FF:FOREVER IN LOVE :: thread 1

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi am Durga and this is my first FF and hope you guys like it ' I cant think of any name for this ff . I have posted the intro. If you guys like it I ll continue ..

                    Forever in love

CHARACTER SKETCH

MAAN SINGH KHURANA-22 year old business tycoon . Owner of khurana constructions. Angry young man but has a soft side unknown to anyone except his dadi Savitri khurana.

SAVITHRI KHURANA- Head of the khurana family lost her husband due to heart attack. Loves her grandsons a lot especially maan. In search of a suitable bride for her Maan.

DEV KHURANA- 20 year old . Helps maan in his business such as onshore deals signing. Loves his brother and dadi a lot .


GEET HANDA - Bubbly young girl 18 years. From a rich family and is presently in college pursuing architecture. Loves her family . Has a sister rajji and brother tito. Hangs over with her friends varshika and aditi . Never sees the status of friends and loves them to the core.

Varshika ' Best friend of geet . Never fights with anyone and is totally soft natured. Lives life to the fullest .family friends with geet .

Aditi ' Best friend of geet and is a total opposite of varshika . loves her friends but hate lies. Will do anything for friendship but if she comes to know of any cheatings , never hesitate to punish them ( in the sense break up ).

Preet - a fun loving guy and a son of a rich business man . Best friend of geet , varshika and aditi. secretly loves aditi for her stubborn nature.

PROLOGUE

"hey where are you ?"

"sorry got late . am on the way "

"How long does it take ?"

"15 more min "

"Come soon"

"OK"

~~~~~BANG~~~~~'

" oh my god ! Shit "

" Hello ? hello ? r u there ? geet ?????"

The line went dead'''''..

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Posted: 13 years ago
first one to comment.....  update the first part soon....😊



kinjal


Edited by kinju100 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww ....i don't like it.......coz....... i loved it sweetheart😆😊
mmwwwaaahhhhhh awesome intro with a lil JHATKA....
Hawwwwwwwwww😲 ~~~~BANG~~~~?????? GEET??????
yeh kya kiya.......??????????
well loving it.........
Welcome to the writers world.....abhi tak u were only the reader but now u r a writer....
hope u get a fab response from the lovely ppl here on IF......
1 more thing sorry i'm not able to click on the like button...don't know whatz the matter.....😭

HUGS & KISSES

love
MANPREET
Edited by Manpreetmann - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: kinju100

first one to comment.....  update the first part soon....😊



kinjal



you made me happy as usual ðŸ˜Š
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Posted: 13 years ago
did i see a new writer Blossoming in our maaneet world... u started of wiht an accident... OMG update soon dear... waiting for more part...BTW soon add a title... loved it...
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Originally posted by: aarthirajendran

did i see a new writer Blossoming in our maaneet world... u started of wiht an accident... OMG update soon dear... waiting for more part...BTW soon add a title... loved it...


thnx yaar..i dont know wat title to give ..do suggest some titles 
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Posted: 13 years ago

durga .... plz continue ... thnks for the pm

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Originally posted by: aarthirajendran

did i see a new writer Blossoming in our maaneet world... u started of wiht an accident... OMG update soon dear... waiting for more part...BTW soon add a title... loved it...

 

 
u r funny arti .... started with an accident ...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: mrk_1


thnx yaar..i dont know wat title to give ..do suggest some titles 

post first part soon so tat we can think of  title....
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: aarthirajendran

post first part soon so tat we can think of  title....

yea i ll do it soon .. working on it .. with one hour i ll for sure do it