MY PREDICTION(updatd pg4) - Page 3

Originally posted by: JoeyZaza

that was awesomethnk uuuuuuuuuuuu 👏 very well written 👍🏼
plss continue would love to read it!!i will......
but dont kill anyone 😭😭😭NVR EVR!!!!!!!!!dnt wry

hey i thnk u r a twilight fan ryt?meeeeeeeeee tooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Originally posted by: zash_sparkling

hey i thnk u r a twilight fan ryt?meeeeeeeeee tooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

woowww really!!!  ya i am a bigggggg fan of twilight!!!!!
just read the second part!! loved it! awww krishna was tooo cute 😳
😳

It was a very well writen and emotional update.Pls continue😊

hey guys..............thnx 4 cmntn.n herez d lst part..........njy


I KILLED HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dis ws d thot dat echoed inside hs mind wen d doctors tld hm dat Pratigya is undergoing a critical stage.if smfn hapens 2 hr i wil b d cmplt responsble.....no one else.hw foolish i hv been??????NO i'll nt lev hr dis tym!!!!!!!!!im wit u Pratigya............
U'LL B BACK,U HV 2 COM BACK.aftr al u r MY WIFE!!!!
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AFTR SEVERAL HOURS OF PANIC.....................

Dr cam out of d ICU.Krishna rushed to d Dr asa he sw hm comn out.He immediately attacked hm wit questions........Dr Saab hws my wife?is she alryt?hd she gaind conciousness?cn i see hr nw?cn i go inside?..........
Dr.Krishna saab.calm down.....calm down.....aftr a lot of struggle v hv finally managd to mak d bleeding stop.seems lyk ur luv 4 ur wife hd savd hr......cngrts!!!!!.u cn c hr nw.bt let me tel u 1thng-shez stil unconcious due to fatigue n bloodloss....v r compensatn 4 d bloodloss...bt b careful.......

INSIDE D ICU.............

Pratigyaz lyn der wit her eyes closed...jz lyk a baby.......Krishna cnt bear 2 c hr lyk dat.Shez still unconcious....He sat beside hr..........
K:Pratigya...........
no response.......
K:im soooooo sorry 4 evrythng.i knw dat im responsible 4 watevr bad dat hd hapnd 2 u.i ws angry at dat tym,i accept dat.i cudnt accept d fact dat u hv hidden such a thng 4m me.its true dat i felt lyk u hv broken my trust.bt it doesnt mean dat i hv broken my LUB.......infact noone cn do dat.........evntho u ddnt lyked me i lubd u,n wl luv u 4eva............
He began 2 mov awy........suddenly som1 took hold of hs hand.........

he immediatly turned around 2 c Pratigya staring at hm wit tearful eyes.............
P:Y do u luv me lyk dis krishna????????i dnt deserve it at all..........i ddnt try 2 undrstnd ur true luv........i suspected ur luv
K:dnt say lyk dat........my lub wil gt its meaning 1ly wen its givn to u........its my authority.........
Pratigya hs no wrds 2 say.she gently pressed hs palm wich she ws holdn wit hers................she insistd hm 2 sit beside hr n nt to lev hr................he ddnt wnt 2 go bt he cnt stay  der  4  so long as d Dr hd alrdy mentnd hm 2 go out ........bt shez nt allown hm..........shez stil holdn hs hands as she knew by nw dat diz d gr8st support she wud gt in hr lyf.......!!!!
Krishna lukd at hr face n finally........slowly bent low until his lips touchd her forehead.......his FIRST KISS.......!!!!!!!!!!!!
he  ws hesitant as he knw pratigyaz nature verywell......bt dis tym she ddnt protest...!!!!!!tho she ws shokd by hs action....she ddnt want dis miment 2 end..............as its d startn of deir new lyf...................................................
do cmnt guysssssssssssssssss................

