SS: Home Coming Epilogue pg 125 Arpil 1 - Page 7

That was an amazing update...simply beautiful!! Even though most of it was in flashbacks, you set the stage very nicely explaining their childhood, Maan's realization, and their affair with just the needed detail. You understand what I'm saying? 😉

loved it yaar..it was awsome one .... thats maans child na .. eagerly waiting for the next one ...add me to ur pm list ..

OMG THat was 👏☺️

shes pregnant! i knew it!
update soon

Oh my lord! She conceived, n i thnk no no m sure she didnt tell any1 who's d father, poor gal dont knw wat hv happend to her n wat she had to go through durin 7 mnths n above all tat maan was unknwn to it, if somethng had happend to him than God knws wat tat gal had to face. Realy very wel written, thanx 4 updatin it early, hope to read more asap.

i guessed right..............................u write beautifully, do continue and pm me.

all i can say that was an amazing part

I almost guessed that it was something like that, but it was touching.
Do I need to tell you that I love the way you write. And thanks for updating so soon, love your friend for this 😆
Now half of the suspence is unfolded, but we are still there, where the first part ended, me is getting greedy now 😆
And the fb was well written, the love between Maaneet was lovable.
Keep up the good work Jaz!

I really doubt I need to tell you to PM me and I dont think I'll tell you how much I loved it either😉

Jaz..wow so that means more than a half a page this time..ok thats gonna take me time..mmm but since u kept ur promise i shall keep up mine too..pakka..