JAZ!!!!!
I'm speechless! This is so beautiful and wonderful!
Reserved for long comment!😳
EDIT - I'm back
You are an awesome writer Jaz! I did not know it before!
Starting with - I really loved the way you portrayed his feelings, it was so natural. I prefer it your way showing that Maan has already come to know and clear of misunderstandings.
Next, I enjoyed how Maan was eavesdropping - that was obviously not the usual Maan Singh Khurana does, but I like this hatke style.
Next , Geet calling Pinky was fun! It actually resulted in the better way!
OH! My Maan SIngh Khurana is the best! ☺️ I love the way he confronted..In fact I loved everything he did! 😳 😍 You just showed him very well and I have really no words to express!
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then, then she felt him tenderly kiss the top of her head, and she knew he did.
And just like that, nothing else mattered. Nothing else was important. Nothing
else but her baby and the man she come to admire and respect – the man she'd
inevitably come to love…truly…madly…deeply.
The Best conclusion I've ever read! I am so in love with this!
Please Please do write some more OS! ☺️
PS: I think comment bahut zyada lamba ho gaya!😳
PPS: I love this song by Savage garden! ☺️😳
Edited by Roshni. - 13 years ago
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