Diary Entries- SaJan OS - Page 3

sonu

@MagicLantern

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

i loved it......i was left sobbing by the end of it.....i loved the end where samrat decided to keep his wife's memories alive.......

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happygirl18

@happygirl18

Groupbie

Posted: 13 years ago

hey loved your OS
very beautifully written
nd all the emotions are very well etched...........

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mehr

@missinguonly

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

very nyc wirtten
luv it

n more thing
i wrote os u told me about

http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1484234#33815010
Edited by missinguonly - 13 years ago

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yasri

@yasri

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

This is one of the best OS I've read in IF........ amazing the harmony and herarichy of events, the words you used to discribe the characters........ the idea in whole is original and different........

But I noted that like you start to feel tired as we approach towards the end......... there is one part where I felt that you could describe it better, where Gunji got hint fro that girl........ I think it should be more emotional....

Honestly, you showed a superior talent that what I've seen from MJHT cvs in their most tracks.......

Keep it up girl, you made my day by your touching OS

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malika

@_symphony

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

zee i just wanna request you to write more n more OS on sajan.Pls try to write on the current track where gunjan realizes sam's pain.It wud be great to read it from ur pov and in ur words.

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491644

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

ZeeeeJayyy OMFGGGG im Crying Here, Never Cried While Reading its The First Time .. This Was OUTSTANDINGG ! You Described Everything SO Beautifullyy ! SO Sad And Heartwrenchingg, I Cant Say More As Im Speecheless Just Want To Add .. One Of The BEST OS ive Ever Read ! Please Write More, Your SO Good ! Loved This One Like Anything !!!

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ARMAANKSGFAN
beautiful
lost 4 word

u r awesome

thanks 4 da pm

thnks a lot dear, truly means a lot to me😊

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: preety88
lovely os.......it was soooo sad...u made me cry....awesome work

ohh dear thnk u soo much🤗

am glad u could connect so well that it got tears, didnt intend to make u cry sweety.

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mjhtrocks2010
nice os.it made me cry.the way you penned it was amazing.

Hey dear, thnks a ton!

truly means a lot to me😊

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Aani

@EkPahelii

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 13 years ago

Zee you made me cry gosh this was so so sad

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