Maaneet ff...Ishq Hua....thread #1.. - Page 3

Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part but spoke quite a lot i thk
She shouldnt speak so much
Update soon longer one
Posted: 13 years ago
yah sure...more longer....u know hw geet is...geet toh geet hai na...bak bak nd geet go togedr ..haha!
Posted: 13 years ago
loved iT!!!!

luking 4wrd to maneet private convO!!!

update sooN!!!
Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!!! love it!! this is geting so good!!!!!!!!!
Posted: 13 years ago
conti soon and plz add me in pm list
Posted: 13 years ago

😃😃😃😃😃superb update...........its seems ther is goin to b lot of dishum dishum ( i mean verbal duel)😆😆😆😆😆😆  btween them.thnxxxxxxxxxxx dear..😳

 
reva
Posted: 13 years ago
wow sweety i loved it do continue and add me in the PM list
bye sumi
Posted: 13 years ago

Part 4

 

Maan calls geet to the office..he has made all plans to take revenge on her....geet is damn scared and is walking slowly..she reaches d cabin and knocks...

 

Geet: sir, kya main andar aasakti hoon?

 

Maan: oh! miss geet bakshi..please..andar aiyye..main aap hi ka intezaar karraha tha..

 

geet in her mind...

 

Geet: achanak ise kya hogaya....!..tone change...iske  tone pe mat ja geet..yeh jaisa dikhta hai waisa he nahin..Babaji raksha karna..!

 

Maan: miss geet aapne aaj mere din ko bohot hi adventourous tarike se shuru kia he.....mujhe lagta hai aapki zaroorat yahan nahin kisi circus me bohot jald padne wali he...

 

Geet: gayi meri naukri...!

 

Maan: agar aapko lagta hai ki aapka mujhse bohot jald peecha chutega toh aap galat he..maine aapko naukri se nikalne ke liye nahin bulaya hai..aap yahan intern architect he na..?

 

Geet: yyyyyess sir..!

 

Maan: kitne din se?

 

Geet: pichle 6 mahine se...

 

Maan: oh wow! gr8! tab toh aap yahan ke bare main sab kuch janti hongi....

 

Geet: yes sir.....

 

Maan: toh aaj se aap yahan intern architect ke hisaab se nahin kaam karengi...

 

Geet: e le..! yeh toh mujhe demote karraha he..lagta hai seedha intern se chaprasi..!

 

Maan: aaj se tum mere liye mera sara kaam karogi..tum sirf intern architect hi nahin balki meri personal assisstant cum secretary  ka kaam karogi...! aur haan  tum meri nazroon ke saamne rahogi jab tak tum office me kaam karogi…..mera sara kaam tum sambhalogi….yaha ekdam saamne mere cabin ke saamne tumhara cabin hoga…taki main tum par nazar rakhsakoon

 

Geet: sir main..? par sir maine aaj tak yeh sab nahin kiya..avantika maam me toh mujhe...

 

Maan: (he shouts)..avantika tumhari ab boss nahin he...main hoon..samjhi tum...?? aur haan tumhe yeh sab kaam sikhna hoga...subha ko theek ..7.30 baje tum office aaogi..aur haan mujhe meri table ek cappucino chahiye widout cream..samjhi...?

 

Geet in her mind...

 

Geet: aadmi he ki rakshas...!7.30 baje bulaya par mera tv programme toh 12 baje khtam hota hai ...main woh kaise dekhungi...avantika maam toh mujhe 9 baje bulati thi....mujhe secretary ka kaam..mujhe pata hai jaan bujh kar mujhe satane ke liye woh yeh sab karrahe he...par kya karoon naukri ka sawaal hai...!

achcha sir....yeh sab main karlungi...par baki ka kaam..

 

Maan: baki ka kaam tumhe bahar mera chief accountant Raghav samjha dega.....aur agar tumne ek bhi instruction follow nahin kiye toh tum janti ho.....

 

Geet looses her control....

 

Geet: kya? kya? kya karlenge aap....?..samajhte kya hai....kaha to maine ki main sab kuch karsakti hoon..kya samjhke rakha hai ki mujhe koi kaam nahin aata..sab aata hai mujhe....!

 

Maan: ok then prove it....

 

Geet: sir aap geet ko nahin jante...mera naam geet bakshi hai..aaj tak maine koi bhi kaam galat ya adhura nahin kiya hai....yakeen karna hai toh challenge karke dekhlijiye....

