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Posted: 13 years ago

First of all a big congrats for the New Thread of The Marriage 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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Goldie

Posted: 13 years ago

So this was the concluding part of ur fic 😲, really yaar i am unhappy mujhe bilkul nahi accha lag raha hai jo ye fic finish hone jaa raha hai. Tu aisa kaise kar sakti hai yaar? 😡 Apne itne acche fic ko finish nahi kar pls yaar. 😭Edited by arpita25 - 13 years ago

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Goldie

Posted: 13 years ago

Ab is part k liye comment kar rahi hoon poori fic k liye kabhi baad me karoongi. 😊

Sooooooo cute n romantic yaar. 😳 I mean start bhi bahut accha tha Naina le k gayi Raj ko ghumaane k liye n Raj ko jana hi pada. 😆 Mansi as usual back to teasings na. 😉 But after seven years bhi Raj ka pyaar jara bhi kam nahi hua hai Naina k liye. 😳 I loved the dialogue he said to Aman n after that night scene was extremly hot. 😳 Naina ne accha shock diya hai us ko. 😳 Their morning convo was sweet n cute. 😛 Raj ko bus ab pyaar hi yaad hai naina se n tum ne finish bhi bahut acche jagah kiya hai is ko. 😉

welldone darling. 👏

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Posted: 13 years ago

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwesome prt 😉

it was gr888☺️

its baaad that its d last prt

any ways do rite more ff

n plezzzzzzzzzz pm if u do

thanxxxxxxxxx 4 d pm

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Posted: 13 years ago

The ending was beautiful. But I wish that you would have continued with it.

Raj and naina spend beautiful and romantic moments during their honeymoon which strengthens their relationship and binds them in the unbreakable bind of love and trust.

They now have two beautiful children who have made their family complete.

It is good to see that all the other couples are happy in their lives with their partners and children.

Naina's surprise did shock Raj. He was happy to see this bold and confident side of his Naina. He knows that his life is perfect and beautiful because of her. Both of them enjoy a romantic and passionate night.

Abhi and Mansi still enjoy teasing Raj and naina for their love.

Raj and naina is the perfect couple who share a perfect relationship which beautifies their life everyday.

And to close on a happy ever after ending for Raj-Naina, Navin-shalini, Alekh-neelu and Abhi-mansi.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wow .......a beautiful journey....amazing update.
verry nice fic....

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Posted: 13 years ago

👏👏👏👏

Amazing update and totally romantic yet beautiful updt.....

loved d ur fic began and till end it had d same itensity to hold the readers to ur fic....

gr8....keep it up and

do come up with such fics time and again....

will definitely miss dis fic....

again would like to 👏👏👏👏 for you........

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 13 years ago

Writer's note:-

So guys here I come with my so boaring writer's note. 😆 😆 😆 I am again here to bore u. 😉 😉 😉 This was my gift to one of my friend Suhana and I hope may be she likes this aur agar nahi bhi accha laga hoga to bata dena haan.
Maine apni taraf se poori koshish ki hai jis se shayad kuch had tak satisfy honge.😆 😆 😆 If any one of u is not happy or satisfied with my work feel free to comment on my fic. 😉 😉 😉 U know guys it's not that easy to write with a tight schedule but when they r RN everything give us courage automatically. 😳 😳 😳

Here r my comments for each part of my fic:-

Part 1:-

Raj n his confusions, us ki confusions se us ki mom pareshaan ho gayi thi aur vo bus yahi sochti thi ki kab mere bte ki shaadi ho, par humara hero jaanta tha ki us k liye koi khaas ladki bani hai aur vo khaas ladki jaldi hi us ko milegi. Us ko dhoondha nahi jaa sakta hai. Phir mil bhi to gayi na Naina apne Raj ko jo us ka jaane kab se intejaar kar raha tha. Pehli hi mulakaat me kitna impress ho gaya na Raj us se. Us ka polite n humble behavior kitna jyada pasand aaya na Raj ko. Aur kya pata tha ki ghar aane par bhi us ki hi tasveer dekhne ko milegi us ko. Aur Geeta jee jis cheej ka intejaar kar rahi thi vaahi hua aur Raj ne haan keh di shaadi k liye.

