Once Upon A Love Story MN(Epilogue -Pg27|06.12.10) - Page 5

This part was so small..but still conveyed so much of meaning and depth. I loved the parts where you described her loneliness..during class..during rains..aww...I was deeply touched! :(

Awesom update

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You know?! Sometimes, building a wall across yourself is all you can do. And I believe, the girl's right. It's how a person perceives the life he's been given, some may find reasons to be happy even when living in a dreadful condition and rest might never compromise with their cynic self. 😳

Jaee, I tell you - this piece is really very well written. This is your best work of all times, out of the ones I've read I mean. You're going really good, keep me updated. The story so far is amazing, I see the girl evolving and here comes the turnover of her life! God bless you!

P.S. Do you reply back to the comments we leave, or no? 😕

-Kankshita
Edited by -Kanky- - 13 years ago

no one in this world can write like u....bcz no one in this world can feel like u...i dont have any other words to complement you...

thanks 4 the pm and yes that's osom👏👏👏👏👏

I love the depth of the story. There is so much pain in it!
Is the town Panjim? Nd beech miramar?

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http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1515492&TPN=6

heyyy dear,
nice part
continue soon
thanks for PM.


love
Riddss

Jaee how do you write soooo well dear??😃😃

The way you have described the pain of Nupur makes me feel as if i am feeling the same pain while reading it....there are such people in this world and sometimes when i complain about my problems i wonder and think about the people who are facing worse issues than i am....people who have a right to love and to live yet they feel they cant.....

Awesomely written dear....and I know all these compliments are not enough because truthfully said, these compliments do not measure up to the way you have written😃😃

Nice part jaee.. i hope the wall that Nupz has built crumbles soon