 

Maan: yeh office hai...koi college nahin ki tum challenge lagarahi ho..

 

Geet: lagta hai aap mujhse dargaye...

 

Maan: mera naam maan hai...maan khurana..main kisi se nahin darta....toh theek he agar tum aise hi manogi toh main challenge lagane ko taiyyar hoon...par shart hogi kya...

 

Geet in her mind...: aapna naam toh aise kehraha hai jaise james bond ho...bond...james bond...ise kuch interesting shart deni paregi...

 

Geet: sir agar maine ek hafte me bina koi galti kiye kisi bhi kaam ko adhura na choda toh main aapko jo kahungi aapko woh karna parega...aur agar aap jeete toh aap jo kahene main karungi....manzoor...?

 

Maan: oh nice..mujhe manzoor hai...!

 

Geet: ok sir then we will see..

 

Maan: yes definitely u will see miss geet bakshi...!

 

geet starts leaving from there wen suddenly her duppatta gets stuck in d door....she tries to take it out..maan sees dat nd helps her out...he feels the tender touch of her hands as it both their hands touch each odr for sum tym.....they look at each odr and feel sumthng strange...in d process geet's dupatta tears wid a piece falling on d floor...geet noticing it gets irritated and lliterally bangs the door …she says…

 

Geet: aaj ka din hi kharap hain..Babaji mere saath hi kyun…!

 

Mann: yeh ladki manners kab seekhegi….!

 

 Suddenly Maan rewinds back to the moment wich he spent wid her a minute ago…he tke d piece of geet's dupatta falen on d floor, picks it up nd sees it……..he looks at it nd remembers his frst meeting wid her, d fight they had in d office nd her dupatta getting stuck in d door….he cnt figure out as to why he felt sumthng unusual at the tenderly touch of geet's hands….maan keeps d dupattta piece wid him in his pocket…he suddenly realises …

 

Maan: yeh main kya karraha hoon…..?? main uss nakchadi aur sarphiri ladki ke bare mein kyun sochraha hoon…

 

He is abt to throw d dupatta piece on d floor bt he coudnt..he again keeps it wid him nd starts wrking……….he gves a slight look at the door wich geet banged…..he gets back to work….!

 

Posted: 13 years ago
You are too good yaar ........it was awesome. Plz continue
Posted: 13 years ago
Part 5
 
Geet meets raghav..an interesting guy of her type....they befriend each odr...raghav gves a file in wich wat she hs to do as maan's assisstant and secretary ...she takes it and she hs to do read it the entire night...she makes a funny and irritating expression..she leaves.......!
 
Geet tells avantika as to what happened.....geet is instructed by maan to read the file..for today she will read the file and she has to report early....d day finishes and geet goes home...wen going home...
 
geet in d parking lot out of the office is kicking her scooty trying to start it...it is nt starting....
 
Geet: kyun re dhanno? shuru hojana...kya tu bhi uss maan khurana ke jaisa hogayi..jaise woh meri baat nahin sunte ab tu bhi meri baat nahin sunegi...aaj mera din hi kharap he...Babaji meri scooty start kardo...!
 
jus then maan passes by his car nd stops..
 
Geet: hey bhagwan..! yeh rakshas yahan kya karraha he....?..office mein jo kiya woh kafi nahin tha....lagta hai pet nahin bhara...gadha..!
 
Maan: ms.geet agar aapki mann ki akashvani telecast band ho chuki ho toh mein kuch kahoon?
 
Geet: sir aapko kaise pata chala ki mein mann mein baat karrahi thi sirrrr....?
 
Maan: itna toh aapke bare mujhe pata he....ki baat kiye bager aap reh nahin sakti..aur jab nahin karti toh mann mein mujhe gali derahi hongi...
 
geet in her mind..
 
Geet: e lo! yeh toh bara smart banda he....!..sab pata chaljata he...isse panga lene main mazaa aayega...!
 
Maan: ms.geet bakshi..main aapse baat karraha hoon!....aap yahan kya karrahi he?..woh bhi iss tym....raat ke nau baje....!
 
Geet: sir main na yahan pe kabaddi khelrahi hoon...aur kuch karne ke liye he bhi nahin...aap khelenge?
 
Maan: kya?tum seedhe seedhe saawal ka seedha seedha jawab kyun nahin deti..!
 
Geet: kyunki aap sawaal hi aise poochte he...main yahan kya karrahi hoon...obviously mujhe yahan khade hone ka koi shauq nahin he....meri dhanno start nahin horahi he...
 
