Kis Desh Mein Hai Meraa Dil

When Love Called *ff* (PH,PiA) Last part pg82

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Hey you all I thought of starting another fic and thought of basing it on Kis Desh and Tere Liye really. It was something new and I hope you appreciate it. I was really fascinated by Pride and Prejudice so thought of experimenting on it.

INTRO

 

There were many businesses and empires and Juneja Empire was one of them. This empire was the biggest one of them all and the most prestigious one. All the businesses died to have  partnerships with Juneja Empire as it benefited their business too

 

Now out of all these businesses there was one which was very small in comparison which was owned by a middle class family. They had no sons but had five daughters. So, day and night the father was worried about the welfare of his children after he was no more. His wife Daljeet didn't really believe they were lower than the rest and always showed off and was desperately waiting to get her daughters married off to great prospective suitors who would bring in the riches.

 

Now the question lied that who would get the good deal first and how will the proposal take place. Would the men choose their brides themselves or would they be shown as to whom they should marry or would the heirs of Juneja Empire have their own intentions of living life their way?

 

What would become of the five daughters and how would they come into the limelight? Are any of them destined to be with the rich men or there is something else written for them?

Character intro

Lalit Maan

Hello everyone, I really don't think you should be interviewing me as I only own a small hardware company compared to others but I can say I'm quite proud of it. It's true I don't have any sons but five daughters who I must say are no less than any sons. However I do seem to be worried about their welfare day and night. I'm not concerned who will run my business after I die but am more concerned about what will happen to them after I'm gone?

 

Daljeet Maan

Oho why do you have to tell them all this? Hi everyone don't mind my husband but let me tell you I don't at all consider myself to be lower than the other rich people out there. Let me tell you I think I'm much bigger. I'm also worried about the welfare of my daughters and I constantly taunt Lalit about how he is going to leave us all with nothing. To let you in a secret I'm desperately seeking for great prospective rich men for my daughters so they can bring in all the riches and I can live a life I dreamt of. In short you might consider me to be a gold digger.

 

Heer Maan


Oh my! where did you guys come from? Well I'm the eldest daughter. Not really the eldest since I'm actually twins with my sister but I was born 6 seconds earlier which technically makes me elder. People say I'm very caring and kind hearted but can be quite gullible sometimes. I don't know what it is but I seem to be loved everywhere I go. My sister keeps telling me it is because of my beautiful looks and sweet nature. I don't at all consider it to be that way because she is equally like me after all we are twins. Anyhow my aim mostly nowadays is waiting for my prince charming to come and take me away.

 

Priyamvada Maan

It's so good to meet you guys. Hi I'm the second eldest or should I say the other twin? Wese to mera naam Priyamvada hain per me aksar Pihu ke naam se jaani jaati hu. I'm the most sensible one from them all. Okay let that be the second one after Heer of course.  There isn't much to know about me as I'm very simple by nature and am easy going but sometimes I can hold grudges against people. They can turn into prejudices. I strongly dislike rude and arrogant people and those who are insufferable. I love my family but most of all baoji which makes me the apple of his eye. Infact both me and Heer are. That is what keeps me worried about them too like baoji. I've got very few friends and the only one closest to me would be Heer as we're more friends than just sisters who share everything.

 

Mauli Maan

Will you guys please stop disturbing me? Uff fine I'm the middle daughter and am not at all that much out going or out spoken. You must have got the hint. I tend to stay to myself and don't like socialising that much with others. People don't understand and consider it to be a strange nature which can be worrying sometimes. People are just so ignorant. I'm quite simple in thought and don't like too much pomp and show. Don't worry guys you won't be meeting me too much to my relief as I'm just a minor character in the story.

 

Ashlesha Maan

Hey! Hi! Hello guys I've been waiting for you for such a long time. Finally you guys came to the right person. Well let me introduce myself I'm the second youngest and well people keep telling me I'm very naive. Now that is just mean.  Okay I get it I've just recently turned 21 so that doesn't mean I don't understand the way of life especially a sensible life. Whatever it is I just love the way I live even if it is quite unruly sometimes. Hey these are the days to enjoy so why shouldn't I just play around all the time, whether that be with my friends or just any hanging around person found. I'll tell you though that there is only one thing on my mind all the time and that is that I'm crazy about getting married to a handsome guy.

 

Veera Maan

Excuse me, excuse me where have you guys been till now. You have any idea how much I've been waiting? I've been so excited to meet you all since I've found out you're coming and now finally it's my turn. Well not wasting more time, I'm the youngest and the most rowdiest of them all. Yes I do admit it as what is the point of taking life seriously. I think life is a play but everyone tells me I'm unaware about the harsh reality. All day and night me and Ash spend time playing and messing around creating havocs here and there. Why should I care what it is doing to the family reputation? I just want to carry fooling around. My elder sisters Heer di and Pihu di are terribly worried about my unruly behaviour but I just don't get what their problem is? Just because they can't do what I do. Anyhow I'm terribly spoilt by mama who supports me in every action whether that be good or bad. Of course just like Ash I'm also crazy about getting married to a handsome guy just like in a fairy tale.