Part 2:-

Kya kahoon is k bare me,do ajnabi ek doosre se milne jaa rahe hain pehli baar. Man me uljahan to hogi hi na. Naina bhi aaj pehli baar Raj se aise milegi shayad vo to pehli baar milne jaa rahi hai na aur Raj bhi. Maa khush thi aur chahti hai ki beta jaldi aa jaaye aur ladki ko saath me dekhne jaaye. Kya situation hogi na us ladki k dil ki jo jor se dhadak raha hoga. Song perfect tha kyounki scene bhi kuch had tak viavah jaisa hi tha na. Raj Naina k khayalon me gum tha aur Aman ka chedna accha tha. Dost hote bhi to isiliye hain na.

Part 3:-

So pehli mulakaat akele me nervous to hona hi tha na. Vaise bhi Raj ne to sab kuch ek saans me keh diya kyounki lag raha tha ki vo interview dene aaya hua hai vahan. Naina bhi kuch jyada bol nahi paa rahi thi. Jaane kaise sab ko ehsaas ho hi gaya ki dono ne ek doosre ko pasand kar liya hai aur isiliye kangan bhi de diya aur ashvirvaad bhi. Raj bhi khush ho raha hai man hi man is baat se ki us k ghar me sab ko Naina bahut acchi lagi hai. Raj ko Naina k saath jaa k engagement ring leni hai aur Naina sharmaa rahi hai, jab aise sharmaayegi to obviously Shalu to tease karegi hi na. But for her relief a few people are going with them to. Accha hai jitna jyada milenge utna hi pass aa paayenge na.

Part 4:-

Raj came to take Naina with him and was spellbounded to look at her that how much beautiful she was looking that time. Raj n Naina r out for shopping of their engagement but Naina is too shy to talk so Raj has to take initials and now they bought perfect rings for each other. Raj Naina ko itna pasand karne laga tha ki bhool hi gaya tha ki ghar jaana hai aur is baar Naina ko naraj bhi kar diya us ne. Saali n masti, ye to chalta hi rehta hai na. Saali se masti honewaali gharwaali ko agar buri lag jaaye to gussa to aana hi hai. Vo bhi itna gussa ki khud jaanewaali thi mam akele. Raj bhi jab fun mod me aa jaata hai na to sochta nahi hai. Ab itne gusse me to Naina ko Alekh hi acche se mana sakta tha na, par dekhte hain kya Raj mana paayega ya fail ho jaayega is task me.

Part 5:-

I think aap sab ko mera song selection yahan accha laga hoga jo Raj ne Naina ko manane k liye gaya tha. Ab practice to karni padegi na abhi se. Aur lastly Naina ko feel ho hi gaya ki jo insaan bus us ka gussa hatane k liye itne koshishein kar sakta hai voi kitna acche se khayal rakhega na us ka. Un ki pyaari pyaari baatein pyaar bhari jo ek jode ko pass lane ka kaam karti hai na vo kiya hai. Raj bhi us ko tease karta rehta hai aur Naina bus sharmaati hi rehti hai. AB us ko kya pata tha ki ghar pahuchte hi us ko apne bhai k (Alekh k) pyaar bhare gusse ka saamna karna padega. Par I think yahan maine jo song choose kiya tha HUM NE SUNA HAI, TUM NE JEEVAN SAATHI CHUNA HAI aap sabhi ko accha laga hoga. Ek bhai jo apne sis ko itna jyada chahta hai us ko agar nahi pata chale to narajgi to hogi hi na, par vo narajgi ek samjhdaar insaan kaise dikha sakta hai ye Alekh ne acche se dikha diya na varna Naina to bahut dar rahi thi.

Part 6:-

Engagement part, haan. Raj aur Naina jab sab k saamne aaye honge to sab ne khoob najar lagayi hogi na un ko. Raj jaisa ladka har maa baap ne chaha hoga apne beti k liye aur Naina jaise bahoo saare logon ne chahi hogi apne bte k liye. I think vo aakhon se aakhon me baat cheet aur isharo ki bhasa acchi lagi hogi n last me specially Alekh ne jo Noopur ko centre of attraction bana k jo dance kiya tha. Raj bhi kitna smart hai na us ko Alekh n Noopur ka scene wahi pe samajh me aa gaya. Sharab k nashe me sach me logon ko kuch hosh nahi rehta hai. Alekh k saath bhi yahi hua na. I think song accha laga hoga , kyoun?

