Originally posted by venture
Who bought this piece from DEAD, I wrote this one in August or so . Pooshah, Subhanallah, beautiful poetry.
I though I might right something , I am sending this on Suhana,s page on Star Plus site, lets see if its answered, but sharing with you ,
Tum yuheen hanstee Rahoo
Aur Woh Tumhay Hansata Rahay
Chaira Tumhara Chamakta Rahay
Aur Woh Tumharee Nazar Uttarta Rahay
Tum Kabhi Rotho Kabhi Khaffa Ho
Aur Woh TumhayPyar Say Manaata Rahay
Gar Kabhi Ankh Jo Bhur Ayee Tumharee
Woh Aankhon Say Tairay Ansoo Churata Rahay
TRP bhi yuheen Sada Bhadtee Rahay,
Entertaintment Hamara Bhi Chalta Rahay. I hope they reply tothis one..and do let me know what /where is this site. I would be really glad if someone's poem is chosen/replied to !! They have made us poets all over again !
Actually i was looking for my old ppoetry thread to post some new poems, but came across these which you had written...lovely poem
The earlier one you wrote reminded me of a scene/dialogue in devdas, where paro comes to look for devdas and chandramkui..mads..replies on same lines..its like you can take the material things but not the immaterial ones !!
And this one you wrote is lovely. !!
I so agree, hum poets/writers love ppl who appreciate our work dil se !!
thanks for reading my poem. i just barged into your thread...๐
your love for Rags is almost similar right ๐