I planned it day before yesterday but my net n my health bth didn't allowed me..

 

Have rplyd to u all

 

This time update will b quicker. if evry thing will b fine…

 

N my dear writers..whom I read…if I have reserved sumwhere n have forget pls tell me…I know I m being terribly late in commenting …though im reading them regularly ….as most of the time I do tht at office…so forget to coment…pls spare me for tht….

 

N FARIA n MAHA …dnt worry im better now..wil recover soon.with ur wishes…..cant stay away from u all

 

Thnks for ur appreciation ..

 

Luv fiza

 

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago

Chapter:8

 

Moving fast , colliding and throwing any1 cuming his way'he was moving towards his hostel room..she was trying to catch his pace shouting his name'.mayank stop'rukhoo..baat tu sunoo'but he was in no mood to understand anything '.not even himself

 

Bhashh'opening the room ..he went inside and splashed his face with sum water to cool himself down'.nupur followed him inside

 

Nupur: tumhara deemagh karab hogaya hai'kyun tamasha bana rahy thy'.

Mayank: oh really '..i am soo sorry'I didn't knew'..wht you were enjoying his touch

Nupur: mayank'.tum pagal hogay ho

Mayank: haan tu..aur tum 'wasy tu buhat strong banti hoo..us ko jawab nhi day sakti thi

Nupur: tum mjhy muqa daytay tu mein dayti na'.hosh layny diya tum ny kisi koo

Mayank: jo hosh mein na hoon..us ko hosh mein asay hi laya jata hai'

 

He move his sleeves up n found a deep wound there''

 

Nupur: yaha bhi hain char pach'.shakal kharab kerli '.idiot 'jao room mein

Mayank: mein thik hoon

Nupur: dkh mayank'.mjhy is waqt tujh per buhat khussa araha hai'.agar apni jaan pyari hai tu ..chup chap ja ker room mein ..just sit down'n no arguments

 

She took out the fist aid box and went to him'.she dipped cotton in antiseptic'n start cleaning his wounds on forehead'.

Mayank: ahh..it pain madam..

Nupur: acha ..really..jab lar rahy thy tab nhi socha ap ny'..chup kero'let me clean'else'.mein is se bhi zayada lagao gi

Mayank: zalim aurat

Nupur: pointing her finger'.aurrat nhi hoon mein'aur pls yeah larkiyoon ke tarha maat chilaao'.

Mayank: mein larkiyoon ke tarah nhi chillata ..acha'aur mard ko bhi dard hota hai'.

She placed n badage on his forehead..

 

Nupur: acha'.really'hath doo

Mayank: choro mein kerlo ga'

Nupur: mein ker rahin hoon tu itna ooh 'aaah ,'ouch ker rahy hoo..khud khabi ker paao gay

 

Mayank: he smiled n gave his hand'.with other he removes strands of her hair to look at her forehead'.to wch she took a back

Nupur: kya hai

Mayank: lagi tu nhi'dkhny dooo

Nupur: nhi lagi ..itni nazuk nhi hoon mein'

Mayank: sorry.. he said cutly n sweetly'.pointing his finger '.but nt for wht I did with adi'samjhi

 

Nupur: uffu buhat ziddi hoo

Mayank: so tu hoon'ouch Nupur'aram se nhi ker sakti kya

Nupur: nhi..he put the cooton more deep'.yeah loo

Myank: ahhh..nupur..he hit her

Nupur: she laughed 'sorry sorry'.coling it with her breath'.per bilkul  seedha  rahoo'.

Mayank: aur kitna seedha rahoon'kya backbone k jaga pillar lagalo'arm se ker dkh

Nupur: acha na..kis ny kaha tha itna maro us ko

Mayank: tujhy us ki itni fikar kyun horahi hai

Nupur: kyun tu jealous horah hai

Myanak: Nupur'don't insult me..woh is se bhi zayada deserve kert tha'woh tu sami beech mein agaya

Nupur: mayank'lari mein sir ek hi nhi injured hota ..dosra bhi hota hai

Mayank: I don't care

Nupur: I do'.

Mayank: acha zayada emotional maat hoo'.apna kam continue kero 'warna nurse k fees nhi hooga'.ouchhh'

Nupur: aur bool'

 

 

Samrat was standing at the door leaning at its border'smiling n enjoying the sight infront of him

They fight, they care'together they forget everything '..including how much they are linked to each other

 

Samrat'pov

 

Bhai today I need to talk to u 'either ur blind'or u don't want to see this'but I can see ths in ur eyes, ur talks'in every act of urs..either it ur love., anger..or care'

 

Nupur: ok 'hogaya..me leaving'yeah loo..mard ko daard hota haina'tu lay layna

 

Mayank: thnk bye

Nupur: u r nt at all welcum..ths act of urs'...if will be repeated. I tell u'' ur dead

Mayank: if that act of any1 is repeated..he'll be dead'sur on u

Nupur: mayank'tera deemagh karab hogaya hai kya'tu kuch as nhi keray ga

Myanak: I'll try

 

Samrat: uffu ..tu dodno'nupurs tum jao'aj mjhy in se doo doo hath kerna hai'bye

Nupur: bye'

 

 

Mayank: ab tera lecture nhi suna mjhy

Samrat: sun lo yeah lecture nhi genral knowledge ha

 

Mayank: pls'don't try to make me understand that I was wrong

Sasmarat: ok '.i won't 'but why u did it..

