MNFF..ARDHANGNI.CH:22NOTE N LINK ON PG 148 - Page 24

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

hey fiza.......sorry 4 replying late.

just finished ur updates................it was awesome

a perfect combo writing.........with shocking present n happy past.

mayur r really very adorable o ur ff.

they r awesome..........

love them

update soon.

thanks for d pm.                              

its ok dear

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

chp 5-

 

gr8 job as usual

 

thnku

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Hey fiza sorry dear i ws busy with my studies so cudnt come here and comment...
Now just read the last 3 parts...Superb parts...The story is going into suspense...Im enjoying this...Admiring their friendship...Want to know what happened with mayank also the reason of their separation...And why they think friends cant be lover...This isnt a crime that one should be punished...Even i think its wonderful to get ur best friend as ur lover...
And u dnt need to worry....Its not boring nor melodramatic...Just reveal the past soon...Its going great...

its ok dear..i understand

Originally posted by: zarfishan1983

very nice update

thx alot for the pm

thanks dear

Hello guys

I am back..sorry for being late…

 

Rplyd to u all..can check

Thnks for ur love at previous one..i hope u like ths one as it has nthing much than a character introduced…sorry  wasn't feeling like writing

 

Luv ya

Fiza

 

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago

Chapter 5B

 

 

 

Nupur: so im going 'woh bhi delhi

Mayank: thts a gr8 news'mein arm se enjoy kero ga

Nupur: han tu mein kaun sa tmhari yaad mein deawani hojao gi

Mayank: wasay kitny dino k lyan hai yeah shanti

Nupur: ur bad luck 'only for two days

Mayank: dramtically'nhi''..oyee'it means ur nt here on weekend'.nt fair ms bhushan..u always did ths at ur treat'..kanjoos

Nupur: hello..stupid..mein ny koi jan bhooj ker nhi kiya acha'dad k kam hai tu mein kya kero'..aur mein masi se bhi mil lo gi..gr8 na

Mayank: ya ..gr8'tum jao kal'I am leaving ..need to have sum peace..bye n take care

Nupur: I'll

 He was leaving when

 

Nupur: mayank

Mayank: he turned around..n she came fwd

Nupur: huuged him'.dnt miss me tht much'.

 

He hugged her tight'dnt worry I'll go with priya on date to have sum fun'

Nupur: ya u n fun'mr stupid sharma'.i know u cant do anything wrong'.

Mayank: ur underestimating me

Nupur: no'.i always estimate u perfectly

 

 

At morning:

 

She went to delhi n he gets ready to leave for college

 

Picking up his bag..he took his cell n dialed a number..he do everyday

 

Mayank: hello..i m leaving ..get ready'will pick u up in 15 mins

 

Nupur: sleepy voice'stupid'.mjhy tu kya delhi laynay arha hai

Mayank: he hits hs head with hs hand..ufff'sorry yarr..i forget'bye

Nupur: bye

Mayank: acha sun'tu delhi pohach gai aur mjhy bataya bhi nhi

Nupur: ullu 'im on the way'..ab mjhy sonay day..tu ja apni priya aur sheena k sath flirt ker

Mayank: he smiled'.bye dear

Nupur: pagal

 

He went to college n  enter the class..place himself on hs routine place

 

Class strted n he was getting bored like anything..he look around , start taping the bench

Maynk: yeah lecture itna boring kyun hai'

Beep beep

 

Nupur: reached safely

Mayank: cool

 

Mayank: hey '..i am getting bored

 

Nupur:  so wht shud I do

Maynk: talk??

Nupur: I am at masi house

Mayank: n I am at devils house

Nupur: talk with sheena

Mayank: na baba na'.aj tu woh poray treeqay se meri izaat ke peechay pari thi

Nupur: kyun??