Part 7:-

Vishwaas, kisi rihste k ban ne me aur nibhane me sab se jaroori baat hoti hai. Yahan vo vishwaas Naina ko bhi hai apne Veer par Noopur ko bhi hai Alekh par, vishwaas Naina ko bhi hai Alekh par. Par jo ek baat us ko samajh me nahi aa rahi hai vo ye ki Alekh ne jab sharab chod di to peene kaise laga phir ye? Par ye kashmaksh me door ho gayi jab ye pata chala ki Alekh ne galti se pee lit hi. Ab pee to li par jab yaad aaya ki nashe me us ne Noopur k saath kya kiya to samajh hi nahi paaya ki kya karna hai aur fatafat milne pahuch gaya Noopur se par madam to gayab ho chuki thi na. Jaane kahan chali gayi ( ya yu kaho maine bhej diya Alekh se door)? Raj kitna darta hai na, ek no nahi le paa raha tha par us ka dar door kar diya Aman ne, vaah dost ho to aisa. Mall ka bahana kar k Naina ka no le liya aur ab to Raj ka man office me kaam karne me kam, Naina k khayalon me jyada gum hai. Part 8:- Abhi shaadi me then maheene baaki hain par janab se ye doori sahi nahi jaa rahi hai.So no k baad ghar, ahaan accha hai. Mana karne k baad bhi janab ghar aa gaye n I think aap sab ko vo dog waala scene bahut accha laga hoga n aap sab ne thank god bhi kiya hoga jab Raj Naina k room me aaya tha. Kiss n his feeling of weiredness. I think u guys can understand. But Naina ne jis tarah ka response diya hai us ko us sab se ye feeling jaati rahi ki us ne josh me kuch galat kar diya.Date pe le jaana hai janab ko, dekhte hain kya hota hai.

Part 9:-

Ab dekho maine kya kiya, Alekh ki shaadi fix karwaane jaa rahi hoon na. Aur mauka dekho aa bhi gayi vapas Noopur madam aur Shalu jis ko already sab pata hai us ne mauke ka fayda uthaya aur dono ko ek saath kar diya jis se un ki misunderstandings clear ho jaayein. Ho bhi gayi aur thank god bach gayi na Noopur jab Shalu aa k us ko le gayi varna jab Naina poochti to kya batai Noopur n Alekh as well.

Part 10:-

Ab bechari Naina kare bhi to kya, Noopur hi ek aise hai na jis k sahare vo jaa sakti hai date pe. Ab jaa k mam free hue n hopefully ab acche se bahana bana k Naina ki help karne jaa rahi hai, but over protective bro. Ab kya jaroorat thi itna jyada saath jaane ki jab ki Noopur bhi saath hi hai. Vaise accha hi hua ki maine Alekh ko un dono k saath jaane ka idea diya varna Noopur bechari vahan boar hi ho jaati na. Ab Noopur ko apne saath rakhega na Alekh. Acche-2 friend nikal aate hain jaane kahan kahan se. Saari preprations ho gayi date ki with help of Aman.

Part 11:-

That is called a perfect friendship na, dosti vahi hoti hai na jo insaan ki har such dukh me, sahi galat me aur acche bure har jagah saath deti hai aur bus Noopur ne bhi Naina ki sab se acchi dost hone ka farz nibhaya hai na is baar.Us ne Naina ko Raj se milne me help ki ye alag baat hai ki Naina to chali par Alekh ne Noopur ko jaane ka mauka nahi diya. Accha kiya vaise bhi jab sis romance kar sakti hai to bhai ka bhi to hak banta hai na apni girl friend k saath time spend karne ka. Naina pehle hairaan thi na ki vahan koi nahi hai. Par I think aap sab ko accha laga hoga na jab Raj ne Naina ko officially propose kiya n Naina tab bhi soch me thi ki kya kahe vo is insaan k bare me jo us ko itna chahne laga hai na. Naina to ajeeb hai kho jaati hai aur bechare Raj k yahan ghutno me dard ho raha hai. Noopur n Alekh bhi lage hue hain na. I hope song pasand aaya hoga aap sab ko.

