Kkusum from 18 year leap

Well look this sounds a long time back but i thought i eva have time to write my fan fictions and things i i have loads of ideas and things but i eva wrote them to any1 since the 18yr leap so i thought why not know i mean there no time as good as the present

so my characters re the same as Ekta Kapoor but not all of them will come at all times.

 

wow!!! sounds really fun...plz continue soon!!!!

Well this starts when Kumud and Kali re five
Sorry i not where good at hindi so all my sayings will be in English and sorry if doesn't make sense i am thinking in a hindi way!!1

Ai takes Kumud to Mumbai
Kumud: Aai where are we going?
Aai: We are going to see your mama and mami and your papa's family
Kumud:wow i can't wait

They reach Mumbai

Aai takes Kumud to meet Jytio and her son Rikin
Jytio: Hi Kumud will u be my friend? (Giving her a chocolate, then Rikin and Kumud play)

Aai phones Kapoor house
Sarla: Hello
Aai: Meet me at Hotel Taj(Puts the phone down)
Sarla: Hello!!!HELLO!!!!!

Jytio:Aai who did you phone?
Aai: Kkusum but it didn't connect
Jytio: okk anyways how is she?
Aai: She is fine i think K has already started missing her
Jytio: she has me or Rikin
Aai: Yeah listin could i take Kumud for a bit to show her the city alone?
J: Ok Rikin needs to sleep anyways and vish will wonder where we are..
A: Ok bye see you soon
J: Bye aai, bye Kumud cum on Rikin

R & K wave at each other

At Hotel Taj

Sarla is there
Aai see's her and tells kumud to cum
Sarla sees Aai and is shocked!!!!!!!!!!

Can't wait to her ur comments
Nikita

hey wellcome to kkusum gang!!! 😉 best lcuk 4 ur fiction...will rocks like others👏

welcome
nice intro
plz write soon 😉

nice 1st part....plz continue soon!!!

Thanx for the comments

well here is part 2

Sarla still shocked
Aai tells her evrythin (srry don't have time to write the convo)
Sarla sees Kumud and hugs her as she knows the truth
Kumud is confused
Kumud: Aai who is this???
Aai: this is your dadi kumud
Kumud: mama says my dadi is a nice person who loves me very much
Sarla: your mama is correct (To Aai) can i take her with me???
Aai: No because she is too young and might tell everyone the truth and i don't want Kkusum to know she has met you
Sarla: ok
Aai: i have to go come 2mo to the station our train leaves at 17:00
Sarla: ok

Kumud and aai leave k looks back and ways

Next day at d station
Sarla: hi kumud i have a present for you!!
Gives her a picture of Abhay
Kumud: who is this?
S: your papa
Kumud throws the picture
K: i don't want to see him or hear of him he left me and my mama
A: Don't say that!! Respect your elders
S:It's ok
A: train is leavin
S: bye K
K: Bye dadi
Sarla happy from being called dadi

On the train
A: k don't tell kk that u met your dadi
K: why
A: you are to little to know

The End Hope u enjoyed this part

Well i have only introduced a few characters but the rest do cum in my next part and just to remind people which characters re which and how they re related

Abhay and Kkusum Married (Mahi Kali's mum as she gave birth to her but not wit her egg abhays sprem and kkusums egg)

Kumud and Kali there daughters

Aryman (Sakshi his wife but she died)

Kshitij and Nakul his sons, Pinky there sister (her and Kshitij re twins) and dadi is in America

Sohan (lali's and nikita's son they will not be in it but sohan will be)

Jyoti and vishal married

Rikin there son

Sarla the dadi and Nitn the dada

Garv (Kshitij's best friend)

Harry (Nakul's friend)

Simran (Kumud's friend)

Aai Kkusum's Mum

I will not include kapli and aru chahi because no need 4 them and if i add new i will tell u in advance
   

Well i have a bit of time so i am writing.....

Part 3
K is 12 and Aai has been taking her to see Sarla once every year so as u can can guess most of these characters are 13/14 well d kids anyway

A: you can take kumud with u to kapoor house..
S: really...
A(nods): u can't tell any1 who she is and she can stay for 3 days only as we need to go back or kk will come and know d truth and we can't ave that
S:ok
K:bye A
S and K go

At Kapoor house we see kali for d first time n she is being moody
Mahi: Please listen or papa will be angry
Kali: Mahi Aunty papa can eva be angry wit me he loves me too much
Kali: big mom
S: Hi beta how re u?
Ka: M aunty is being mean and not listening to me!!
S: oh well i will tell mahi aunty off 4 u but i would like you meet some1 this is K a granddaughter of a friend of mine and she will be staying here 4 a few days and i would like u to be nice to her ok??
Ka: of course Big Mom
S: good Ka

K and Ka talk and paly wit each other become quite gd friends Rikin comes and kumud and rikin say hi jyoti is a bit shocked and sarla realises and calls they go off

Abhay comes at dinner time whilst Ka and K re in d room playin
A: Kali beta where re u??
Ka (to k): Papa is home
Kali leaves d room and k follows after a few minutes
Abhay sees her
S: Kumud beta cum
Ku: yes aunty coming
S: call me dadi
K: ok dadi
A: Hi kumud (then gets flashbacks of kk when they were decidin names)

Next day Kumud, Kali, Rikin and Sohan(srry i didn't introduce him earlier just didn't know how to) go to aryman's house
Kumud meets Nakul, Pinky  Kshitij and Garv for d first time

K gets on well wit Kshitij and Nakul but not garv(srry G and K fans)

This happens until Kumud is 15 then we get the 18 year leap!!!

i will write more maybe later 2day or 2mo but i will be using some of the things ekta did but not all srry if u don't like that part of it

Hope to hear ur comments soon
Nikita Edited by nikita_88 - 18 years ago

that was wonderful
plz write soon 😉