CID stories : By CHINNU - Page 3

Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by CAHAT320


this story is really good........
thank you so much....
Posted: 13 years ago
Chinnu good work yaar,if this is your first attempt which is so good I'm sure that your next one will be awsome,your concept was different and plot was also nice,just one suggestion if there would've been a little more investigation the story would have been better, nevertheless is it is very good,hoping to read many more from you 👏
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by Bhavanab


Chinnu good work yaar,if this is your first attempt which is so good I'm sure that your next one will be awsome,your concept was different and plot was also nice,just one suggestion if there would've been a little more investigation the story would have been better, nevertheless is it is very good,hoping to read many more from you 👏
thanks bhavana....i was waiting for ur suggestion....i will try my best next time....
Posted: 13 years ago
hello..........
i am back with my second story.........😆
thanks everyone who liked and contributed their valuable suggestions.....


the poster release of my new story is given here.....😳
hope you like it......


starring
Daya
Abhijit
ACP
Fredy
Vivek


and introducing

ACP Ashok kanwar
And new forensic expert Prabha



👏Poster release👏



Edited by chinnu_manikyam - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
wow!!! achha poster banaya aapne
it looks fantastic 👏
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by dayabhi


wow!!! achha poster banaya aapne
it looks fantastic 👏
thank u so much@dayabi
Posted: 13 years ago


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Posted: 13 years ago
you killed daya????? and then u will continue later???? another behrupia????? another agonizing wait for daya fans????? and i dunno, ure narration is nice but abhijeet behaving like ds..... well.... gud story but sad too.... and u brought prabha here??? nice move.....
Posted: 13 years ago
👏 👏 👏..awesome.........👏👏👏👏................
& 😲 😲 😲 😲...............how this happened daya sir pe doubt dal diya 😭 😭 😭 😭.................

hoping daya sir is fine..........😊 😊 😊............ doctor change karo 😆 😆 😆 😆 how can he say that......😆 😆 😆
hope to see daya sir back in next part........  😃😃 😃
continue asap 😃
Posted: 13 years ago
this story is the best story i have read here.
although incomplete..
 but awesome!!
ps: please stop killing daya..

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