Open to all...welcome to praise, hate, hug, smack...CVs
First of all I will say thank you for removing that atrociousness that you thought would get you TRPs. Well I guess you were right it did get you ratings, but of a different sort, it got you ratings on how many lawsuits and bans on your channel but I will take it whichever way. And for that disclaimer, I truly appreciate you making it clear to me that it is fiction, I see you felt the need to clarify that after my last post. Is that your answer to my question? That none of you personally thought of you ex's on your honeymoons? And that you know it's unrealistic? If so then I got your message no worries, but could you get mine, please write stories that are realistic I know you like fiction but for a good show you need some reality in it.
But I'm glad you read part of my last post and found not just your bheja but some for Ridz. (Personally it was still a little to late for me, but I'll take what I can get). So yup you have cutie Siddy setting things up (thank god I got some enjoyable moments) and then you set up the epic fail. Ridz goes in and sees the beautiful room set up by her hubby and as she goes around and looks at what a wonderful designer he has become she FINALLY comes the realization that she has NO REASON to keep herself from Sid, that she needs to take the step forward. So what does she do? She pulls a classic heroine move (both the actress and the drug user) and runs into the arms of the shadow man thinking its her husband. She keeps her eyes closed (seriously woman you waited a year to tell this man you love him and you close your eyes?) and then she says "ILU, I know I was slow and took longer than it takes a five year old to tie their shoe laces to understand, but I did and ILU". And then she happily turns around and presents her truly beloved back and neck? I must say Ridzy sure knows her hubby ;) and how much he loves her back/neck. But poor Ridz didn't realize that the stalker ex of hers has been "watching every move you make, every breath you take..." and that he knows just what she likes, so he decides to copy the moves Siddy used on Ridzy post freak monsoon rains.
And the overly anxious Ridz falls fast and deeper and enjoys all the "ooo la la-ness" thinking its Siddy when really its armaan who I still believe is a bhooth out for revenge for true love. Then Armaan ruins his chances by opening his mouth and saying "BOO!!! I Got You!! It's me your ex and I still love you." And RIdz comes to the realization that she has been fraternizing with the ex. Pagal ladki really needs to get a restraining order. And then we get the worst editing known (I know I'm shocked too that I could possibly be worse then yesterday, but it was...CVs I think you misunderstood my last advice the street people are for voiceovers NOT editing) and seriously has the editor been listening to "Teri mast mast do nain" b/c I am pretty sure that's all I got for about 5 minutes. Or were they trying to show off the fact that Ridz knows Sid loves her regardless of her crack headedness and that she doesn't need to use all the eye makeup she owns? Anyways then we get creepy obsessive confession from the bhooth and how he couldn't, wouldn't, and ant WONT ever forget her or his love for her. And then this is where I think the editor got confused. Instead of having ridz leave he goes to fade out only to fade back in with Ridz and Armaan "overwhelmed with passion"??? What the? No I'm not saying that what she did was right, it's definitely wrong, and i'm not saying it wasn't supposed to happen (afterall aap logo ki dhimaak is a scary place) but how does she go from shocked that the man touching her and kissing her wasn't her husband but her ex who was supposed to be on sabbatical in cabin in the Himalayas and then she just falls into his arms?? Like did you forget to delete that scene? I'm confused. Whatever then you show blah blah and my favorite she is mid stroke and THEN She notices the bracelet and remembers the sweetie waiting for her? Her husband? Really guys this is your 'original idea' seriously this was a waste of time and effort. The only thing I can say is I hope you redeem yourselves by bringing sexy back...and by that I mean Angry Sid.
So it seems as though summer Olympic training break is done and fall training is in? They way Ridz ran out of that place it seems as though she's back in training tears, heels and whines all on. And she gets a cramp stops to straighten up and once again thinks to herself, "I wont let the bhooth possess me anymore. I wont let it ruin my life." (Too late.) By the way isn't Armaan the obsessive stalker? I mean he pulled her hand back on his cheek and then broke the bracelet with his eagerness and then when she runs he half heartedly takes 5 steps and then stops? I mean he was fine creeping from afar and watching her swim and play rugby but he cant chase after her? Sorry just got confused with that and then of course he contemplates and realizes that what he did was wrong. (I think he found his lithium pills and took them)
Poor Siddy he's so worried about looking perfect for his wife that he doesn't even realize she's not really worth it right now. (No I haven't given up completely on Ridz I personally think that although she made a mistake by partaking in that disclaimer moment that she was truly afraid of Armaan and the words he spoke. She (I hope) realizes that ARmaan has crossed from hurt and desperate to just plain obsessed.) So she comes and she asks him to hug her, to just put his arms around her. Now I know I said I wouldn't analyze this nonsense, but I just have to say this when I watched this moment I couldn't help but feel as though she were asking Sid to wash away the filth that the disclaimer was needed for. It really seemed to me like a woman who had been violated and wanted to forget, wanted something safe, warm, loving to wrap its arms around her and take away the bad memories. (or she could just be cold from the outside air and thus wanted him to wrap his arms around her, she is kind of cheap after all she wears the same six outfits over and over.) Or maybe she just wanted an excuse to rip Sid's shirt, after all he's the one she wanted all over her.
As for the precap, seriously who knows what you are planning CVs I hope you woke up the writers that wrote back in January and that you gave them some strong coffee cuz today's epi was filled with poor writing, and even worse editing. And does Armaan forget his lithium pill tomorrow? Because just today he was sayin he shouldnt have come should have thought of what his taking ridz in his arms would do, and then all of the sudden he changes his shirt and realizes that he loves her and she loves him and that he wont let her get away without her saying what is the truth that he loves her. Seriously is Armaan bipolar? Is armaan a bipolar bhooth??? is that your twist?? Plz bechara ko amnesia first, then brain injury and now bipolar dz for real guys?? plz he is surrounded by doctors, he himself is a doctor, plz get him some lithium and save us all the bheja frying.
Oh and I have to mention that awesome disclaimer again, can I just say nice touch with having it stop scrolling when Ridz realizes that the man whose arms she is in is not sid but armaan instead, I think it was necessary for you to clear out the scrolling writing there so tat everyone could see clearly how truly shocked ridz was. I will give you credit editors for that one.
And my new way of signing off CV advice posts...I would like Sid to find out about the disclaimer scenes and then not say anything, not mean or angry not sad and heartbroken, just nothing. I want him to pretend that nothing has happened and that he knows nothing and let Ridz's guilt bubble inside of her. Let Armaan squirm. And then have her breakdown after knowing you guys months and then spill it all. And then have Sid say, "I know. I've known all along. I just wanted to see if you would ever have the guts to tell me or if you would continue to lie to me forever." Then just walk away and beat up Armaan (sorry ArShi fans he needs to pay a little for this stunt) and then go on a fellowship overseas leaving Ridz pining for him. He can come back and she can meet him at the airport ;).
Big fan of Disclaimers,
-Arp
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