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Posted: 13 years ago
heyyy dear,
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PART 8:~

Riddhima mumbles "police???" nandini and all end up stunned as well'. 
Nandini shakes her head for mistaking that it might be her son'.
Riddhima gets worried'. Rahul goes over to the police man to ask him
y he is here!
Rahul- aap?
Police- actually yaha ki paas ki jo jail hai waha se aik criminal
bhag gaya hai, to aapse pata lugaa ne ayaa hu ke kya aapne kisi
anjaan se chehra ko dehka hai?
Rahul- dehkiyya, anjaan chehro se to humare kai baar saamna hota
hai'.
Police- (holding up the pict) aapne isse kaahi dehka hai?
Rahul- im sorry'.. ji nahee'.
Police- thanks for ur time and sorry to disturb u'..
The police leaves and riddhima sighs in relief'. Khushboo notices and
laughs and goes over to her "kya bhabhi aap police se darr gai?"
riddhima smiles and sits back down'. Nandini continues showing her
stuff'.. and riddhima starts having that uneasiness feeling'..
Abhi comes down all happy'' "mamaaaaaa'''."
Nandini- kya hua abhi'. Jaan nikaal di tune meri''.
Abhi- mama jo khabar main aapko denaa wala hu wo to aapki jaan
nikaal degi'.
Nandini- haai, kya hua?
Rahul- kya abhi suspence thor na'. Aur bata kya hua'..
Abhi- rahul bhaiyya humare dusre bhaiyya array hai''
Nandini- matlab''. Such'''.!!!!!! Dehka mere mann kehra tha mere beta
aya ga, isliya to abhi jab bell baji mujhe lugaa ke wo'' such kehra
hai na tu abhi'''.. is baar to mujhe bewakoof nahee baana raha na??
Abhi- maa aapki kasam'.. kushboo, sid, dad big b is coming home'''.
Yipeeeeeee!!!!!!!!
Kushboo- oh my gosh! Mom rahul bhaiyya, I have a great idea hum big
b ko surprise party denge, unke aane ki kushi main'. Kyun ke unka b-
day bhi to hai''.. abhi flight kitne baje ki hai'??????
Abhi- raat ki hi hai'.. im sure he'll be here by 12'.
Rahul- lekin usse airport kaun receive karne jayaa ga?
Sid- koi nahee
Nandini- kya?? Mere beta itne barso baad araa hai aur tu  kehra hai ke
usse koi lena nahee jayega'..
Sid- mom, plz! Let us do what we're doing'.
Kushboo- sid what exactly do u have in mind''
Sid- riddhima bhabhi (riddhima looks up) rahul bhaiyya abhi n
kushboo come here'..
Nandini- aur main kaha'.
Sid- mom tumhare na pet main koi baat nahee tik ti'. Aap jaao aur
yeh news papa ko do'.
Nandini- haa haa tum sab bache aik side pe ho jaao'. Koi baat nahee
mere beta aa raha hai na, mujhe tumme se koi bhi nahee chahiyye'..
Rahul- maa wo to mazaak kuraa tha'..
Abhi- kya mom ke chumche'.. idher aiye aap'. Aapki mom ko adat
hai emotional black mailing ki'. U stay here'..
Rahul- acha acha'..
Nandini goes upstairs to inform karan'..
Sid- this is the plan'.. bhaiyya ki flight raaht 10 baje ki hai'..
ager humme se koi unhe lene nahee gaya to unka 1 hour aisa hi zaaya
ho jaya ga, phir wo taxi duhnde ge, aur uske baad airport se ghar
pochne main acha khasa time lugta hai, aur jab pochenge it will be
nearly 12'. Ghar ki saari light off hongi and the light will hit
bhabhi'..
Riddhima- mujhe???? Kyun??
Sid- bhabhi kyun ke big b ki arti aap utarengi'''
Riddhima- main? Lekin''
Kushboo- come on bhabhi, aap is family ka hissa ho'..
Riddhima smiles at the apnapan and agrees''
Abhi- uske baad all the lights will go on and then boom!
Sid- exactly'' bhabhi iske liyya u need to be with us tomorrow'.
Humhe pure ghar ki decorations kurni hai'' we have lots to do'.
Abhi- main bhabhi ko unke ghar se lelunga'.
Riddhima smiles and nods'..
Kushboo- oh my gosh, I have to have a new dress'..
All including riddhima say "kushboo" ''..

