Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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Posted: 13 years ago
I got the link from den i liked reading the first part and second is ultimate for me....... 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb!!!!


loved iT!!!!

continue soon.......n pm me wen u do so!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Gosh Maan's so full of himself, his reactions after leaving her dumbstruck were totally adorable! And Geet, I can totally imagine her expressions! Him muttering a curse and then grabbing her for a kiss was sooooo like MSK, wish it was possible to see that in Geet...😍
 
Awesome OS, otally love your writing style, would love to see a continuation of this in the office!
 
Anjali
 
Edited by *angel94* - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: rdfan

Very Well written with a very different feel to it .......seriously not much into the show itself ..have seen quite a few scenes ....thats abt it ...but am always game for a neat FF....and this one happens to be one ......

 
Hope u find the time to update this soon enuf ....cause i like the others will be waiting ......
 
Once again Fabulous Stuff......👍🏼
 
-Pooja



Thank you Pooja. Hopefully I will update it soon. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: deniac

yaaay yaaay yaaay....... kiss kiss kiss happened.... yaaay yaay.....thanks ash for giving in to mine n vrush's demand...... 😆😆😆



Yay! Kiss happened!! I wrote this for you and vrush. Hope you guys like it. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: abi2010

wow keep it up.... want some more



Thank you. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: tv_rocks

I got the link from den i liked reading the first part and second is ultimate for me....... 😍



Thank you RIcha. Glad you liked it.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: anufa

superb!!!!


loved iT!!!!

continue soon.......n pm me wen u do so!!!!



Thank you. Shall send you a message when I update next. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: *angel94*

Gosh Maan's so full of himself, his reactions after leaving her dumbstruck were totally adorable! And Geet, I can totally imagine her expressions! Him muttering a curse and then grabbing her for a kiss was sooooo like MSK, wish it was possible to see that in Geet...😍
 
Awesome OS, otally love your writing style, would love to see a continuation of this in the office!
 
Anjali
 



Yep, it was total MSK wasn't it? Grab what you want!! Thank you Anjali. Will try and write a continuation of this in the office.. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow,, partner you just rocked it.. you i read OS first time.. it was so real..it seemed i was actually watching it... your command over the characters was just too good,,keep writing and make me know when you write it next time....👍🏼