FAN FIC-RISHTEY-FINAL PART pg.71-3/13

Hey guys so I'm at my grandmas house and I thought an idea, so here it is, I want to apologize for my Hindi, I can speak it when it comes to writing I suck.  So here it goes

 

Character Description

 

KHANNA FAMILY

 

Dipli- rich businessman loves his family

 

Nania- wife of dilips, has tree kids and is a housewife, she is nice and a total opposite from her character in KYPH, her children are her best friends.

 

Kartick- oldest son, engaged to mishty

 

Aaliya-youngest, engaged to pritvi

 

Anitah-niece of dilip and nania lives with them after her parents died when she was 5 nice and sweet opposite form KYPH

 

ANGAD- just finished business school and is joining his father at KHANNA BUISNESS. He tells his mom everything. He is also looking for his sapno ki rani.

 

SHARAMA FAMILY

 

Survan- rich business man own SHARMA BUSNESS

 

Gayari- has one kid, is a stat home mom, but runs a business from home, her daughter is her best friend.

 

Dadi- same as show

 

KRIPA- just finished school, and is looking for a personal assistance job, she is going to job interviews she doesn't want to work at her fathers business and he understands and respects her for that going

 

Bose family

 

Damini- same as show but no mean streak

 

Privi-same as show except for the whole psycho lover thing engaged to aaliya

 

Mishty-sweet, and caring engaged to kartick

 

Other Characters

 

Kajol- angads best friend (played by the girl  koi dil mein hai that was married to ejaz khan's character)

 

Arjun-kripas best friend, lives in mumbai (that's right you guessed it played by ejaz khan)

 

Story Description

Kripa and angad have never met. All three families are very close and love each other. Naina and gayarti are best friends but haven't meet each other since they each got married, because gayatri moved to new dehli, and naina stayed in mumbai. The sharamas are now moving back to mumabi as the business is bigger there and requires him there, rather then new dehli. angad, kartick, aaliya, anitah, mishty, and, pritvi are all best friends.

 

Hey do you want me to continue.

Edited by kuch kuch hota - 18 years ago

wow its good plz con't 👏

tht was awesome..cont sooon..looks intersting..every fan fic is great..u do a wonderful work..

Part 1

It was a beautiful sunny morning, in New Delhi, the birds were out and people were walking on the streets getting ready for their day. You see a mansion and the camera takes you around the house with an elderly women-giving aarti around the house. She enters in a messy bedroom that has clothes and books all over the place, and boxes thrown all over the room. The women shacks her head and giggles and then makes her ay over to the bed.

You see a girl lying there peacefully, but you don't see her face because her hair is all over her face. The women softly brushes her hair away and kisses her on the forehead, you see hat the girl is none other then our very own KRIPA.

The women softly says,

Women-Kripa beta

Kripa-hmmmmmmmmm

Women-uto , kripa

Kripa gets up and rubs her eyes-kya dadi mujhe sona hai

Dadi (in a stern voice)-kripa out aj shaam mumabi shift hona hai, and you still have to finish packing

Kripa-oh shit, I totally forgot

With that kripa quickly ran to the washroom brushed and showered. She came out wearing tan boots dark blue hip hugger jean, and a black shirt with a white coat. Kripa ran down stairs and sat at the table.

Kripa-good morning mama, good morning papa.

Gayatr & Survan-good morning beta

Kripa-papa hum mubai kab ponchu gai?

Survan- yeh hai, shaam say, kyu?

Kripa- vo arjun ka phone aya tha. He's going to come pick us up at the airport

Gayati-that's great, arjun is so sweet

Kripa-okay ab mujhe janna hai, I got to go finish packing.

With that kripa ran out of the kitchen carrying her plate in her hand

Survan (chuckles)- pagal

Now you see a sign that says KHANNA MANISION. We are now in mumbi.

You see a handsome guy coming out of the shower, all you see is his back. He reaches down to his bed an picks up black dress pants and puts them on, the a dark blue dress shirt, and puts that on, and then finally black blazer. He tries to put on a tie put can't do it so he leaves it alone. He walks over to his mirror his back still turned on us and picks up his comb and combs his hair, all he now see are his smoldering eyes. He finally turns around and it's none other then very our ANGAD. He walks to the door and was about to leave when he realizes that he forgot his cell phone, he turns back and grabs it and heads down stairs.

He runs to the kitchen and gives his mom a kiss on the cheek.

Angad- good morning everybody

All (yelling)- good morning angad

Aalyia (whistles)- hey bhai, your looking good today

Angad (joking)-today, main to hamesha aacha lagta hoon

Aaliya (sarcastic)- yah yah, angad humko bata hain ladkia aapse fida hain, right?

They all laugh

Dilip- angad are you ready, aaj aapka pehla din hain, you nervous?

Angad- just a little

Dilip- oh haan angad kaal ko tumhare meetings hain

Angad(surprised)-meeting? For what?

Naina- haan beta your you to pick you personal assistance

Angad(surprised)-oh yah right thanks dad

Kartick-aacha chalo varna angad will be late on his first day

All them leave while the girls all chat

In New Delhi the Sharmas have all packed and left for the air port
Survan- kripa beta

Kripa- han papa, while staring out the window

Surva-kal ko interviews hain

Kripa (excited)-haan papa, khaan business ke saat

Survan-very good you're all set

Kripa smiles and continues to look out the window

Kripa (screams)- hum mumbai aage


Preview-Angad and Kripa met for the first time.
Edited by kuch kuch hota - 18 years ago

Heya..

Grrreaat PART...appo, keep it up..u rocking..

Luv ya..

Ouma

wow that was great plz con't

Keep it up Rajni, it was great! 👏

Love
Soni

thanks guys, i'll upload the second part either tonight or tomrrow

wow...honey...very good...keep posting it..awesome.. 👏

i really like ur story...plz cont. soon...