Edited by zash_sparkling - 13 years ago

Originally posted by: JoeyZaza

woowww really!!!  ya i am a bigggggg fan of twilight!!!!!
just read the second part!! loved it! awww krishna was tooo cute 😳
😳

thnk uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu.btw i hv updatd d lst prt.do read n cmnt

Originally posted by: shruthiR

It was a very well writen and emotional update.Pls continue😊

thnk uuuuuuuu sooooooooooo much dr😃.i hv updatd lst part.plz read n cmnt

that was a fabulous update! 👍🏼 awwwww awesome kriya scene! the first kiss 😳😳😉 loved it!!
hope we get 2 see something like this in the serial soon 😍

Originally posted by: zash_sparkling

hey aleena dr,i lub ur ffs vmuch.d horror onez rllllllllllllllllllllllly awsm.i lyk d way u present Krishna in ur ff OBSESSION.i ddnt gt a chnc 2 cmnt as most of d tym i may b offline.so jz thot 2 post here so dat u may c............gud wrk dr👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Originally posted by: zash_sparkling

hey guys..............thnx 4 cmntn.n herez d lst part..........njy


I KILLED HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dis ws d thot dat echoed inside hs mind wen d doctors tld hm dat Pratigya is undergoing a critical stage.if smfn hapens 2 hr i wil b d cmplt responsble.....no one else.hw foolish i hv been??????NO i'll nt lev hr dis tym!!!!!!!!!im wit u Pratigya............
U'LL B BACK,U HV 2 COM BACK.aftr al u r MY WIFE!!!!
                   ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

AFTR SEVERAL HOURS OF PANIC.....................

Dr cam out of d ICU.Krishna rushed to d Dr asa he sw hm comn out.He immediately attacked hm wit questions........Dr Saab hws my wife?is she alryt?hd she gaind conciousness?cn i see hr nw?cn i go inside?..........
Dr.Krishna saab.calm down.....calm down.....aftr a lot of struggle v hv finally managd to mak d bleeding stop.seems lyk ur luv 4 ur wife hd savd hr......cngrts!!!!!.u cn c hr nw.bt let me tel u 1thng-shez stil unconcious due to fatigue n bloodloss....v r compensatn 4 d bloodloss...bt b careful.......

INSIDE D ICU.............

Pratigyaz lyn der wit her eyes closed...jz lyk a baby.......Krishna cnt bear 2 c hr lyk dat.Shez still unconcious....He sat beside hr..........
K:Pratigya...........
no response.......
K:im soooooo sorry 4 evrythng.i knw dat im responsible 4 watevr bad dat hd hapnd 2 u.i ws angry at dat tym,i accept dat.i cudnt accept d fact dat u hv hidden such a thng 4m me.its true dat i felt lyk u hv broken my trust.bt it doesnt mean dat i hv broken my LUB.......infact noone cn do dat.........evntho u ddnt lyked me i lubd u,n wl luv u 4eva............
He began 2 mov awy........suddenly som1 took hold of hs hand.........

he immediatly turned around 2 c Pratigya staring at hm wit tearful eyes.............
P:Y do u luv me lyk dis krishna????????i dnt deserve it at all..........i ddnt try 2 undrstnd ur true luv........i suspected ur luv
K:dnt say lyk dat........my lub wil gt its meaning 1ly wen its givn to u........its my authority.........
Pratigya hs no wrds 2 say.she gently pressed hs palm wich she ws holdn wit hers................she insistd hm 2 sit beside hr n nt to lev hr................he ddnt wnt 2 go bt he cnt stay  der  4  so long as d Dr hd alrdy mentnd hm 2 go out ........bt shez nt allown hm..........shez stil holdn hs hands as she knew by nw dat diz d gr8st support she wud gt in hr lyf.......!!!!
Krishna lukd at hr face n finally........slowly bent low until his lips touchd her forehead.......his FIRST KISS.......!!!!!!!!!!!!
he  ws hesitant as he knw pratigyaz nature verywell......bt dis tym she ddnt protest...!!!!!!tho she ws shokd by hs action....she ddnt want dis miment 2 end..............as its d startn of deir new lyf...................................................
do cmnt guysssssssssssssssss................

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Originally posted by: aleena1

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lovely update hun....😊👏

 

wow.... they will work on their relationship..... yippeeeeee kriya united at last....... felt so bad for Pratigya who was hurt and Krishna feeling guilty....

 

cant wait for your next update.... keep it up👍🏼

ohhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!thnk u verymuch dr.bt sry 2 say.........i thot i'll juz end it up der itslf as im nt an expert in writn romantic stuff........do u wnt me 2 cntnue??????ohhhhhh datz so nice of uuuuuuuuu..........let me c.i hv 2 thnk abt it.i too wantd 2 add much mor KriYa scenes bt i 1ly hv som vague ideas.so i thot let d CVs com up wit it so v cn rlly njoy it.......i will try bt im nt sur.......i'll pm u if i succeed.k?thnx 1c agn ur cmnts!!!!!!!!!!😃