A lifetime of Gratitude-ff maneet updt-149,154 - Page 5

COntinued

Sasha is snooping around in Geet's office

Sasha- Toh Miss Geet..tumne kar ke dikha hi diya
Geet- kya?Dekhiye, aap baar baar yeh sab kya bolti hain?
Sasha- chaalaaki mat dikhao. Main tumhara asli roop samajh chuki hoon..Bhole bhaale boss ko shaadi mein phasa kar,saara naam,saara paisa..sab kuchh hadapna chahti ho na tum

Maan- SASHA!
How DARE YOU insult my wife??!!

Geet- woh Sir,

Maan looks at her
Geet tries again- Rehne dijiye Maan..chaliye. please
Maan- tum jaao gaadi mein baitho,main aata hoon

Geet goes and Maan talks with Sasha

Maan- Sasha- tumhari himmat kaise hui ki tum Geet ko, MRs GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA ko kuchh bolo? What has she done to you? tum itna kyun jalti ho usse?
Kyun ki tumme woh pyaar,woh bholapan, woh khoobsoorti nahi hai? ya woh meri patni hai isliye

A very stunned Sasha- But MK,main toh..

Maan stops her with her hand
Maan- Last warning de raha hoon.. Mere kaan hamesha yahi lage rahenge,toh keep your opinions to yourself and treat Geet as you would treat a queen. End of story.

Maan goes, leaving behind a near-to tears Sasha in his burning wake


In the Car,
Maan takes off his waistcoat, and his tie,opens a few buttons.
Geet quietly switches on the AC

Maan looks at her, suddenly realises that she is scared

Maan- tumhe thand lagti hai na..it's ok. Main thik hoon

Geet- Woh..Maan..aapko gussa aaya hua hai isliye thanda karne ke liye..

Maan smiles a small smile,barely noticed by Geet

Geet starts chit chatting and Maan loses himself in her, just listening to her,he thinks

kitna bolti hai. kya karun main iska...aur iske bolne se bhi mujhe koi irritation nahi hoti..iski har ada par pyaar hi aata hai.

Geet is thinking
Maan gusse mein itni jaldi aate hain..abhi chup ho jaati hoon..

She goes quiet

Maan looks at her
Maan- kya hua? aage kya hua?
Geet- aap sun rahe the? woh aapne kuchh response nahi diya isliye I shut up

Maan- nahi. Tum bolo, main sun raha hoon..I like listening to you

It was a simple line said by Maan but touched Geet to the core

Geet looked at the handsome profile of her husband and thought to her self,

"what a strange man..and yet...a good man"

tell me what you think guys...

so sorry for the short parts :(

if u guys want the length to be increased i can..but main monotonous reading nahi karna chahti that's why..short parts :)

suggestions welcome

love

That was such a short part. I am craving for more. Sasha deserved each and everything Maan said to her. I feel she will still try to do something to Geet.

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COntinued

Sasha is snooping around in Geet's office

Sasha- Toh Miss Geet..tumne kar ke dikha hi diya
Geet- kya?Dekhiye, aap baar baar yeh sab kya bolti hain?
Sasha- chaalaaki mat dikhao. Main tumhara asli roop samajh chuki hoon..Bhole bhaale boss ko shaadi mein phasa kar,saara naam,saara paisa..sab kuchh hadapna chahti ho na tum

Maan- SASHA!
How DARE YOU insult my wife??!!

Geet- woh Sir,

Maan looks at her
Geet tries again- Rehne dijiye Maan..chaliye. please
Maan- tum jaao gaadi mein baitho,main aata hoon

Geet goes and Maan talks with Sasha

Maan- Sasha- tumhari himmat kaise hui ki tum Geet ko, MRs GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA ko kuchh bolo? What has she done to you? tum itna kyun jalti ho usse?
Kyun ki tumme woh pyaar,woh bholapan, woh khoobsoorti nahi hai? ya woh meri patni hai isliye

A very stunned Sasha- But MK,main toh..

Maan stops her with her hand
Maan- Last warning de raha hoon.. Mere kaan hamesha yahi lage rahenge,toh keep your opinions to yourself and treat Geet as you would treat a queen. End of story.

Maan goes, leaving behind a near-to tears Sasha in his burning wake


In the Car,
Maan takes off his waistcoat, and his tie,opens a few buttons.
Geet quietly switches on the AC

Maan looks at her, suddenly realises that she is scared

Maan- tumhe thand lagti hai na..it's ok. Main thik hoon

Geet- Woh..Maan..aapko gussa aaya hua hai isliye thanda karne ke liye..

Maan smiles a small smile,barely noticed by Geet

Geet starts chit chatting and Maan loses himself in her, just listening to her,he thinks

kitna bolti hai. kya karun main iska...aur iske bolne se bhi mujhe koi irritation nahi hoti..iski har ada par pyaar hi aata hai.

Geet is thinking
Maan gusse mein itni jaldi aate hain..abhi chup ho jaati hoon..

She goes quiet

Maan looks at her
Maan- kya hua? aage kya hua?
Geet- aap sun rahe the? woh aapne kuchh response nahi diya isliye I shut up

Maan- nahi. Tum bolo, main sun raha hoon..I like listening to you

It was a simple line said by Maan but touched Geet to the core

Geet looked at the handsome profile of her husband and thought to her self,

"what a strange man..and yet...a good man"

tell me what you think guys...

so sorry for the short parts :(

if u guys want the length to be increased i can..but main monotonous reading nahi karna chahti that's why..short parts :)

suggestions welcome

love

hi
could you please write in English? because i don't know hendi at all!!!!!!😳
Edited by bahane - 13 years ago

Aww.I'm sorry...not even a little bit hindi?

