OS: Truly...Madly...Deeply - Page 2

Posted: 13 years ago
awee..really nice,,luv geet pinki n maneet convo part....
Posted: 13 years ago
sooooooooo soothing and heart felt
Posted: 13 years ago
totally sppechless....no word...hats off to you
such a touching story and their emotions were so clearly shown i felt as though i was watching the actual epsiode...that means a lot to me....thank you so much for this
Posted: 13 years ago
it was really awsome
best OS i've read so far
loved how u portrayed their emotions
can't stop admiring ur work
 
Posted: 13 years ago

1st of all , yaaaaaaaaaaay Jaaz is back wid another amazin OS of her ๐Ÿ˜‰

and Now! Jaz i had tears in my eyes while readin each n every line ๐Ÿ‘
i mean the way u expressed their feelings for each otha was amazin !!!
i wish ! i wish this actually happens !!
 
i mean tht would be the best way Maan could knw everything! EVERYTHIN! that How much she loves him, how she cant leave widout him n the Dark truth of her life! which forced her stay away frm the one she truely love!
 
Jaz Please Send this OS to the CV's ! Im sure they will like this idea ! n get Maneet closer n instead of Pinky they might get Pari as she also noticed sumfin in y-days Epi !
n anywyz Pari is here to unite thm !n i guess this will be the perfect Scene!!!
 
OMG Jaz this was ur Best OS !!!
Amazin !!!
๐Ÿ‘
Love you !
u knw Afta Watchin y-days epi i was so sad buh this made me cry buh the nice way ๐Ÿ˜Š
amazin ๐Ÿ‘
Posted: 13 years ago
Beautifully written Jaz. you captured all the emotions that needed to be captured. Keep it up. 
Posted: 13 years ago
OMG........im readin sumthin lyk dat 4 d 1st tym n it was amazing!!

gosh.....1st wen i saw i was lyk its sooo big ....hw much tym it will take...but thn i was lyk its abt geen n maan so gotto read!!
thn as i was readin......gosh i srsly got goosebumps!!!

dayem d tym wen he heard her....n asked her....tum mujhe itna hi jaan payi ho......ufff i was sooo glad he heard!!!

n thn every line i was smiling.....n thinkin if i cud c it....though i was imaginin it at d bak of mind!!

n thn wen he says......

Pyaar kiya hai tumse Geet, aur yeh koi khel nahin hai. Tum meri jaan se bhi zyada pyaari hoโ€ฆkaise jaane deh doon tumhe?"

gosh.....breathtaking....srsly!!! d best line Maan cud ever speak out loud..!!!
dis is such a lyf saver.......feels so gud readin.....hope sumthin lyk dat happens!!!
srsly amazing piece of work!!
keep up d gud work!!

thnx alot!!
T@S
Posted: 13 years ago

Jazzzzzzz

 
What a masterpiece yaar, i didnt knwo u write so well ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
i was completely lost in the story. ๐Ÿ˜
Loved the concept a lot and i hope it'll happen exactly how u described it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
So beautifully described, all the emotions were lovingly captured ๐Ÿ‘
 
Amazing yaar, love you for writing this ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
 
Humera ๐Ÿค—
Posted: 13 years ago
Hey,
 
This was really awesome..you have got amazing writing skills๐Ÿ‘...could deeply relate with the entire scenario..๐Ÿ˜ณ...Lets hope something like this happens in the soap too...
 
You have got me wanting more of these๐Ÿ˜›...write again soon๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 13 years ago
This is a wonderful OS Jaz.....
I didn't even cry that much seeing the actual epi, but tears didn't seem to end while reading it.
Was just, so beautiful, so true, all the feelings weaved in the words.... It was really marvellous, and this line is just awesome.
the man she'd inevitably come to loveโ€ฆtrulyโ€ฆmadlyโ€ฆdeeply.


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