After lots of planning and masti mazaak, riddhima tells rahul she
better go home'. He agrees'. Nandini comes and says "tum aaj ghar pe
aahi bahut acha lugaa' ab jaldi humare ghar main ajaao'. Dehkliyya
tumhare aate hi kitni saari kushiyya agai''.." riddhima
smiles'..riddhima hugs her and then one by one all say bye to her'..
in the car rahul notices riddhima happiness'..
Rahul- tum khush ho na'.
Riddhima- haa rahul bahut khush! Maine kabhi nahee socha tha ke mujhe
itna acha susraal milega'. Jaha sab bahut acche hai'' thanks rahul'.
Rahul- hey no need!
Rahul drops riddhima home, riddhima asks him to come in but he
declines saying theres lots to do for office as he wont be going
tomorrow'. Riddhima waves him good-bye and comes in humming'. Anjali
who is sitting with tamanna and naina notices riddhimas changed attitude'.
Anjali gets up all happy'..
Anjali- riddhima'.
Riddhima- hi di! Hey sweeties'..
Tamanna and naina get up smiling''.
Riddhima- kya hua? Aap sab mujhe aisa kyun dehkra ho?
Anjali- tujhe itne waqt baad kush dekh rahe hai na isliya!!!
Riddhima looks up n smiles'.. anjali tells her to go rest'.
Riddhima- di mujhe kal jaana hai rahul ke ghar as they have planned
something'.
Riddhima sits down and tells her sisters about her day'.. and the
surprise'. Anjali agrees'..

Riddhima goes to her room and her eyes hit the calender, she goes over
to it and realizes its armaans b-day day after tomorrow'. She
remembers kushboo saying "kul ke baad big b ka b-day hai'.." she
shrugs the thought off thinking its possible for two people to have
same b-dates'.. she goes and takes out armaans photo'.. and lays down
on her bed''.
"jaante ho aaj khushi ke waqt main bhi tumhare yaad aari thi'..
usually itna to main humesha sirf tumhare saath hasti thi'. Na jaane
kyun armaan jab main waha gai to mujhe lugaa mere waha se koi puraana
rishta hai, such kahu to mujhe tumhare ehsaas ka ehsaas hua'' aisa
lugaa ke tum waha ho'.. armaan kyun mann kehra hai ke kul bahut bada
din hai? kyun jab jab kal ke baare main sochti hu to ajeeb si tees
uth ti hai'.. kya ho raha hai'. nahee jaanti'. Per aisa kyun lugra hai ke
barso ka intezaar kal khatam hone walaa hai?? armaan tum jaante ho na
tumhari riddhima is vishwaas ke saath ab bhi jeeri hai ke tum loto
ge'' armaan mujhe mama, kushboo, abhi, sid sab bahut ache luge and I
felt very comfortable with them'. Per na jaane main chaate we bhi
rahul ko dost se zyada kyun nahee dehk paari'. What it is I don't
understand'' per kal ke din ke liyya mann bahut besabri se intezaar
kar raha hai'. purso tumhare b-day hai'.. aur'.." FLASHBACK''''

riddhima is taking armaan somewhere with a duppata tied around his
eyes'.
Armaan- riddhima jaan where r u taking me?
Riddhima- armaan tum bahut sawaal puchte ho'. Fikr nahee karo khaungi
nahee tumhe'..
Armaan- riddhima''
Riddhima- chup! Idher kurre ho'..
Everyone yells surprise, riddhima takes the duppatte off armaan's eyes n
then everyone says happy birthday'. Lights go on, riddhima notices
armaan still didn't open his eyes'.
Riddhima- arre ab aankhein khol lo'.
Armaan- main sabse phela tumhe dehkna chaata hu, isliya mere saamne
aake kurri ho'.
Riddhima smiles and goes stands infront of armaan'' armaan opens his
eyes, "oye hoyye' ab yeh saal bhi bahut achaa guzre ga!!!"
Riddhima- kyun?
Armaan- sabse phele tumhe jo dehkliyya'..
Riddhima-  (going in his arms) armaan'..
Armaan- jaan, jaise tum chaati ho tumhare her b-day pe main tumhare
saamne hu isi tarah main chaata hu mere her b-day pe tum mere saamne
ho aur sabse phele main tumhe dehku!
Riddhima- happy b-day armaan'..
Armaan- (kissing her forhead) thanks sweetheart!

END OF FLASHBACK'''..