I will keep it in mind for sure :)

@ mittu- sowie darling! my best friend has come to india for some work for a day, so..I'm trying to spend time with him...will give you a long long next part,pakka promishe!!

loved the update geet...gud that Maan came there in time and listened to all Sasha was trying to say...loved that dialogue of maan..."treat her like a queen"...aww he so loves her.... Edited by amotlymileo - 13 years ago

wow kia story chal rahe hai MRS. MAAN SINGH KHURANA 👏

luvd the update, dont know how i missed this ff, btw i m a huge fan of the self dialogues of maan tht u write😊
plz add me in ur pm list, tht wud make sure tht i dont miss on anything....

Update-

At the mall

Maan gets out fast and goes to Geet to open her door..

Geet- Maan...will you please step aside so I can get out

Maan- 😲

Steps aside, shaking his head after opening her door..
They go inside and Geet says

Geet- Aapko kya kya lena tha? aapne Mr Chopra ko bola tha na?
Maan- haan..woh..um..Let's buy your clothes first

Geet-par Maan.Oh ok, I will go with your advice, so you lead

Maan gets angry that Geet had assumed he would know about women clothing

Maan- Geet..you think I walk around in women stores buying clothes for girls?

Geet- nahi..woh main..I didn't mean that. I only meant..

Maan- I'm not the type. If we like something, we will buy it

Geet- UFF, why did I come shopping with him

Maan- what do I buy for her? what could make her look more beautiful

Suddenly they pass a lingerie store and Geet starts walking fast

Maan- Geet..ruko..please walk slowly..it's not healthy for the...

He breaks off

Geet thinks its the first time he has talked about my baby..She corrects herself, our baby and starts walking slowly

Maan spots a very beautiful black dress with red trimmings..with double straps and just above knee length

He thinks this would suit Geet very well..but still
he stops Geet and shows her the dress

Geet- I can so not carry that off
Maan- Have you even tried? C'mon let's go and you can show it to me

Geet- But..
Maan- No buts

He steers her into the store and Asks the saleswoman to give Geet the dress

She wears it and feeling extremely self-conscious, calls Maan inside..

Maan...

His heart beating so fast whenever she used that beautiful voice of hers to say his name hesitantly, he goes to her, and is stunned

Geet- Please..say something
Maan- there is nothing to say.. It looks beautiful on you. You don't look beautiful in it..but it looks beautiful on you. Lets take it

Geet is stunned by what Maan said..

Geet- you mean, I don't look good in it?!

Maan- nahi. You look good.But different. Lets take this and lets go from here. I have an idea

They buy it and Maan takes her to another shop where he sees a very beautiful red suit with zari work, it's anarkali style and he loves it

Geet- yahan kya?
Maan- yeh kaisa laga?tumhare upar bohot achha lagega
Geet- par..you don't even like red?
Maan- yes, I know..dont tell me about myself. But there is something in that dress. Please, just try it once..
Geet- i will,but people wont like it on me
Maan- To hell with people.

They go in, she tries the dress, and Maan almost dies..hyperventilates

Maan- how beautiful can someone look.. Meri laal pari..meri Geet..kitni khoobsoorat..hey Bhagwaan..I'm so lucky I have her in my life. Her inner beauty, and her ability to love shines through in that dress. It's made for her

Geet feels shy at the admiration in Maan's eyes and nudges him

Geet- Maan..thik hai?
Maan- haan? yes, perfect. absolutely perfect

They buy it and then Geet asks

what will you wear?

Maan, who hadn't thought about it at all says..something

Maan- why do yo u ask?
Geet- ...because I was thinking..people would expect us....ahem..to ...

Maan- let's find something for me if you want

Geet- okay

They find Maan something matching..

Something Indian attire...He had decided that if Geet would wear Indian, so would he.no arguements..

He had a great time looking at Geet fussing over him and his clothes, the fitting and everything else..

He loved it and thought if she had asked him to, he would have worn anything..or nothing..

blushing at the direction of his thoughts, he snapped back to the present and after taking everything..they were about to exit when Maan again stopped Geet

Geet- kya hua? Forgot something?
Maan- yes. You haven't eaten anything
Geet- it's ok.let's go home and eat.
Maan- no. we're eating now.
Geet- Maan..I don't feel like eating
Maan gives his no arguement stare to Geet and says she doesn't want to eat any burgers or pizzas

Maan- hmm...ohk great!let's go
Geet- wow..his mood changes soo fast when he's with me. God knows what he's thinking now.. UFF

She sits in the car and without noticing where Maan is taking her, she closes her eyes and dozes off

Maan has a hard time concentrating on the road ..

"she's so tired.." he sighs to himself,wishing he could do something to alleviate her tiredness

When Geet wakes up about half an hour later, she finds herself in familiar surroundings

Geet(amazed)- Maan...yeh toh wahi dhaba hai....


haha,that's it..sorry for bringing back the dhaba ..but i cant stop thinking of it...

comments and suggestions plzz!!

love

maan shopping pe  aesa hujata hai 😃

i m sure red mai geet bht achi lage ge

dhabba ...hehehe 😆 yeh to waqi dono kabhe nahe bhulen ge 😉

good work yar 👏

that was a killer update n thnks 4 d pm😊