Fan Fictions

PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD - Page 25

Created

Last reply

Replies

395

Views

59330

Users

25

Likes

572

Frequent Posters

amail1601 thumbnail
Anniversary 17 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
 
 
Part 20
 
 
 
Abhay stops.
 
Something is wrong.
 
He closes his eyes and sees Pia standing too close to the edge. Taking a step back. Missing the roof and falling.
 
He runs.
 
Fast.
 
Faster.
 
He is too late.
 
 
*
 
Pia feels herself falling.
 
She sees Abhay's face in her mind and relaxes. He will save her.
 
But she continues to fall.
 
 
*
 
Misha, Tracker and Reva run to stop Pia from falling, but cannot do it.
 
Even the trussed-up Maaya hops over.
 
But there is nothing that they can do.
 
 
*
 
Kabir gropes around in the dark.
 
Angad (whispering): Dude!! Mila?
 
Kabir (whispering): Yeah. Mil gaya.
 
Angad (whispering): Dekh...sirf haath hai ya body bhi hai.
 
Kabir (loudly): Body?!!
 
Angad (at a normal volume): Arey...matlab haath ke saath banda bhi free hoga na.
 
Kabir: Oh..haan. Wait.
 
[He pokes and feels around.]
 
Oye! Arm mil gayi!
 
Angad: Yay!
 
Kabir: Oye! Shoulder! (after a few moments) Neck! (a few more pass) Chin!
 
Dude!!
 
Angad: Haan?
 
Kabir: Yeh dekh kitni fun cheez mili!
 
Angad (excitedly): Kya hai? Dikha na.
 
[They both start playing around with something...]
 
 
*
 
Pia opens her eyes and looks into her saviour's face.
 
Pia (confused): Abhay?
 
Abhay (coming from behind her): Pia!
 
(Siddharth sets Pia down. Abhay reaches her and shaking badly, she turns to hug him. He holds her until the trembling stops, and then gently pushes her back to see her face.)
 
Are you ok?
 
(Pia nods. Still holding onto him, she turns partially to Siddharth.)
 
Pia: Thank you.
 
Siddharth (smiling): All in a day's work! *winks*
 
[He leaves. Pia turns to Abhay again and he holds her close. The girls come up, and Misha coughs lightly.]
 
Reva: Are you okay Pia?
 
Pia: Yeah. I am fine.
 
Misha (glancing at Abhay with a wicked grin): Haan bhai....fine toh hogi hi. Apne favourite spot mein jo hai.
 
[Pia blushes and tries to move away from Abhay, but falls again as her head spins. Abhay catches her.]
 
Abhay (grimly): You have just had a bad shock. You need to rest.
 
Pia: Main theek hoon. Seriously!
 
Abhay: Bas Pia. Argue mat karo.
 
Tracker: Haan Pia. Argue mat karo. (teasingly) After all, college ka hottest guy har kisi ko thodi bachaata aur hug karta hai!
 
Pia (shocked and embarrassed): Tracker!
 
[Seeing that Pia is getting rather agitated, Abhay leads her away from the house.]
 
 
*
 
Kabir and Angad are playing with their new toy.
 
Kabir: Yaar yeh mazedaar kaam hai.
 
Angad (happily): Haan. This is cool!
 
Siddharth: Hey guys! Need light?
 
Kabir: Umm...sure!
 
[Siddharth lights a candle. Kabir and Angad crawl backwards in disgust!]
 
 
*
 
Chaand turns to look at LD. He sees a tall, young woman on the plumpish side. Her clothes remind him of Tracker, if she wore black, and her attitude reminds him of T.
 
He sees her looking at him, and looks away.
 
When he looks at her again, he notices how her shoulders droop, how her smile falters, and how her hands shake.
 
Haseena comes over to him.
 
Haseena: Chaand.....come. Join us.
 
Chaand: Not now Haseena..I need...time.....
 
Haseena: Oh Chaand....40,000 years ho gaye us baat ko. Bhool jaao.
 
Chaand: No! (his eyes glow) She hurt you.
 
(stopping Haseena from speaking) No! Not now. Not ever. Make her leave at the earliest.. I would rather have Pia as my daughter-in-law!
 
