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Besides me...[Oneshot] - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
its really  beautiful....i wish u wrote a second part to it :).....
i loved every word!!
sorry 4 the late comment nt been much active
rock on dear...
and inform me of more one shots ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey loved reading u r OS yaar!
it's really good
thanks for PM 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awwwww.... such a loveable OS.
thanks a lot for writing it :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
"...When you are in pain, it pains him more than you can even think. You cry out and shed tears, while he has to console you as well as make sure that he doesn't spills his tears out. One day you would understand that." ... like this!
"In front of others, he was besides me, but only I knew how far he was from me."....wow...this is awsome n speaks so much abt the depth of how she feels....
 
Nice one shot...enjoyed reading it!
thx
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome OS...the first part pf the OS was so similar to me...i am such a chatterbox, but very very shy around boys...and i am so bored when my friend is absent...i guess this is the reason why i love ur OS, because it is so closely related to my life...i could imagine myself in place of nupur...the emotions in the OS are so beautiful that i got completely involved in it...thanku so much 4 such a wonderful OS...