Mayank: subha collloge enter hotay he..i got a wink n fling kiss

Nupur: n u must be☺️

Mayank: very funny

Nupur: wht so funny 'mard ban 'be a man yaar 'ek larki se daar gaya..shame on u sharma

Mayank: woh larki nhi..musbiat hai

Nupur: tu kis ny kaha tha us ky sath flirt kero

Mayank: deemag karab hogaya tha mera''aj kahti hai..mom n dad are going out of town'lets have combine studies at evening

Nupur: wht

Mayank: is kay sath combine studies at evening'.woh bhi akelay 'soch'tu kaha hai yaar

Nupur: kyun mein tera body gard hoon

Mayank: nhi tu mera support hai

Nupur: han mein tu BIRLA WhiTE cement hoon na

Mayank: lol'array I have a gr8 news

Nupur: wht??...sheena is a  lesbian 

Nupur: shut up'I am straight u doubt

Mayank: ofcorce ido'itna handsum hunk..tmhary sath 24/7 rahta hai'aur tum ko kuch bhi nhi hota'

Nupur: buhat kuch hota tumhain nhi batay khabi bs

Mayank: stop flirting with me

Nupur: u started it..

Mayank: tu mjhy news batanay day gi

Nupur: tu class lay raha hai ya DOOr darsan per commentary ker rah hai

Mayank: tu sunay gi ya 'news repertory ke tarha khud hi bolya gi

Nupur: tu bolay ga..ya daily soap ke trah is FF ko kheechay ga..

Mayan: samrat is cuming

Nupur: gr8 ..per woh tu her mth ata hai'

Mayank: han baa'but is daafa'he is gonna live with me'woh apni studies yahin complete keray ga..gr8 na

Nupur: thts gr8..oye fresher'.raging ho gi us ki zaroor '

 

He hits head with his hand in disbleive..

Teacher: mayank wht happen

Mayank: nthng ma'am..woh macher tha'u continue'.whipere n let me continue too

Mayank: tjhy raging ke pari hai'mera bhai arha hai'

Nupur: handsum hai

Mayank: chota hai tjhy se

Nupur: tu kya hua'evrythng is fair in love n war

Mayank: n ths is war'dnt u dare flirt with my brother

 

Bell rung

 

Mayank: oye clas over bye

Nupur: buhat he ***** hai tu'jab zarrorat hoi tu meri yaaad aai aur ab bye

Mayank/; han tu..pardosi ko bilao'wht r frnds for'.

But ..ill call u at night

 

Nupur: noo'dnt'I'll call u myself if got time

Mayank: k..tc

Nupur: tc

 

 

He took hs bag n left outside'to see a sight wch brought a huge smile on hs face

 

Mayank: sami..

 

Samrat '..a cool, simple, straight fwd boy , know wht he wants n gets wht he wants'. Loves hs brother like anything n knows very well tht h is the biggest weakness of his brother'

 

Samrat: bro'he run towards him n hugged him tight..he too hugd him 'ruffling his hair

Kya yaar bro hair style tu kharab na kero

Mayank: he laughed'.sorry baba'so tu kab aaya 'abhi

Samrat: nhi thori dair hogai'pata chala ap ki class horahi hai tu ' I thought of waiting here'

 

Mayank: cool'u must b tired ..i'll show u to hostel'.. tu rest ker

Samrat: bro'I m fine yaar..chalo I want to meet ur frnds..n im hungry too

Mayank: yaar Nupur is out of time 'so u cant meet my gang

Samrat: Nupur is out na'baki looog

Mayank: baki log??....my gang consist of me n Nupur .

Samrat: bus'

Mayank: han bus'

Sarat: oki'weird u people have soo much fun alone

Mayank: sami'vr together'how cum v can be alone'

Aaa..tujhy colloge dkho'.

Sheena: ohh mine'for a change..mayank sharma'without Nupur with sum one else

Mayank: aah baghvan 'aj tu yeah hath dhoo ker meray peechay pari hai

..ya'sweety'meet my brother..samrat

She is sheena

Sheena: I must ask ur mom '.wht she ate to give birth to such handsum boys'

Samrat n mayank looked at each other in disbelieve

Samrat: y ru expecting

Mayank looked at sami n burst into laughter

Samrat: she use to recite geeta everyday'.i think u shud try'.may be will help u at beauty n brains bth

Sheena: u sems to b nupurs brother more than My handsum's'bye sweety ..cya..she said to mayank

Samrat: MY handsome..bro'tum ko is k elawa koi nhi mil

Mayank: oye break laga'asa kuch nhi hai..meray pass ankhain bhi hai aur deemagh bhi

Chal..tu yaha se'.