Mayak: wht'.wht do u mean

Samrat: simple 'y u did tht with him

Mayank: as if u don't know

Samrat: no..i couldn't find any reason'to go tht much

Mayank: wht'wht did u said'"tht much"'he was ms behaving with her

Samrat: so y u didn't beat him yesterday'whn a gril slaped him'.because of trying to get intimate with her'at tht moment u shud have beaten him to death'.y '.

 

He was quite

 

Y bhai'.y anything related to Nupur is ur own business

 

Mayank: she is my frnd

Samrat: sheena is also ur frnd'did u evr acting like tht for her

Mayank: tu kahna kya chahta hai'saaf saaf bool'. Hs anger was boiling

Smarat: oki'if u really want to hear it than listen'.mr mayank sharma 'if u haven't realize..u love her

 

Myanak: shut up smarat'.if u cant see purity in relationship don't spoil it'

 

Samrat: wht did u said'I am spoiling it..i am nt ..i m just trying to tell u wht ur feeling inside..before u spoil ur relationship'...aur jab na tumahray pass dosti hoo na pyar'

Acha chalo maan liya''aj jo tum ny kiya woh tumhara farz tha''.but subha us ko dkh ker tumhar cheray per jo smile thi woh khushi kyun feel ki..us k as pass..us k sath ..us k kareeb tum ko koi kyun nhi bardsht..mein bhi nhi

 

Mayank: smarat asa kuch nhi hai''samjha tu'.tu her chees ko exaggerate ker raha hai'...tere deemgh karab hogay hai'..tu ny mjhy khabi kis k sath asay dekh nhi islyan kah raha hai

 

Samrat: yeahi tu mein kah raha hoon'jasa tum us k pass ho asay kis k sath nhi hoo'kyunn'

Mein galat nhi bulkul sahi dkh raha hoon..tum samhaj nhi rahy hoo na samhaj na chah rahy hoo''do din..do din k lyan gait hi na woh'.per tum se ek min nhi raha ja  rha tha..us k elwa tum ko kis ke zarrorat kyun mahsoos nhi hoti'.us k pass rehaty tu itna content kyun feel kertay hoo bhi'kyun nhi maantay'.

 

Mayank: BUS'.ASYA KUCH NHI HAI..SAMHJAY'mein Is rishty mein koi milawat nhi ker raha ha'

Samarat: uufff'.yeah milawat nhi hai'.dosti se bhi zayada pure hai yeah..pyar galat nhi hota bhai

 

Mayank: MEIN US SE PYAR NHI KERTA'GOT IT

 

 

Samrat: thik hai tu proof it'4 days'..just 4 days'.us se door raho'per us k samany'.us ki shakl tu dkho..per n tu us se zyada baat kero gay'na us k sath time spend kero gay'.aur phir life wasay hi enjoy kero'yeah jo yaha  'tapping his heart'..yaha itni content feel hain na..us ko us ky bhagir feel ker k dkho..agar tu jeeaty tu mein khud tum se maafi mango ga'aur maa ke kasam khabi bhi asa nhi kaho ga'per agar mein jeeta tu tum is feeling se bhago gay nhi but us ko bhi is baat ka ehass kero gay

 

So manzoor hai

 

Mayank: thik ..he said n left his room in boiling anger..

 

Samrat: 4 days..tum do ghnaaty nhi rah sakty '..thora drama kerna paray ga Nupur k as pass bhi'.but ek teer se doo shikar hojay gay'ya tu us se door janay ke khoshish kero gay'wah us per is baat k effect bhi dkh jay ga'..i am smart na'.

 

So shahrukh kya 6 din mein larki in keray ga'yaha 4 days aur larki aur larka dono  in'..

 

 

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago

Get well soon dear.......😊

thnks for updating .........

it was gr8 update yar........i love the argment between mayank and nupur......😊
the way nupur teasing him gain and again during his bandage i just loved it........😃
samii was also jhakkas.....😉......
now the real story start.........😛 pls update soon nxt part...eagerly w8ing for tht part..........

love ya......




Edited by drmaha - 13 years ago

reserved🤣

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dekho is bar jaldi unres kar diya maine😳
hayee you know when i saw you reserved i was dancing
mujhe yea FF itna pasand hai ki mai bata nahi sakti😆
ok now back to the update

it was awesomest and superest update👏
hayye...uo dressing wala part kitna sona tha😍
nupur kitni lucky hai na...😳
i love you smarat..!!!!!!😃
itna acha kaam aaj tak kisi samrat ne nahi kiya hoga😉
hayee...4 din me... 4 din me sab fultu fine hojayega😳
i just loved the last line

So shahrukh kya 6 din mein larki in keray ga…yaha 4 days aur larki aur larka dono  in
🤣🤣🤣
kya line thi by god😆
pls continue soon😳

love
tasfia

Edited by tasfia123 - 13 years ago

Edit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fizaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
update parne ki baad main apni apko rokh nehi payi
thats why i m unreserving it
Haye - what a beautiful update
totally jhakkas- nups was so caring
and she was scolding my mayu
and mayu was too stubborn, sadu type- but loved thier bonding

Hai ALLAH- samiiiiiiiiiiiiii---------- mujhe sam par bahut pyar arhai hai
he said that mayank loves nups
bur sadu maynk - he was not ready to accept it
ye sadu he reh jayega
but sami chalanged him and gave him a condition to avoid only for 4 days
heheheheehe - iloved it
ab maza ayega.


fizu the update was superb
loved it a lot

keep it up

but now no update for 1 week- puri tarase rest karo
agar bimar par jaogi pher baki update kaun karega.
so take rtoo much stress- just chill pill
take care
Edited by -Faria- - 13 years ago