Part 12:-

Limitaition bana k rakhna jaroori tha na abhi, aur Naina ko is baat ka ehsaas tha. Raj bhi jaanta tha ki bhale vo apne aap ko rok nahi paa raha hai par Naina ko abhi poori tarah se apna banana k liye us ko intejaar karna hoga aur ye sahi bhi than a isiliye Raj ne Naina ki baat maani aur bus utna hi pyaar kiya jitna jaroori tha. Par yahan Noopur bhi na is ladki k pet me kabhi koi baat pach nahi sakti mujhe lagta hai aur abhi bhi yahi hua, madam ne Alekh jee ko bata hi diya ki Naina yahan Raj se milne aayi thi n thank god Alekh ne hyper ho kar over react nahi kiya. So ab wedding shopping pe jaana hai dono ko aur yahan bhi jab Naina utar k aayi to Raj to bus.............Pata nahi kya problem hai, jab bhi dekhta hai Naina ko lost ho jaata hai ye. Ab yahan janab car me start ho gaye hain aur Mall pahuchne ki jaldi nahi hai lagta hai na. Romance bhi kar rahe hain maje se.

Part 13:-

So shopping k liye jaate jaate beech me romance yaad aa gaya na,aisa hi hota hai aur us par Mansi ne phone kar diya. Ab to Raj ka irritate hona natural hai na ki jab vo itna busy hai to us ki di ko problem ho rahi hai. Mall me bhi shararat, pehle Raj ko apne liye dress nahi mil rahi thi n ab Naina ko. Ye dono bhi na. Finally apne kapde select karne se jyda Raj Naina pe dhyaan de raha tha to Naina ko kehna hi pada ki apne kapde dhoondhe. Vaise mujhe nahi pata ki Mall me bhi log itna romane kar paate hain ya nahi par maine dekha hai to Mall me romance k moments daal diye the. I hope aap sab ko pasand aaye honge. Raj ka bhi mood ajeeb cheejon k liye karta hai ab us ko kiss karna hai vahan Naina ko. Bahana mil gaya neckless ka to mauka kaise chod sakta hai? Accha kiya ki thoda time saath me spend karne k liye Naina ko le gaya na, vo bhi Lakshmi jee ki permission se.Yahan Alekh n Noopur ki engagement date final ho rahi hai n obviously Naina ko shock laga na ki us ko kuch pata hi nahi chala is bare me. Kaisa lagta bhi us ko ki us k bhai n us ki best friend ne us se ye baat chupaayi.

Part 14:-

Ab itne badi baat pata chali hai Naina ko aise, vo bhi ab us ko lagta hai ki batao Shalu ko bhi pata tha is bare me par kisi ne Naina ko nahi batya. Noopur ki abhi se halat kharab ho rahi hai Naina k saamne. Alekh bhi jaanta hai ki is baar Naina ka gussa obvious hai, agar itne badi baat chipaayenge to Naina aur kaise react karegi? Apne gusse me Naina ne ye dhyaan bhi nahi diya ki Raj ko bura laga na. raj ne pehle hi guess lar liya tha ki kuch hai dono k beech me. Accha hua Raj ko Alekh ya Noopur me se kisi ne kuch nahi batya tha varna to na jaane Naina kya haal karti dono ka? Kitna dar rahi hai na Noopur ki naina ko even face karne me bhi halat kharab hai. Sahi kaha na Shalu ne ki ab Noopur ko maa kehne ki aadat daalni chahiye na. Baap re Phoolan n Phoolan ka gussa kabhi kam nahi ho sakta.Aap sab bhi pareshaan ho gaye honge na ki jaane kaise kam hoga madam ka temper?Ab to bus Alekh hi mana sakta hai na us ko.