Riddhima continues "armaan kya kya socha tha humne, kya kya sapne
sajaya the humne'. aur yeh sab?? Kyun toote humare sapne, kyun
adhoora chor gaya aapni riddhima ko'.."
Riddhima changes sides and sees armaan standing against the wall'..
riddhima sits up and goes over to where hes standing''. "armaan''.."
shes about to touch him when he disappears'. Tears roll down riddhima
face'. she leans against the wall and remembers moments spend with
armaan''

Tum Bin Jiya Jaaye Kaise Kaise Jiya Jaaye Tum Bin
Sadiyon Si Lambi Hai Raaten Sadiyon Se Lambe Huv Din
Aaa Jao Laut Kar Tum Yeh Dil Keh Raha Hai
Aaa Jao Laut Kar Tum Yeh Dil Keh Raha Hai
Phir Shaame Tanhaye Jaagi Phir Yaad Tum Aa Rahe Ho
Phir Jaan Nikal Ne Lagi Hai Phir Mujhko Tadpa Rahe Ho
Phir Mujhko Tadpa Rahe Ho
Is Dil Mein Yaadon Ke Mele Hai
Tum Bin Bahut Hum Akele Hai
Aaa Jao Laut Kar Tum Yeh Dil Keh Raha Hai

Kya Kya Na Soocha Tha Maine
Kya Kya Na Sapne Sajaye
Kya Kya Na Chaaha Tha Dil Ne
Kya Kya Na Armaan Jagaaye
Kya Kya Na Armaan Jagaaye
Is Dil Se Toofan Guzarte Hai
Tum Bin To Jeete Na Marte Hai
Aaa Jao Laut Kar Tum Yeh Dil Keh Raha Hai

Tum Bin Jiya Jaaye Kaise Kaise Jiya Jaaye Tum Bin
Sadiyon Si Lambi Hai Raaten Sadiyon Se Lambe Huv Din
Aaa Jao Laut Kar Tum Yeh Dil Keh Raha Hai

Riddhima gets up wiping her tears'.. she takes armaan's photo and hugs
it, later on falling asleep''

In the morning, riddhima is waked up by tamanna'. Riddhima thinks of what
to wear when she realizes she still hasent worn the saree armaan gave
her and asked her to where on his b-day! Riddhima looks at the saree


and becomes emotional' anjali walks in and realizes the saree'. She
puts her hand on riddhimas shoulder and riddhima smiles saying she is
ok'. Anjali tells her to do breakfast and she'll get the jewelry and
chudiyan etc out for her'. riddhima nods and leaves to do breakfast'.
There she has an encounter with padma, both exchange looks'.. padma
doesn't say anything as shashank is sitting'..

Shashank- good morning beta'.
Riddhima- good morning!
Shashank- beta anjali bataa raahi thi ke tumhe rahul ke ghar jaana hai
Riddhima- ji wo'. Main aapse puchne hi waali thi'.
Shashank- is main puchne waali kya baaht hai'. ofcourse behta'.. aur
mr. Mallik ka bhi phone ayaa tha hum sabko invite kurne ke liyaa'.
Aur'.
Riddhima- aap busy honge'. Meetings hongi, important nahee aa
payenge'.. yea I know'.
Shashank gets up walks over to riddhima kisses her on the forhead and
says "nahee behta, hum ayenge'. Zaroor ayenge" riddhima smiles and
shashank smiles back'..

After breakfast riddhima goes to take a shower'. She comes out and
starts dressing up'. Anjali, naina n tamanna help her out, even though
riddhima told them she can manage but all say no'.. riddhima goes
downstairs and remembers she forgot her cell phone'. She tells anjali
she'll be back and goes to get her cell phone'. She opens her drawer
and sees armaans photo, she takes it out'.. kisses it and is going
towards the window when she sees a sindoor ki dubi on her table, when
she remembers anjali placing it their'.. for what reason she doesn't
know'. she takes it and armaans photo and stands near the window,
forgetting that anjali n the rest are waiting for her n abhi will be
here soon to get her''

"yeh sindoor humesha tumhare naam ka lugaane chaha hai'. per shayad
humari kismat main wo sab nahee lihka tha'. Armaan kaash tumhare naam
ka sindoor meri maang main hota'." She opens the dubi holding armaans
photo when there is a strong wind'. The sindoor flies back and fills
riddhimas maang'. Riddhima goes towards the mirror and stares at her
maang'.. "kyun yeh waqt, hawaein aisi umeed dehti hai jo puri nahee
ho sukti'." She places armaans pic back in the drawer and goes to wash
her maang'.. downstairs all r wondering whats taking riddhima this
long when tamanna offers to go see'' riddhima comes out and tamanna tells
her everyones waiting for her, riddhima says yes im coming'. She
quickly closes her door and goes downstairs'..

anjali asks her what took her so long, which riddhima replies
saying "kucch nahee" the horn beeps and riddhima says "lugta hai abhi
agaya, di main chalti hu'.. bye u all" and she leaves'.