Maan: dhanno?
 
Geet: haan dhanno...meri scooty..achcha naam he na sir....
 
Maan: uff kitni filmy ho tum...khed chodo..chalo mmmmein tumhe drop kardeta hoon...
 
Geet: kya? main woh bhi aapke saath aapke gadi mein jaungi...jayegi meri jooti...
 
Maan: kya? kya kaha tumne?..ek toh main tumhari help karraha hoon upar se tum...ziddi ladki...sharafat ka toh koi zamana hi nahin raha...
 
Geet (softly): sharafat shariff logo se umeed ki jati he..
 
Maan: kya? kya kaha tumne?
 
Geet: sir kuch nahin...sir main kehrahi hoon main aapke saath nahi  jaungi..main abhi dhanno ko start karti hoon dekhiye...!
 
Maan: oh yes please....!...kariye..!
 
Geet(as if talking in d ears of her scooty): dhanno...meri pyari dhanno...please shuru hoja..arey yaar samajhti kyun nahin...iss gadhe khurana ke saamne meri izzat ka kachra mat kar..shuru hoja..ok..!!!
 
Geet starts kicking  d scooty.....it dsnt start...Maan gves a faint smile...
 
Maan: kya hua.? tumhari dhanno start nahin horahi he?
 
Geet: dhanno start hoja.....!..hey Babaji..kyn..mere saath kyun...?????????
 
Maan: hato..main start karta hoon...
 
Geet: hahaha..achcha joke tha...lekin mujhe hasi nahin aayegi..khabardar jo meri scooty ko haath lagay toh...toh main...
 
Maan: toh kya? kya karogi...ek toh main tumhari help karoon upar se tumhari bakwaas sunu...hato geet...please hato...!
 
Maan starts repairing the scooty by trying to start it ....geet cnt see him touching her scooty..she cnt bear that..she grabs hold of maan's hands nd tries to remove him..
 
Maan: geet..yeh kya karrahi ho geet...
 
maan also tries to push geet nd geet shouts...
 
Geet: chodiye ...chodiye..chodiye meri dhanno ko.....
 
Maan: geet...geet..chodo main karlunga...yeh kya bachpana hai...
 
Geet: chodiye sir..chodiye..
 
in the process...geet pushes maan and inturn both fall on top of each other on top of the ground..maan falls over geet...maan for the first time is so close to geet..he looks at her beauty so closely wich he adores so close for the frst tym....geet feels uncomfortable....maan looks at geet nd keeps on looking at her...he feels sum kind of attraction towards her...mahiiii plays in the background......suddenly aftr a long eyelock they both realise the awkwardness of their closeness and get up..!
 
aftr sum tym maan repairs the scooty...
 
Maan: dekha tumne...aise theek karte he..
 
Geet: bohot achche sir..lagta hai aap pichle janam mein mechanic the..
 
Maan: kya? kya kaha tumne..? ek toh maine tumhari madat ki upar se tum mujhe tewar dikharaho ho...sahi kaha he tum ladkiyon ki madat karna bekar he... tum toh thank u toh bolne ki bhi manners nahin rakhti ho..
 
Geet: toh madat karte kyun he?..maine kaha tha aapse theek karne ke liye....aur shart ke hisaab se mujhe aapna sara kaam  khud karna hai aur mujhe aapki madat ki koi zaroorat nahin he...samjhe aap....bare aaye thank u sunne ke liye...
 
Maan: toh theek he ..aaj ke baad tum sara kaam khud karogi..mujhse yah kisi se bhi madat ki umeed mat karna...varna tum shart haar jaogi...aaj ke baad main kabhi bhi kisi bhi mod par tumhari madat nahin karunga samjhi tum...?
 
Geet: mujhe chahiye bhi nahin...thank u so much ..ab aap jaiyye..!
 
Maan: mujhe bhi yahan rukne ka bhi koi shauq nahin he....
 
maan leaves from there...
 
Geet: pata nahin yeh khoon chusne wala rakshas kaha se aaya he meri zindagi me..jabse aaya he tab se meri life mein problems shuru hui he.....kher chaddo....chal dhanno..chalte he...btw tujhe maan khurana ne chuya toh tujhe chot toh nahin lagi..dard toh nahin hua na..kher chodo..chal ..chal..hum chalte he....!
 
Geet leaves from dere... !
Edited by swthrtdevisha - 13 years ago

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