Under the Moonlights Lake~MayUr+SaJan FF - Page 2

Posted: 13 years ago
hey lina its beautiful 👏 thnks for the pm sis ll wait for the nxt part the title sounds sooo romantic 😍☺️ puri story kitni romantic hogi😍 lovely bginigEdited by -Liana- - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
lovely concept!!!
 
thnxxx for the pm
Posted: 13 years ago
is se pehle k i comment lemme warn u
just just just just keep writing this ff
u r an amazing write
a girl with awsome stries and agar tune yeh story beech mein chodhi na to by god mere se bura koi nahi hoga
samjhi?
nn now back to story
 
god lina i just fell in lov with this concept umm still sooooo much in awe of it
god i just juts juts juts cant wait to read more
pls hun jitni jaldi ho sake write its next parts k plsssss
Posted: 13 years ago
awesome concept dear...pls continue soon...............
Posted: 13 years ago
awesome do continue soon
Posted: 13 years ago
grr88 part.. i luved itt.. do ocnt soon plzz...
all the best for ur ff!
Posted: 13 years ago

Lina can't blve u starting new ff

so happy i would love to read hun
n loved it mayur  Character Stretch
update soon plzz n thanks 4 d pm 🤗 
Posted: 13 years ago
hey lina..nice concept..n the intro was good..

mayank comes over to meet dia..n nupur feels extremely uncomfortable..so he thinks of going away..but she calls him inside so she can check if dia is awake..n on the way they talk about mayank's past which makes him lose his cool..but he apologizes soon enough..so thats good..n he invited her for a picnic..nice ;)..hope she goes!..

samrat moves into a new building..n he stops the elevator for gunjan..she gets on..n almost moves to the wrong floor but realizes soon..lol..n they get to know each other..samrat is totally smitten by her..she drops her bracelet n he goes to return it..but when he asked what the N stands for, she totally slammed the door on his face!..wow thats rude..but does it stand for nupur or neil?..

so even gunur have a story?..interesting!..looking fwd to the MayUr n SaJan love stories too..

all the characters are interesting..waiting to read more..

thnx 4 d pm
update soon
Posted: 13 years ago

At last ur string ur FF

Thanx  a lot sweetheart
Loved the strt
Mayu directly asked Nups out for Date crap n how he knws her name
Sajan strt convo was sweet but end it becum shocking one
Gun was rude but really aggressive abt that braclet i feel
Update soon
N im in ur Pm list for sure
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by sizzlingsehr


awesum first part yr
realyl oved it to the the great extent yrrr
reaally lovely update
lovemayur first meeting
and talks btweeen them yrr
glad mayank is single na😉
loved nupur diffeternt attire
cming to sajan part
loved samrat a lot yrrrrrr
he was great  all through yrrrrrr
really waitng for next update
and  u have to update soon na
no other option for u😆😆😆

sorry for short comment as m not doin welll
 
awww Sehruuu this is choo cweet of you na 🤗
thankooo chooooooooo muchhhh🤗
em really really glad u liked it na betuu
but no na
you'r just saying that
em not a good writer at all na
I just love writing
acha will continue abhi na
love ya
tc🤗

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