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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

abhay and piya r so adorable...............kabir and angad together r a riot.............love them but what did they find to move away in disgust?

 
 
hey!! you're commenting for the first time na? have seen your 'likes' before though. 😊
thank you soooo much!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳
 
lol...you'll find out soon. πŸ˜‰

 

Originally posted by: chakku

ur post was 🀣 nd πŸ‘ nd πŸ‘πŸΌ like always............

Awww!! Thank you!!!!!!!!!!! 😳

 

Originally posted by: shaggyscooby

This time its Sid to the rescue πŸ˜‰
Plz update soon need to know what those crazy twosome have found

πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†Yeah...will try to do that. πŸ˜‰
 
 
 
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sugaryanu

Part-18

Danish itna khaega tu neend hi aagey na bhookey! 🀣
 
Ahem so you wrote an Abhiya part. Nice. But more than AP im worried Kangad. Lol ab itni baar saath ate hain tu i thought of giving them a name. :P πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
 
Part-19
What is Lav doing here?? Poor Chaand. Ek tension jaati nahi ke doosri aajati hai. :((
And this 'beedi jala ke'!? 🀣
And Kangad ke beech yeh teesra i mean yeh paanchwan kaun?!? 😲🀣
 
Part-20
Pia feels herself falling.
 
She sees Abhay's face in her mind and relaxes. He will save her.
 
But she continues to fall. 🀣 
Ok for some reason i found it really funny. :P
 
And omg! Kangad and their convo about finding something! 🀣🀣🀣
 
And Sid and Pia! Yeh kya horaha hai?? πŸ˜†
 
Great updates! Was so missing reading them. But ek saath bhi fun hai. πŸ˜‰
Eagerly waiting for the next part! :))

 
😲😲🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣
 
Oh God! That Daanish line... 🀣🀣🀣
 
Lol..yeah...wrote an Abhiya scene...but not quite as per demand. πŸ˜‰
 
Kangad huh?? Sounds cool!! 🀣🀣
 
πŸ˜†Poor Chaand....his life is just going to get even more complicated.  πŸ˜†
 
 
Awww....I sooooooo missed your comments too!!!!!!!!!!! And see, you commented toh got sooo many comments this time. 😊😊
 
πŸ€—Come back soon!!!
 
 
 
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Destiny-

had a  right royal laugh 🀣


Good  job adiπŸ˜†  Beedi jala ke 🀣
chand is so  posessive  of haseenaπŸ˜†

LD is  ROFLMAO

KABIR  ANGAD  ABHAY tiro is supremeπŸ˜†

 
 
πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
 
 
 
Thank you
 
 
for 'liking'!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey adi..!! m back..!! yay yaya..!! ..!! misshed ur dis FF 

Part 8: hahaha how long it took for yu to ryt pia n abhay's part..??πŸ˜† n was abhay's car black or white??πŸ˜‰ finally daanish ki sachai bahar.. it must b misha's plan haina..??πŸ˜‰ Naaaice part.. missed my heroes {chandeena}πŸ˜•.. now off to read part 9 πŸ˜›

Part 9: oyeee my chandeena back.1! aww such a romantic haunted story..πŸ˜†πŸ˜† evry time u ryt dere part i enjoy it to fullest  reading..!! even i can imagine how dey will talk .. like in whispersπŸ˜†πŸ˜†... n Julius ceaser me ne bhi padha hai in 10th :P :D ... loved dis part more dan 8th n see i predicted its mish's plan.πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰ keeep going gurll.!! me will b back reading 10th part :D

part 10: ahem ahem..!1 love birds..!! soo now got to knw ur secret of waking up late nights talking to ur vampyπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜† loved the dialogues yaar..!! great writing ..!! keep going..!!πŸ˜ƒ

Part 11: hahahahhahahaπŸ˜†πŸ˜† daanish and his undead story..!! n wahan chandeena n their romantic haunted ride..! loving dis FF to the core..!! soo different yet soo strong..!!β­οΈβ­οΈπŸ‘

part12: tararara kon hai?? mereko bhi milaoooo..!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜† i think u use ur evry possible crazzy part of ur akhrot in the making of chandeena's love story to make it memorable one in vampires history haina..!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† i wish ekta mata isko use karle so dat it will b fun to watch too..!!:P :D ...and pooor K ... nai nai angad haina uske liyeπŸ˜‰awesum job adi.!!⭐️

Part 13: πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
adiiii while writing dis part u were in very gud mood ryt...?? i mean i simply loved it..πŸ˜† but why chandeena were shockedπŸ˜• kya abhay dressed up liek gurl wearing lipstik n olπŸ˜• n theory of undead is too good.. awesum partπŸ‘πŸ‘

Part 14: awww pooor daanish . he soo conphoooosed..!! i think he need a RESTπŸ˜‰πŸ˜† n wat is dis maya going out thru window??? n missha cleaning the house..?? oder shaitani plan of mish kya..??

