Under the Moonlights Lake~MayUr+SaJan FF - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago

Daddy ki beti 🀣🀣

Nahi, on a serious note Linny πŸ€—
Both the parts are just fabulous! and the concept seems amazing!
Very well written jaan <3
Keep it up!
And continue soon!
 
Love ya <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesomeee updt loved it contineu soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amaaaaaazzing!!!
Love it loads and loads
Hmmm no Mayur and Sajan scenes?
I don't mind, trust me, I get enough πŸ˜†
But brilliant part jana. Just one tip: You may want to proofread your story again just for spelling errors. Just saying 😳
 
Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow.. nice ff... it was relly sweet at least the MayUr part rocked...
 
 
Soo sweet mayu missed Nupur... how adorable... 😍
 
 
Btw whats up with GuNur... I hope it's not something serious... Anyways do continue soooon.. I rlly can't wait for MayUr to meet again.... And if ur sending Pm's do send me one... or else i will be checking this ff regulaery...
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Posted: 13 years ago
can u plz pm from next tym onwards...........
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome 2 parts

per lina madam kindly con soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

It was nice update

Looks lik Gunur is facing sum prob
Hop their prob solves soon
Liked the way Mayu was too concerned abt Nups
Update soon n long update
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey linaπŸ€—

concept & character sketch is excellent

1st part is amazing....i loved it

2nd part is also very good....mayur already lyk each other

story seems interesting

continue soon n do pm me

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part dear!!!!!!
do continue soon!!!!!!
n do pm me!!!!!

luv ya
deepti
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Concept!!
lovely part...!!