Part 15:-

So Naina k gusse ka saamna akele kar rahi hai Noopur, par bechari kab tak kar paati isilye beech me Lakshmi jee aa gayi aur unhone Naina k gusse k kehar se bacha liya Noopur ko n finally dono dost fir se ek ho gaye na. Ab to baari Alekh ki hai na, us ko andar aane do dekhte hain but kitna mehnat karayi na Naina ne us ko maaf karne k liye par mana hi liya us ne aakhir apni sis ko aur Noopur ko ye bhi bataya ki us ne apni shaadi kyoun postphone ki hai kyounki abhi vo poori tarah self depend hona chahta hai na. Abhi bhi Raj naraj hai Naina se na abhi bhi. Jab Naina ne call kiya bhi to bhi us ne theek se nahi baat ki I think ab kuch aur sochna padega Naina ko aur us ne soch bhi liya aura b Mansi n Noopur ki help se Raj k ghar bhi pahuch gayi. Ek nervousness ka ehsaas to ona hi hai na ye soch kar ki kuch dino baad is ghar me humesha k liye aa jaayegi vo aur us ka behavior kaisa hona chahiye. Isiliye vo itna nervous thi na aur ye baat samajh rahi thi Geeta jee isiliye vo vahan se chali gayi. Mansi n Shalu kaafi help kar rahi hain. Aura b jab janab jaldi aa gaye sir dard ka bahana bana k to bhi Mansi ne chup ke se us ko bhej diya. Kuch had tak Rajveer bhi pehchaan gaya than a us ko. Kitna smart hai.

Part 16:-

Baap re Raj ka gussa, kitna jyada hota hai na. Naina ko us k manane k liye kya karna pada? Itni asaani se to maante nahi janab to Naina ko jaradasti karni padi n accha hua finally dono ek room me bund ho gaye hain ab Raj naraj ho kar bhi kahan jaa paayega n Naina k liye asaani hogi na Raj ko manane me. So finally jo sun na chahta tha vo sun liya na us ne ki Naina ko kitna fark padta hai Raj k naraj hone se, agar vo is tarah se yahan nahi aati to Raj ko ye ehsaas kaise hota ki vo itna pyaar karne lagi hai na Raj se ki vo hara tarah se us k liye itna maayne rakhta hai. Raj bhi kitna smart hai na us ko pehle se hi pata chal gaya tha ki Naina yahan aayi hue hai aur vo bhi perfume ki smell se.I thought aap sab ko song pasand aaya hoga MUJHE HAK HAI from VIVAAH one of the best movies on Marriage n after that jitne pyaar se Lakshmi jee ne Alekh aur Noopur k jhagde k bahane sab ko rishte aur pyaar ka moolya (value) samjhayi hai vo bhi mujhe lagta hai aap ko pasand aaya hoga.

Part 17:-

I hope aap sab ko Raj n Naina ki sangeet party pasand aayi hogi kyounki maine is me koi ek song choose na kar k parody wise show kiya tha. Kyounki mai chahti thi ki kuch alag sa ho is me. I think jo bhi song maine select kiye hain vo aap sab ko bhi pasand rahe honge, person wise select kiya tha n I think per person suit bhi kar rahe honge ye songs na? Aap sab k comments ne hi bata diya ki kitna accha laga hai aap ko ye waala part. Yahan bhi Raj mauka nahi chook sakta tha bus naina mil gayi us ko n kaam start, but itne aaram se kahan, koi na koi to beech me aa hi jaata hai na.

Part 18:-

So ek saath dono masti kar rahe the na is update me I mean agar Naina apni mehndi k function ko itna enjoy kar sakti hai to Raj bhi apni Bachlor's Party enjoy kar raha hai na. Hope that aap sab ko vo dono scene acche lage ho. Ab is ko kehte hain na Mauke pe Chauka n Alekh ne kuch aisa hi kiya hai na. Naveen n Alekh dono hi peene me lage hue hain. Raj ko dekho ab sanak sawaar hai ki janab ko Naina se milne jaana hai vo bhi is haal me vahan jahan already jaane kitne log hain.

Songs ye dono differently liye hain na.