Part 15 : hahaah "maine gaya bhi tha pi loon"πŸ˜†πŸ˜† n uss wqt abhay must have thot that tracker is singing in her nose πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰oooohh god waise ho kya rha hai mereko bhi bta do haseena k saath saath..!!
and adiii yu writting too  short updates yaaar..!! abhi start bhi ni kiya hota ki ek he scroll mein its over..!!😭 itni conjoosi don't do..!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

Hey chalo abhi gtg...!! baaki k 5 parts will read morning mein n will comment den.!!
awesum parts wid lil confusing tit bits too..!! but great overall ..!! loved it.!!πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Inu-13

Hey adi..!! m back..!! yay yaya..!! ..!! misshed ur dis FF 
awwwww!!! I sooooo missed you Nehoo!!

 
Part 8: hahaha how long it took for yu to ryt pia n abhay's part..??πŸ˜† n was abhay's car black or white??πŸ˜‰ finally daanish ki sachai bahar.. it must b misha's plan haina..??πŸ˜‰ Naaaice part.. missed my heroes {chandeena}πŸ˜•.. now off to read part 9 πŸ˜›
πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†took some time yaar. *wipes forehead* lol...black only!!!!!!! 😳

 
Part 9: oyeee my chandeena back.1! aww such a romantic haunted story..πŸ˜†πŸ˜† evry time u ryt dere part i enjoy it to fullest  reading..!! even i can imagine how dey will talk .. like in whispersπŸ˜†πŸ˜†... n Julius ceaser me ne bhi padha hai in 10th :P :D ... loved dis part more dan 8th n see i predicted its mish's plan.πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰ keeep going gurll.!! me will b back reading 10th part :D
🀣ChaNa fan!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
part 10: ahem ahem..!1 love birds..!! soo now got to knw ur secret of waking up late nights talking to ur vampyπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜† loved the dialogues yaar..!! great writing ..!! keep going..!!πŸ˜ƒ
😲 nahinnnnn!!! yeh baat public nahin ho sakti!!!!!!! Tongue thank you!!!

 
Part 11: hahahahhahahaπŸ˜†πŸ˜† daanish and his undead story..!! n wahan chandeena n their romantic haunted ride..! loving dis FF to the core..!! soo different yet soo strong..!!β­οΈβ­οΈπŸ‘
aww!! thank you!!!!!!!

 
part12: tararara kon hai?? mereko bhi milaoooo..!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜† i think u use ur evry possible crazzy part of ur akhrot in the making of chandeena's love story to make it memorable one in vampires history haina..!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† i wish ekta mata isko use karle so dat it will b fun to watch too..!!:P :D ...and pooor K ... nai nai angad haina uske liyeπŸ˜‰awesum job adi.!!⭐️
Lol...my whole akhrot is crazy only. πŸ˜† thank you!!

 
Part 13: πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
adiiii while writing dis part u were in very gud mood ryt...?? i mean i simply loved it..πŸ˜† but why chandeena were shockedπŸ˜• kya abhay dressed up liek gurl wearing lipstik n olπŸ˜• n theory of undead is too good.. awesum partπŸ‘πŸ‘
honestly...I don't remember! 🀣 thank you though!

 
Part 14: awww pooor daanish . he soo conphoooosed..!! i think he need a RESTπŸ˜‰πŸ˜† n wat is dis maya going out thru window??? n missha cleaning the house..?? oder shaitani plan of mish kya..??
πŸ˜†πŸ˜†keep guessing!

 
Part 15 : hahaah "maine gaya bhi tha pi loon"πŸ˜†πŸ˜† n uss wqt abhay must have thot that tracker is singing in her nose πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰oooohh god waise ho kya rha hai mereko bhi bta do haseena k saath saath..!!
and adiii yu writting too  short updates yaaar..!! abhi start bhi ni kiya hota ki ek he scroll mein its over..!!😭 itni conjoosi don't do..!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
😲neha!!!! you should know better than anyone else what my schedule is like....I don't have time to write longer stuff yaar!Ouch
Hey chalo abhi gtg...!! baaki k 5 parts will read morning mein n will comment den.!!
awesum parts wid lil confusing tit bits too..!! but great overall ..!! loved it.!!πŸ‘πŸ‘

 
lol....it's my mission to confuse everyone! πŸ˜‰
 
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
 
 
Part 21
 
 
Kabir: Oh God!!!!!!!!!!
 
Abhay: Chheeeeeee!!!
 
 
[They both try to get back, but are restricted by the tiny space.]
 
 
*
 
Abhay takes Pia to his car and makes her sit, while he himself stands by her door.
 
Pia: Abhay?
 
Abhay: Shhh! Chup raho thodi der.
 