 
 
***
 
 
 
 
 
yoyolo thumbnail
Anniversary 16 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Amazingggggggggggg part as usualll !!!!!
Abhay & Piya are so adorable๐Ÿ˜ณ
Angad & Kabir... hahahaha they're HILARIOUS๐Ÿคฃ
it seems like only they can understand each other, like two lovers๐Ÿคฃ
hehe oh and glad to hear that Chandu is ready to have Pia as his daughter-in-law (well that's not exactly what he said but I'm glad he said that ๐Ÿ˜†)
Can't waittttt for the next part !๐Ÿ˜ƒ and to discover what K & A found ๐Ÿ˜†

Posted: 13 years ago

20th Update:

@Kabir & Angad! ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ OMG "Haath ki saath body bhi free!" LOL I can't believe how stupid a person can truly be and to what extent!
 
For a second there I thought Piya was going to fall straight to floor and land on her face or something..........๐Ÿ˜† 
 
Awaiting your next update. ๐Ÿ˜‰
aamirkhanfan thumbnail
Anniversary 14 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
abhay and piya r so adorable...............kabir and angad together r a riot.............love them but what did they find to move away in disgust?
Befikre thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 13 years ago
ur post was ๐Ÿคฃ nd ๐Ÿ‘ nd ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ like always............
shaggyscooby thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
This time its Sid to the rescue ๐Ÿ˜‰
Plz update soon need to know what those crazy twosome have found
amail1601 thumbnail
Anniversary 17 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: yoyolo

Amazingggggggggggg part as usualll !!!!!
Abhay & Piya are so adorable๐Ÿ˜ณ
Angad & Kabir... hahahaha they're HILARIOUS๐Ÿคฃ
it seems like only they can understand each other, like two lovers๐Ÿคฃ
hehe oh and glad to hear that Chandu is ready to have Pia as his daughter-in-law (well that's not exactly what he said but I'm glad he said that ๐Ÿ˜†)
Can't waittttt for the next part !๐Ÿ˜ƒ and to discover what K & A found ๐Ÿ˜†

 
 
Thank you soooooooooooooooooooo much!!!! EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Yeah...they are. ๐Ÿ˜Š
Yeah..they are too. ๐Ÿคฃ
๐Ÿ˜ฒ lovers? ๐Ÿคฃ
Thanks yaar. ๐Ÿ˜Š I'll try to update tonight....though not feeling too well.  *pokes at wooly head* ๐Ÿ˜›
 
 
amail1601 thumbnail
Anniversary 17 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: lighteningbuzz

20th Update:

@Kabir & Angad! ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ OMG "Haath ki saath body bhi free!" LOL I can't believe how stupid a person can truly be and to what extent!
๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†I know stupider. ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
 
For a second there I thought Piya was going to fall straight to floor and land on her face or something..........๐Ÿ˜† 
๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Yeah...then Daanish could have had company. ๐Ÿ˜†
 
Awaiting your next update. ๐Ÿ˜‰

 
 
Thank you for the feedback! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
 
Edited by amail1601 - 13 years ago
Ameres thumbnail
Anniversary 16 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Part-18
Danish itna khaega tu neend hi aagey na bhookey! ๐Ÿคฃ
 
Ahem so you wrote an Abhiya part. Nice. But more than AP im worried Kangad. Lol ab itni baar saath ate hain tu i thought of giving them a name. :P ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
 
Part-19
What is Lav doing here?? Poor Chaand. Ek tension jaati nahi ke doosri aajati hai. :((
And this 'beedi jala ke'!? ๐Ÿคฃ
And Kangad ke beech yeh teesra i mean yeh paanchwan kaun?!? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿคฃ
 
Part-20
Pia feels herself falling.
 
She sees Abhay's face in her mind and relaxes. He will save her.
 
But she continues to fall. ๐Ÿคฃ 
Ok for some reason i found it really funny. :P
 
And omg! Kangad and their convo about finding something! ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
 
And Sid and Pia! Yeh kya horaha hai?? ๐Ÿ˜†
 
Great updates! Was so missing reading them. But ek saath bhi fun hai. ๐Ÿ˜‰
Eagerly waiting for the next part! :))
-Destiny- thumbnail
Anniversary 14 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
had a  right royal laugh ๐Ÿคฃ

Good  job adi๐Ÿ˜†  Beedi jala ke ๐Ÿคฃ
chand is so  posessive  of haseena๐Ÿ˜†

LD is  ROFLMAO

KABIR  ANGAD  ABHAY tiro is supreme๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by -Destiny- - 13 years ago