Fan Fictions

os:gang back together updt prt 67 on pg 166 - Page 5

Created

Last reply

Replies

1143

Views

85197

Users

66

Likes

2294

Frequent Posters

Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: Tasnim2623

lovely update dear..


thnx
IISHAFS thumbnail
Anniversary 16 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
all 4 parts are awesomee
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: Shafoo

all 4 parts are awesomee


thnk u soooooo much

zarfishanzahid thumbnail
Anniversary 14 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
nice part plz cont soon and thx alot for the pm
jes_jade thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
nice part dear...
continue soon😊
ar_sajan4evr thumbnail
Anniversary 14 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
heyy nycc update..
cont soon n thnx 4 d pm..:)
Posted: 13 years ago
thnx guys i want more comments pleaseeeee
Posted: 13 years ago
ok guys here the update goes guys
now according to my last updt
mayank had a fever
and nupur made him sleep
now everyone's here
nupur comes out of the ward to meet everyone
benji:ab kaisa hai mayank
nupur:subah se theek tha leikin ab thodi der pehle mayank ko bohot tez bukhar ho gaya
dia:ab kaisa hai woh
nupur:ab woh kuch der keh liye so gaya hai
samrat:doctor se check karwaya
nupur:nahi abhi doctor hospital nahi aye
dia:oh
benji:i think we shud not disturb him
dia:ok
gunjan:chalo samrat ham sab tab tak bahar wali coffee shop par chalte hain
dia:han tum sab jao aur preeti koh bhi le jao main nahi aa paoon gi
gunjan:dia tum nahi ao gi
dia:nahi main mayank ke liye khana bana kar layi hun i think i should stay here
preeti:ok mama ap yahan raho hum ja rahe hain
dia:ok beta bye
benji:dia tumhe kuch chahiye to mein tumhe la deta hoon
dia:no darling thnxmujhe kuch nahi chahiye
benji kisses dia's forhead and everyone leaves
now dia and nupur sitting together and feeling awkward
now the background song is
kya bebasi hai ye kya majboorian
hum paas hain phir bhi kitni hain doorian
jism tu jann main
teri pehchaan main
mill ke bhi na milen hain yeh kaisa bharam
yeh hain tere karam kabhi khushi kabhi ghum
now nupur gets uncomfortable
and leaves there
she goes to the washroom
and starts crying
she doesnt know that dia is watching and hearing her
nupur:kyun............kyun nahi main dia aur gunjan ko bata sakti keh main unki apni behen hun kyun nahi main sab ko bata sakti keh mein hi hun jus ko sab tang karne keliye morena express bulate the............kyun main aj bhi mayank ko utna hi pyar karti hun............kyun jab mujhe pata chala ke mujhe amnesia hone wala hai main kisi koh bina bataye chali gayi sab se dur........leikin meri kismat to dekho aj mujhe uun logon ke samne la kar khada kar dia jinse duur rehna meri zindagi ki sab se badi ghalti thi....magar mein kya karti mein nahi dekh sakti sab ko mere liye pareshan...........nahi dekh sakti mayank ko aik pagal ke saath zindagi guzarte hue ....nahi dekh sakti thi ooska pyar mere liye kam hote hue
dia:(interupts)
nupur..................dia hugs hers
nupur:arre tum yahan
dia:han main nahi toh aur kaun aye ga yahan maine kaha tha na tumhe keh tum hi ho meri behen nupur .........tum ne yeh baat hamse issi liye chpai kyunke tumhe lagta tha keh hummpe bojh ban jaogi aisa tumhe lagta hai nupur magar aisa tumhe lagta hai nupur main abhi ja kar sab koh bata dun gi
nupur:dia tum kisi koh nahi batao gi tumhe meri kasam
dia stops
now cut to where mayank wakes
nupur and dia are there
mayank:arre dia tum yahan
dia:han main leikin mayank tum apna khayal kyun nahi rakhte
mayank:mera khayal rakhne ke liye meri nupur hai na
then the doctor comes inside
doctor:well.....everybody is here
nupur:arre doctor ap yahan
doctor:han mujhe nurse ne bataya keh mayank ko kafi tez bukhar hai so i came to check
nupur:han aiye na doc
doctor:mayank apka bukhar utra(checking his forhead...........nahi abhi bhi hai
mayank:doctor.................i am absolutely fine
doctor:woh apka temperature check karne ke baad pata chale ga
he puts thermometer in his mouth
and meanwhile he asks nupur
doctor:well.........kal raat se apne inhe saari duwaiyan di na
nupur:han doctor saari duwaiyan di thi
doctor takes the thermometer out and says
doctor:nahi bukhar kam hone ki bajaye badh gaya hai
nupur snatches the thermometer reads and says
nupur:han...........104.................mayank tumhara bukhar toh sach much mein badh gaya..............aik minute....................mayank jab main bahar gayi thi tab tum ne duwai li thi ya nahi?
mayank:arre nupur woh....woh.....woh
nupur:woh woh kya mayank tum jante ho na ke tumhari tabiyet kharab hai to phir bhi tum aisa kyun karte ho
mayank:arre doctor ap hi samjhaye isse ke kabhi kabhi chalta hai
doctor:no mayank health par no compromise
mayank:ok doctor
nupur:arre doctor ap hi samjhaye isse ke issse apna khayal rakhna chahiye na
doctor:ok mayank ab yeh kuch medicines hain ye toh le lo
mayank:acha doctor le loon ga
doctor:nahi abhi lo tumhara kya bharosa phir lo ya na lo
ok mayank takes the medicines and the doc leaves
mayank:nupur relax aur yeh ghusa tumhare chehre par acha nahi lagta
nupur:aur tumhare chehre par yeh weakness aur bukhar bhi acha nahi lagta
dia:acha nupur ab dantt baad mein lena pehle mayank ko khana toh khane do
now they all have lunch
ok guys thats enough for today
i will update it tommorow INSHALLAH
ok guys precap:everyone gets to know about nupur
please guys comment ur comments are precious to m
e

Edited by annie98 - 13 years ago
preety88 thumbnail
Anniversary 16 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
fabulous update..im glad dia knows the truth....nupur yelling at mayank was cute...cont soon
zarfishanzahid thumbnail
Anniversary 14 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
amazing part plz plz plz cont soon and thx alot for the pm