Pia: But I want to go back. They need my help.
 
Abha (angrily): Bas karo Pia! Tumhein samajh kyun nahin aata hai? Har cheez mein involve hone ki zaroorat nahin hai tumhein. Why do you keep doing this to yourself? Why do you do this to me?
 
[He bends and takes hold of her shoulders.]
 
Ab bas Pia. Just. Stop. Getting. Involved.
 
Pia (defiantly): Maaya meri dost hai.
 
Abhay: So? Doesn't mean you will get yourself killed for her.
 
Pia: Why not?
 
[Abhay stares at her in shock as her voice bgins to crack.]
 
Who cares about my life? I don't have parents. I am an orphan.
 
Abhay (grimly) : And what about your friends?
 
Pia: What friends Abhay? Jab Daanish ne mujhe blame kiya, toh koi mere saath nahin tha. Misha, Kabir, Panchhi, Tracker......no one believed me.
 
Abhay: Misha loves you.
 
Pia (sadly): Woh ek alag complication hai.
 
Abhay: What do you mean?
 
Pia (suddenly business-like): Nothing. The point is, I am alone. I can do what I want. And Daanish cheated Maaya, and he was cheating Panchhi.
 
Abhay: One last time Pia. You. Are. Not. Alone.!!!!!!
 
Pia (looking up at him): Oh really?
 
Abhay (passionately) : Yes. Really. And you are an ungrateful little thing if you have forgotten every time I supported you, every time I saved your life.
 
Now let's go.
 
[He pulls Pia to her feet and they move towards the house.]
 
*
 
Haseena is shocked by Chaand's declaration.
 
Haseena (hissing): What. Are. You. Saying.?
 
Chaand: I mean it. I myself will convert her. But this ....Lavyadei I will not tolerate. No.
 
Haseena: Chaand! Tum us ladki ko.....no!!!!
 
Chaand: Yeahhh.....watch me!!
 
 
[He strides away.]
 
*
 
Angad: Kabir, dude! Tune mere saath aisa kyun kiya? Kyun mujhe itna majboor kiya ki main....chheee!!
 
Kabir: What the hell! Mujhe kya pata tha?
 
Angad: Ugh! Maine uski...yuck...nose ko touch kiya!!!!!!!!
 
(He wipes his fingers against Kabir's jacket, who shoves him.)
 
Siddharth (morosely): And press kiya. And twist kiya. (conversationally) It hurts. Sample show karoon?
 
(He starts pulling their noses.)
 
 
Ooooooh!!!!! Aaaaaaah!!!! Ouch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
 
Abhay (appearing suddenly): SHUT UP!! Woh uth jaayega!! (into his phone) Go Misha!
 
 
***
 
 
 
 
 
Edited by amail1601 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

EDITED

Ok firstly welcome back updates! Haha. Saachi was missing them sooo much! So thank you for such funnytabulous update! πŸ˜ƒ
 
And please ab tu bata do ke what exactly were Kangad playing around with?? πŸ˜• Whatever it is, it sounds digustingly funny! 🀣
 
And what an ungrateful little thing Piya is! πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
 
Chaand, ladki and convert! 😲 OMG what is he gonna do!? 😲
 
Update soooooooon! πŸ€—
Edited by sugaryanu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ressss

Edit!!!

OMG 
 chand  sure knows  how  to    Keep danger  at  bay 

By  danger I mean   LDπŸ˜†

And this  chapter had me  laughing  like madπŸ˜†πŸ€£
Edited by -Destiny- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
the guys r so funny..................by the way whom r they talking about?....................nice update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sugaryanu

EDITED

Ok firstly welcome back updates! Haha. Saachi was missing them sooo much! So thank you for such funnytabulous update! πŸ˜ƒ
 
And please ab tu bata do ke what exactly were Kangad playing around with?? πŸ˜• Whatever it is, it sounds digustingly funny! 🀣
 
And what an ungrateful little thing Piya is! πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
 
Chaand, ladki and convert! 😲 OMG what is he gonna do!? 😲
 
Update soooooooon! πŸ€—

 
 
πŸ˜• don't tell me you didn't get it. πŸ˜• check out the green text.
then I'll reply to the rest.πŸ˜†
 
Angad: Kabir, dude! Tune mere saath aisa kyun kiya? Kyun mujhe itna majboor kiya ki main....chheee!!
 
Kabir: What the hell! Mujhe kya pata tha?
 
Angad: Ugh! Maine uski...yuck...nose ko touch kiya!!!!!!!!
 
(He wipes his fingers against Kabir's jacket, who shoves him.)
 
Siddharth (morosely): And press kiya. And twist kiya. (conversationally) It hurts. Sample show karoon?
 
(He starts pulling their noses.)
 
 
Ooooooh!!!!! Aaaaaaah!!!! Ouch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!