Part 19:-

Thank god Abhi ne bacha liya na Mansi k sawalon se varna bechara Raj sochta reh jaata ki kya jawab de von a Mansi ko. Vaise accha hua na guys ki Mansi k aane se Raj milne nahi jaa paaya Naina se varna ho sakta hai sharab k nashe me kuch gadbad ho jaati aur may be Naina naraj ho jaati Raj se. Aman ki baat se aap sab agree honge na, I think. Ab haldi k liye kaise janab daudte hue uthe hain na, kitne jaldi hai is ladke ko shaadi ki aur kitne pyaar se haldi lagwaa raha hai. Ulta ho gaya na, Naina natak kar rahi hai haldi lagwaane me aaj.

Part 20:-

Hare k ladki ko shaadi k pehle aise hi nervousness hoti hai na jaise ab Naina ko ho rahi hai, ye baat Mansi n Shalu dono bahut acche se samajh rahi thi n I hope aap sab agree honge mere is soch se, specially Suhana bhi kyounki us ko experience ho chukka hai na is baat ka. Par us ki nand n bhabhi ne jitney pyaar se samjhaaya hai us ko aise logon ki jaroorat har insaan ko hoti hai apni zindagi me. Raj n his impatientness, milne aa hi gaya na Naina se aur maje ki baat hai ki Abhi ko pata hai ki Raj kahan gaya hua hai becahre ka dar k mare bura haal hai. Pipe waala scene literally funny laga hoga na aap sab ko aur soch rahe honge aap sab bhi ki Naina k pass se ye sab jaayein varna kahin agar Raj gir gaya to shaadi ka venue change karna padega. Thank god bhi kaha hoga jab Shalu aa gayi hogi tab na. Raj ne bhi kaha tha na. Bus dekh liya na ab chain aa gaya janab ko nahi, ye to yahan bhi romance me laga hua hai.

Part 21:-

Shaadi, this update was entirely based on the marriage. Shaadi ho gayi aur saare rasmo riwaajon k saath, khushi bhare mahole me. Mujhe lagta hai maine short me shaadi nipta din a, I hope kaafi logon ko accha bhi laga hoga kyounki shaadi ki rasmein bahut lambi hoti hain aur mere liye bhi ye possible nahi tha ki mai sab ka acche se description karti.

Phere aur un k matlab I hope acche lage honge aap sab ko aur specially saali special jute churaana.

Ab aayi vidaai ki ghari.

Part 22:-

So I feel is part me aap sabhi ko Naina n Alekh ka bhai behan ka rishta bahut accha laga hoga. Kuch jyada hi emotionally bonded hain dono ki kabhi bhi ek doosre k alawa kisi aur se itna attach nahi rahe.

Ek acchi baat aur hue update me ki Alekh n us k massi k beech ka rishta ab maa bte k rishte me badal gaya hai. Bina soche samjhe hi us ne maa kehna start kar diya hai.

Kaafi emotional laga hoga may be aap sab ko par baat ye hai ki mai chahti thi ki aap

Sab ko ye real lage. Kyounki shaadi me vidaai ki rasm me jahan har ladki ki aakhon me ek nayi zindagi ki shuruvaat ki chamak hoti hai vahin ye bhi ehsaas hota hai ki jis ghar me vo itne barson se rehti hue aayi hai vo ghar aaj achanak se us k liye parya ho gaya hai.

Raj ne apni nayi zindagi me sawagat kiya naina ka aur mujhe lagta hai aap sab ko sab se accha part laga hoga ring find karne waala kyounki shayad ye rasm kaafi funny thi aur us se jyada funny tha Raj ka Naina ko ring de dena.

Aman ne bhi acchi prepration kar li thi na Raj ko tung karne ki. Aap sab ne vaise bhi

guess kar hi liya tha ki vo Aman hai ya phir koi aur.

Part 23:-

I think this was entirely RN part na may be kahin kahin Shalu bhi aa gayi thi na.

RN ki shaadi ka best gift hai ki Naina ab buva ban ne jaa rahi hai.

Yahan dono ki wedding night hai aur sab Raj ko bewkuff bana rahe the Naina ka get up bana k. Raj ko kya pata tha ki ghoonghat me koi aur hai. Jab us ne Aman ko dekha tha to sach me man hi man kitne saari gaaliyan de hongi but thank god luck accha hai us ka ki maa aa gayi aur sab k sab vahan se chale gaye Raj ko all the best bol kar. Raj ka gift I mean mera selection un k liye I think pasand aaya hoga mere reders ko na.

