FF- DEEWANGEE: Ch18 'Its 8 pm on pg 55

Ramona

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Posted: 13 years ago

hello everyone... & this is my First Fan Fiction on AviTa...

What happens when...

Love at first sight turns into an obsession

Intro:- characters

ARPITA SHARMA- 20 yr old sweet but short-tempered girl. Very popular in college... Street-smart & full of attitude. Arpita belongs to an upper middle class family.

Aparna Sharma, Arpi's mom- ( bhouji)

Subodh Sharma, Arpi's Dad- (Panditji) total Joru ka Ghulam... 😆

Jagat Sharma, Arpi's brother-Elder to Arpita. he works in Avdhesh's office...

AVDHESH SINGH THAKUR- 26 yr old. Rich, spoilt brat of the family... Very Handsome..😍 Girls fall at his feet and are ready to do anything for him... He does not care about anyone's feelings... Again, Very Short-tempered...

Sunanda Singh Thakur, Avi's mom- ( arpi's mom)

Baldev Singh Thakur, Avi's Dad- ( Pankaj Dheer... acted in Rja ki aayegi baraat... Check in the celebrity index)

Chirag Singh Thakur, Avi's bro- Younger than Avi...

other characters will be introduced slowly as the story proceeds...

Index-

Chapt 1- pg 4

Chapt 2- pg 6
Chapt 3- pg 10

Chapt 4- pg12

Chapt 5- pg 15

Chapt 6- pg18
Chapt 7- pg 22
Chapt 8- pg 26
Chapt 9- pg 29
Chap 10- pg 30
Chap 11- pg 34
Chap 12- pg 36
Chap 13- pg 38
Chap 14- pg 40
Chap 15- pg 45
Chap 16- pg 51
Chap 17- pg 53
Chap 18- pg 55

Edited by KriYa_life - 12 years ago

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PrashT

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hiee

Ramona

loved the intro!!!

plz do continue...it sounds very interesting!!!

i would love to read ur FF...

Edited by prash_t - 13 years ago

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Ramona

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Posted: 13 years ago

This content was originally posted by: prash_t
Hiee
Ramona

loved the intro!!!

plz do continue...it sounds very interesting!!!

i would love to read ur FF...

thanks a lot dear....

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Suhana6

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hai ramona the intro is really good yaar...
do continue....
i am waiting 4 your ff....:)

awi as a spoiled brat...wow....new avtar of awi....;))

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chatterbox

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Posted: 13 years ago

arre wah for a moment i was confused

guess the real gkd is too much in my head

looks like interesting build up

do continue pls

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Dreamygal301

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi Ramona,

sounds very interesting!..will be looking forward to your FF when you post it.

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Ramona

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Posted: 13 years ago

This content was originally posted by: Sunaha6
Hai ramona the intro is really good yaar...
do continue....
i am waiting 4 your ff....:)

awi as a spoiled brat...wow....new avtar of awi....;))

oh yess yess.... even I want to see Avi like that..

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Ramona

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Posted: 13 years ago

This content was originally posted by: chatterbox
arre wah for a moment i was confused

guess the real gkd is too much in my head

looks like interesting build up

do continue pls

Hi CB di.... surely will continue....

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Ramona

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Posted: 13 years ago

This content was originally posted by: Dreamygal301
Hi Ramona,

sounds very interesting!..will be looking forward to your FF when you post it.

hi Dreamy di.... will post ASAP 😊

Edited by KriYa_life - 13 years ago

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Ramona

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Posted: 13 years ago

ppl... pls suggest a title na....

I dont have any...

Chapter 1 will be up by tomorrow.... as Im very busy preparing for Christmas.... hardly any days left and so much work....

If you want me to PM you..... Addd me to ur Buddy list....

THATS ALL FOR TODAY.....

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