 

Adi: hey mayank'aj tu without Nupur

Mayank: he gets irriated..han she is out of town

Adi: oh..ok..i wonder tum dodno elag hogay kya

 

Samrat: bhai'im getting confuse'.tu aur Nupur

Mayank: dekh sami'.deemagh na kharab ker'.pagal hogay hai kya

 

Priya: dramically'yeah mein kya dekh rahin hoon..is moment ke tu picture honi chaiy'Mayank sharma'nupur bhushan k bagir'.ohh mine

 

Mayank: KYUN'KOi problem hain'masla kiya hai'.

 

Priya: ghusa kyun horahy ho I was just joking yaar

 

Samrat : he looked at him questioning

 

Mayank: ab tu mjhy kyun asay dkh raha hai'.kal aajay gi woh khud mil lay na'deemag kharab kerdiya hai

 

Samrat: he laughed'mein ny kya kaha bro'sab kah rahy hai

Mayank: in sab k deemagh karab hai'jaha ek larka aur larki dekhy shooro

 

Samrat: jaha aag hoti hai wahin se dhooaa uth ta hai

Mayank: tjhy agg ban ker dhuaay mein urna hai'irritated

Samrat: acha na'naraz mat ho'chalo mjhy college dkho aur phir room bhi

 

At night:

 

Samrat: bhai its enough'I can't concentrated on studies..tum phne kyun nhi utha rahy ho'

 

Mayank: tjhy kis ny kaha hai k 'first day se studies shooro ker'ignore ker us phone ko

Samrat: bhai ..i need to catch thinks'y r u nt picking up phne'it 59 th call

Mayank: I don't care

Samrat: uff..im picking it up'.he picked it up n put it on speaker

 

Nupur:  hello..kya masal hai'phone kyun nhi utha rahy hoo ..deemagh karab hogay hai kya

Mayank: wht the hell'tu ny speaker per dal diya phne'sami tjhy tu mein chooro ga nhi'aur tum meri marzi mera phone hai uthao na uthao

 

Nupur: hey sam..tum aggay ..how was ur day

Samrat: he thanks'it was gud'bhai k haan acha nhi tha

Mayank: smarat

Nupur: han aur tum'tum ko pata hai na masi kasi hain..un k gahr agar mein din 5 daafa kisi se phone per baat kero gi tu'woh paki yeahin meri shadi fix kerday gi'.

Samrat: nhi 'phr bhai k kya hoga

Mayank: smarat tu kyun apni moot k dwat day raha hai'.

Han tu kam se kam insane ek sms kerday ta hai'itni zur se chila ker'phne achanj disconnect n than switched off'.had hai

 

Samrat: bulkily had hai'he was so worried'priya even was scolded'

Nupur: kasm se priya was scolded'..i missed it '..

Sorry yaar'battery chali gai thi

Samrat: she is sorry bro'technical problem'battery se naraz ho jao'.

Mayank: I don't care

Samrat: he is lying he does'

Mayank: shut up sami

Nupur: stop acting stupid sharma

Samarat: excuse me wch sharam plz clarify

Nupur: yea tu kaha se laya hai is ko'I mean sami ko

Mayank: hello nobody talks to my brother like tht

Nupur: I doo'kya kerlay ga

Samrat: common bro show her

Mayank: yeah'n he cuts the phone

 

Nupur: mayankkkk'clam down Nupur clam down

 

Samrat : lol'u bth are too gud bro

Mayank gave him n angry look n he put his finger on lips'

 

Beep beep(sms chat)

 

Nupur: soory na ..😕

Mayank: I don't need it 😡

Nupur: mayank stop acting like a child..mein ya kero battery chali gait hi😕

Mayank: shut up 😡

Nupur: soryy na 😭

Mayank:

 

 

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago

Amazing part..

Edited by -moona- - 13 years ago

fantastic update Fiza!

thats too gud.........has has k peth dukh rahe hey.....i love this bond between mayur.......cont soon

their convo was sooooo cute dear...............juz loved it........awesome