Us k baad all was hot n passionate.

Naveen n Naina's mom dono bahut khush hai na apne life ki itne badi khushi paa k. Koi bhi hoga na, un ki barson ki tammanna poori ho gayi hai.

Raj bhi na soch raha hai Naina ko dekh k ki sab sapna hai us ko nahi pata ki us k sapne ko maine hakeekat me badal diya hai.

Part 24:- Raj ne yakeen kar hi liya na ki us ki shaadi ho gayi hai. Ek aurat insaan ki life ko kitna badal deti hai ye dikhta hai saaf Raj n Naina k pyaar ko dekh kar. Naina ka shaadi k first day itna accha welcome kiya hai Raj ki family ne. Saasoo maa ne itna accha haar diya hai Naina ko aur Mansi ne sab se khoobsurat honeymoon moments k liye tickets diye vo bhi Switzerland k, is se accha gift kya ho sakta hai ek naye couple k liye. Yahan ALekh n Noopur ki cute fights chal rahi hain. Us ko chidatahai Alekh n as usual voc hid jaati hai humesha. Song I hope aap sab ko accha laga ho. Par gusse me bhi Naina ki baat jaroor maanti hai. Alekh aakhir mil hi liya apni sis se jis ko vo itna miss kar raha tha. Raj bhi saaliyon k saath masti me dance kar raha hai n I think har newly wed pair ko kone me rehne ki kuch jyada hi sahuk hota hai.

Part 25:- Mere hisaab se ye kaafi hot update tha, ab mai is se jyada kya kahoon, sharam aa rahi hai. Par Raj ka pyaar n concern Naina k liye kaafi hai au raise hi bana rehna chahiye.

N finally comes the concluding part

Part 26:- Is k bare me kya kahoon? Shaadi k saat saalon baad bhi dono ka pyaar itna naya hai ki kab ye saal poore ho gaye pata hi nahi chala. Do pyaare bacchon ne un dono ka angan bhar diya hai aur ab ye family humesha isi tarah ek saath reh kar apna hare k dukh aur such baategi.

Well i guess shayad aap sab bhi mere opinion se agree ho jo mai sochti hoon is fic k baare me. 😛 😛 😛

Par lastly yahi kahna hai ki ye fic aur us se judi hue yaadein bahut anmol hain mere liye. 😳 😳 😳

Thanks a lot guys once again. 🤗🤗🤗

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 13 years ago

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197588

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Posted: 13 years ago

Ohk hey mahak.. (I know you are vritika but I like mahak more)

I was the silent reader of marriage. And then in between you stopped updating all of your fics.. so I juts forgot where did I last read it.. and that also I saw I had never commented on it'

So I am replying exclusively as I am reading this again'

And about prologue .. first thing I got to know that apni suhana is married..i did had I any idea'and belated congratulation with belated happy anniversary'

And now come to your prologue

It's beautiful and interesting ' RAJ AND NAINA both are apple of their family eye.. and they have to be as they are RN.. and yes I love that pic.. one thing I want to tell you when I read that prologue I read navin's daughter name.. well you would not believe it but it's my next fic lead name too. And it's not like I took it from marriage's prologue' this name strike me in morning before even I decided to read Marriage again'

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197588

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part1- Girl Selection

Well the starting of fic is really interesting..he didn't like any of the girl from the photos showed by his mom.. and I like it when you showed her mom don't want to see any other pic of girl as it is little insulting when you ask girl and say "sorry our son didn't like your daughter"… but fate has take its role so they finally and for once he is on the other side of the table … he is the one who is mesmerized by someone's charm.. and that had to be .. as she is THE NAINA…

Well I like the way he spoke up to her mom.. so direct and just realize how he just spoke with her about his own marriage.. loved it…

And yes shalini naveen and alekh part is cute .. also abhi and mansi scene…

Its seems happy go lucky type fic.. that means I don't have to bite my nails what will happen next.. as there nothing wrong going to happen.

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