 

Anurag Juneja

I don't consider myself to converse with such beings as you but so that it is my introduction I would rather have myself give it. There should be no mistakes. I'm the owner of the Juneja Empire. The one and only Empire which still stands with no competition whatsoever. Since childhood I've been defined by my position which has made me arrogant and insufferable. I say what is wrong with that? I've got all the reasons to be so. I believe to be superior to those who are below me in position and status and they don't deserve any kind of my attention. That includes most of you so consider this your lucky day. I tend to stay more or less to myself and am quite reserved. Naturally I speak only when I think it is required. However I'm still human so I do love and care about those who are near to me and I thoroughly make sure no harm is given to them. Now please leave me alone as I've got many important things to do.

 

Prem Juneja

 

Oh hi guys. I know all of you must be in a bad mood after meeting my rather stressed twin brother. Don't worry he isn't always like that. Anyways here I am and all you people might see me to be a lovable go lucky guy who believes life is a gift and everyone should cherish it. You would be surprised to know I'm Anurag's twin brother but am nothing like him. Complete opposite. Naturally I would say. I love poetry and by nature I'm a lovable man. Enough self boasting I would leave you to judge that. My nature is such that where ever I go happiness shines and well I can't help it to say that I'm loved by everyone. I just hope I win all your hearts too. I also own Juneja empire but unlike Anurag I've never been too uptight about it and have considered myself lucky to have had such fortune which I would love to use in helping others.

 

Gauri Juneja

 

Do I have to say something? I'm pretty shy but since you all insist I'll say a little bit. Here I am the apple of everyone's eye; especially of Anurag and Prem bhaiya's who tend to over protect me sometimes. I guess it happens with all the young sisters. People are kind that they love me, perhaps because of my sweet go lucky nature. However I'm quite reserved and not very outspoken. I'm not allowed to go out by myself until I'm old enough so I feel so trapped but I also love my brothers and I know they are doing it only for my good.

 

Rishab Rampal

How could you even think of leaving without meeting me? I'm one of the main characters so how could you possibly ignore me? Well let me tell you who I am. I'm the son of Jai Singh, who was a loyal servant of Shekhar Juneja, Anurag and Prem Juneja's father. Unfortunately my father died due to illness. After his death Shekhar uncle had thought of me like his son and did take care of me. Now if I did turn out to be quite wild is that really a big sin? That is the only reason why Anurag doesn't approve of me at all. Then again I don't blame him as he is just wired that way to hate the whole world. Since childhood there has been some enemity between us two and since dad died it has increased. I'll tell you the truth I envy Anurag and Prem because of their position and am basicly jealous of them. However Anurag wants to make sure he keeps me away from his family as much as possible but is really helpless because nobody can keep me away from my goal.

 

Ritesh Basu   

Hehehehehe! Hi guys. I'm the only interesting character here worth knowing and you came to me last? Not fair. You might consider me more like the clown of the story who seems to boast about his position but I've got good reasons for it. Who wouldn't be boasting if they had very very close relations with the Junejas? I'm also a close friend's son of Maan uncle so I know all of his daughters. I hate to admit but in particular I like Pihu the most but she   doesn't appreciate good things and just despises me. I've got a good postion and reasonable wealth to support all of them so uncle often decides that after his death he can put all of them under my care and guardianship but DJ aunty is very unhappy about it. Even though I'm way richer than them she doesn't want all of her belongings to go to me. I've finally convinced her if thats not a solution then she rather have me marry one of her daughters so then she can get what is mine. Sounds like the perfect deal to me.

 

Ananya Ganguly

I don't have much to say as I don't have anything extravagant to display. However there is one thing I treasure a lot and that is I'm Pihu's best friend and daughter of Karan Ganguly. My father is in the garment business and we're quite well off I guess. I'm not that attractive like Pihu but I can say am quite good natured and am similar to her. However I still don't have that many charms for a man to fall for me but it doesn't matter to me. I love the way I am. Oh yes another important thing I forgot. I'm another one with whom Pihu shares everything with and really cares for me too. I guess for now that's really about it. 


So here is it guys and now its time to tell me how you liked it Edited by pearlsRaj - 12 years ago

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awesomeeeeeeeee too good lovelyyyyyyyyy concept do update soon
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I loved charecter sketch, pm me when u update next time
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luved the character sketch
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I love Pride and Prejudice!

Very interesting concept using Premeer and PiA...hehe...

looks like Prem and Heer are Mr. (Charles) Bingley and Jane

Pihu is Elizabeth and Anurag is Mr. (Fitzwilliam) Darcy

Guessing at the other characters:

Mauli = Mary Bennet

Ashlesha = Catherine "Kitty" Bennet

Veera = Lydia Bennet

Rishab Rampal = George Wickham

Ritesh Basu = William Collins

Gauri = Georgiana Darcy

Anaya Ganguly = Charlotte Lucas

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Hey..
Nice concept !
Really interesting !
Premeer and PiA great combo !
Plzz update soon !
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awesme....luvd the concept and character sketch...add me to ur pm list
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Hey,
Luved the intro nd character sketch.
Am happy that this time its a new concept wiv different character types.
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I think this is a amazing concept and i just loved pride n prejudice
as I have read it many times but i think it will really interesting reading it in a more of PH/PiA version of it
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