Miyan, Biwi, Bachha aur Woh

Posted: 13 years ago

Miyan, Biwi, Bachha aur Woh

 

As evident from the title itself, Archana has decided to stay with Manav's family to take care of the baby to showcase one more 'mahanta' of hers. It's her love for the child, that has brought her over here. But just go through the story to feel the height of mahaanta.

 

Scene- it's 10 pm. All elders are asleep, but the child is yet to.

 

Shravani- Kya Archana tum bhi. Abhi tak munne ko sula nahi  payi. Mujhe to tension ho jati hai yeh soch ke bachhe ko kaise sambhal paogi tum.

Manav-to tum kyun nahin sula deti usse?

Archana- are aap dono jhagdo mat. Bacha hai. Thodi na hamari marji se so jayega. Ab usse neend bhi to aani chahiye.

Shravani- par mujhe neend aa rahi hai. Chalo na manav so jate hain

Manav- tumhe neend aa rahi hai. Tum so jao. Mujhe kyun keh rahi ho. Munne ko khelte hue mujhe abhi dekhna hai

Shravani- munne ko khelte hue dekhna hai ki uske sath khelnewali is aurat se nazar ladani hai?

Manav- oh bas bhi karo. Hamesha bekaar ki baat karti rehti ho.

Archana- are manav aap chale jao na sone..main munne ko sula deti hun

Shravani- ab tum humne permission dogi sath sone keliye I mean sone ko jane keliye

Archana- mujhe galat mat samjho Shravani..maine humen tumhe hamesha chhoti behen samjha hai. Aur tumhari khushi mein meri khushi hai.

Shravani- thik hai thik hai. Ab mahaan banne ka natak band karo. Chalo na manav…plz chalo na

Manav-tum chalo main aata hun

Shravani- hmm..main chali jaun aur tum archana ko good night puppy deke aaoge ..mere jeete jee aise nahin hoga..chalo mere sath

Archana- ab chale bhi jaiye Manav..bachhe ko baad mein dekh lena

Shravani- achha yeh batao kahin aisa to nahi..mere sone ke baad manav uth ke idhar chala aata ho tumhare sath muh kaal karne

Manav- aisa kuch nahin Shravani..ab tum mere sabr ka imtihaan mat lo

Shravani- ab aap ka imtihaan to main andar loongi (LOL)..chalo na..(khinch ke bedroom ke ore le chalti hai)

(Archana ki aankhon mein khushi ke aansoo..ki uski chhoti behen apne pati ke sath bedroom mein ja rahi hai)

 

(bed room ke andar gaana baj raha hai..sarkai lo khatiya jada lage..jade mein balma pyara lage..bahar Archana bachhe ko gaana gake suna rahi hai..chanda hai tu mera suraj hai tu. Dono gaane ek sath bajne ki wajeh se Ekta Ji ka dimaag kharab ho jata hai is liye wo gaana band kar deti hain)

 

(Andar se awaz aa rahi hai aur archana can hear that)

 

Manav- nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Shravani- oh ho manav..kab sikhoge tum yeh sab..ab main pareshan ho gayi..tumhe roz roz sikha sikha ke

Manav-bachaooooooo…uiiiiiiiiiii Archana

Shravani- log kehte hain uiii Maa..yeh aadmi kahega uii archana

Manav- oh sharavani yeh kya kar rahi ho….yeh nahi hoga mujh se..thoda dheere plz

 

(Archana yeh sab sunke kaan mein rui laga leti hai aur bachhe ko sulane mein concentrate karti hai aur bachha so jata hai.)

 

(2 hrs later Manav comes out to use the bath room. Sharavani is asleep. Archana and the baby are lying in the hall. Archana ko dekhte hi manav ko pyar aa jata hai aur archana ki bhi aankh khul jati hai. Again music plays ..owaaaaaaaaaaaaa)

 

Archana- manav aap yahan shravani ko akeli chhod ke

Manav- ab bathroom bhi usko sath leke jana padega  kya mujhe?

Archana- nahi main keh rahi thi ki aap usse duniya bhar ki khushi dete rahiye.

Manav- usse khush kar pana ek aadmi ke bas ki baat ki nahi

Archana- chhi

Manav- mera matlab hai..usse khush kar pana mushkil hai

Archana- mujhe aap pe naaz hai…main aapki pehli biwi kehlane mein garv mensoos karti hun…bhagwan kare har janam mein mujhe aap ki biwi banne ke mauka mile

Manav- aur tum mujhe har janam mein bali ka bakra banao

 

(shravani comes there)

 

Sharavani- kya ho raha hai dono mein? Archana character naam ki koi cheez tum mein hai ya nahin. Kisi doosre mard ko uske bed room se khinch lati ho..

Manav-Shravani ab bas karo..main bathroom aaya tha

Sharavni- to bathroom hi jate na is aurat se kyun batiya rahe the..

Archana- sorry shravani..wo to aise hi

Shravani- tumhara bathroom ka kaam ho gaya ho to chalo mere sath

(Manav ki aankhon mein darr. Shravani usse khinch ke room mein le jati hai aur Archana kaan mein cotton laga ke sone ki koshish karti hai)

 

Posted: 13 years ago

This is one of your best story SD Bhai

Great dialogues

EspeciallyGood nite puppy,muh kala to nahi karte,kab sekhe gaye tum ye sab,🤣

bechara Manav kahan phas gaya,shravani is such a🤬

song selection was superb👍🏼


Posted: 13 years ago
Wow SD bhai in full form, loved it🤣🤗👍🏼
 
I am so happy to read them, ah superb one!!!🥳
Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb SD ji
 
Mere Manav ko bachaoooooo
 
Itna zulm acha nahi hai......hum baccho par🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
uiiiiiiiiiii Archana... 🤣
Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved this line!

Manav- aur tum mujhe har janam mein bali ka bakra banao🤣 🤣


Posted: 13 years ago
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Do i need to say something.... Even title was Funny.. Excellent .. Totally luvvvvvvede it
Posted: 13 years ago
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kya bolu SD bhaai! aap itne acche acche kamaal ki story post karte hai ki usko taarif karne ke liye meri shabd kam par jaati hain.

superb, funny, excellent, awesome, fentastic........loved the story and also the tittle of the story. totally enjoyed it.👏 ⭐️😃


Posted: 13 years ago
hahaha SD u made my day with my morning chai
 
Omg i laughed so much
 
Sarkaye lo khatiya was hilarious
 
Har janam pehli bilwi banne ka soubhagya was hilarious too
 
Honestly SD Archna is very very VERY irritating with her mahaanta
 
And someone influential from Ektas team loves Shravni .He has a Thing for short women😆
Posted: 13 years ago
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SD it was just simply too good,

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