MALLIK HOUSE:

Abhi drops riddhima, riddhima asks him y isn't he coming in to which
he replies he has some files to give in office'. Riddhima nods and
abhi leaves'. Riddhima comes in and sees all working (kushboo, sid,
nandini, rahul) she coughs to get their attention'.. kusbhoo rushes to
her bhabhi'.
Kushboo- chalo bhabhi bilkul bhi time nahee hai'..
Riddhima smiles and asks her what she has to do'. Kushboo points to sid
and tells her to help him out, riddhima agrees'. She goes over to
sid, sid asks her to hand over the balloons'.
Riddhima- waise sid, tumhare big b ka koi naam to hoga na?
Sid- hai na, unka naam'. ar''. (hes interrupted by his cell phone
ringing) ek minute bhabhi'..
Riddhima- sure'..
She sees sid busy in talking so gets up on the stool to hang the
balloon when she looses her balance but rahul catches her'. she
looks at rahul n then simply looks away'. She doesn't like the
thought of being in his arms'. She quickly makes him put her down,
and says "Thanks" he smiles'.. and tells her not to get on the stool
again as she might loose her balance again, she nods'. Sid comes
back''.
Riddhima- to sid'' yeh bataao tumhare big b ka koi kamra to hoga na??
Sid- hai na bhabhi' PER'.. unke kamre main mama, rahul bhaiyya, aur
dad ke siwa koi nahee jaahta'..
Riddhima- kyun?
Sid- I don't know'. aisi raha hai shuru se'. hum jitna big b se
pyaar kurte hai'. unse durte bhi bahut hai'' aur unko kisi ka unke
kamre main jaana pasand nahee hai'. he wants to have his space and
privacy'. Which I don't think is bad'. hum sab bhi yeh chaate hai'.
Riddhima- pata nahi tumhare yeh big b mujhe thore'..
Sid- no no bhabhi, big b is great from the heart! Wo bahut acche
hai'' aap unse milengi na to aap bhi yehi kehngi'.. chaale bhabhi
waha stairs pe puhl lugaa te hai'.
Riddhima nods'''..

AT NIGHT:
Guest start coming in'. riddhima is having this "somethings about to
happen" feeling, while shes setting up the thaali'. Anjali comes and
seeing this smiles to herself'.. sid comes running downstairs, and
says to riddhima "big b ka phone ayaa tha'. Thore gusse main lugre tha
kyun ke koi unhe receive kurne nahee gaya, per anyways wo aane waale
hai'. its great timing, 11:50 hore hai im sure jab thak wo pochenge
it'll be 12'' riddhima smiles'' she holds anjalis hand and says shes
very nervous'. Anjali tells her to relax'. When the bell rings'.
Someone opens the door, and the lights hit riddhima, shes looking
down, goes to the door and is in all smiles, while everyone is
shocked!
Rahul- angad tu?
Angad- hey bro!
Kushboo- angad!!!!!!
She goes and hugs him'..
Nandini- tune nahee bataya ke tu aya ga!!!
Angad- bata ta to apne maa ke chehra pe jo khushi hai wo kaise dekh
paataa'.
He hugs his mom''.
Angad- hi riddhima!
Nandini- tu isse jaanta hai?
Angad- yeah mom, main aur yeh bahut acche dost hai'.
Abhi- well angad she's not only ur friend balke bhabhi bhi hai'.
Angad- really what?!?!?! Amazing'. Rahul bhaiyya I must say ur
choice is the best!!!
Sid- per what is this angad, big b nahee ayaa'.
Angad- don't count on it'.. abhi aate honge, close the lights and
begin the show''

Lights go off and everyone takes their spots'. Theres footsteps of
someone coming in'. "koi hai''." riddhima is taken aback hearing the
voice''. The lights hit her, she looks up and the thaali drops from
her hand'''''..
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will be waiting for ur replies!

PRECAP:~

Who is the person seeing whom riddhima is so shocked????

What impact does the person's entry have on her life??

Will every1 from rahul's family still luv her???

will rahul and riddhima get married???


Armaan Lover,😳 ❤️

Lipsa

Edited by lipsamehta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
aweome part i loved it....i hope it is arman
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey
superb part
luvd it
cont soon
 
nd evn d previous parts were also vry gud.
 
plz PM me wenevr u update nxt
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice ff

update soon n add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey just came across ur ff and read the whole in one go..
its just  awesome..loved all the parts..
pls pm me whenever u update next
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Posted: 13 years ago
everyday i m checkig...plz tell me wen u gonna update?
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Posted: 13 years ago

NOTE:~


Hey Guys!!!! Thanks a lot for liking my story...

i'll upload the next part tonight.....

Guys i have a problem..... can u plz tell me how to upload a pic here wich is saved in my pc????

Also plz send me a buddy request if u want the pm for the updates as for sum reason i m not able to send requests to ne1.......

Armaan Lover,😳 ❤️

Lipsa


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Posted: 13 years ago
gr8 ff read all in one go
so pls pm me wen u update
 i hav sent u buddy request
Waiting for part !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!