AR Short FF-Tears in Heaven Note Pg 26

Posted: 13 years ago

                                AR(Short FF) TEARS IN HEAVEN

 

This FF is based on the present track of DMG'

 

After 2 months,

Riddhima and Siddhanth become good friends but still they are not together like any other husband and wife.

 

After the stressful weekend duties,Riddhima is back to Sanjeevani for  an important case. The patient is just got a heart attack and he is been attended by the best doctors of Sanjeevani'our very own Dr.Armaan and Dr.Riddhima.

 

At sanjeevani'

 

In ICU,

 

Riddhima : Sister,inko bed se bilkul utne mat dena aur inko zyada baat bhi karne nahi dena.

 

Sister:Yes mam.

 

Riddhima:Inko hosh aate hi mujhe bula dena.

 

Riddhima checks the reports and finds the last observation page which was updated yesterday is not there.

 

Riddhima:Inki kal ke observation ka report kahan gaya?

 

Sister:Mam,use toh kal Dr.Armaan pad rahe the aur who unke pas hai.

 

Riddhima:Tik hai'Mein Dr.Armaan se hi baat kar lungi and she leaves'

 

Riddhima calls up Armaan but he does not pick up his mobile as he is busy getting ready!!!

 

Armaan's Home

Armaan is getting ready to leave but just as he passes by the entrance of his house he finds a Ganesh Statue and stops there'

 

Armaan:Hey bhagwan'Tum Riddhima ko hamesha yunhi khush rak na aur mujhe kuch nahi chahiye.Mein jitney bhi din rahu main use hamesha khush aur haste hua dekhna chahta hun.

 

Life is so strange '.Today its made a person like Armaan who never used to believe in all this do all tht!!!

 

Armaan leaves for Sanjeevani.

Ridz at Armaan's Cabin,

 

Riddhima is searching for the report of the patient but she comes across something which leaves her completely broken.She stands still without any movement.Unable to believe her eyes.She falls down on her knees leaning towards the table,she starts weeping.She doesn't understand anything at that point of Time and avoids to believe anything what she has just come across'She starts running in the corridors weeping badly and searching for Armaan.

Riddhima:Aapne kahi Dr.Armaan ko dekha hai?

 

Ward Boy: Nahi mam'

 

She runs to cafeteria,general wards ,locker room and atlast reaches Fire Escape.

 

Riddhima:Tum yahan?

 

Armaan;Haan!!!Kya Hua?Tum itni kabrahi kun ho?

 

Riddhima:Yeh kya hai Armaan?(pointing towards the report)

 

Armaan:Report hai Riddhima.

 

Riddhima:Armaan,tume pata hai main kya poch rahi hun!!!Mujhe batato'

 

Armaan turns towards the wall and is trying to hide his eyes.

His eyes are red and full of tears'

 

Armaan:Tum kiski baat kar rahi ho Basket.

 

Riddhima:Tume kab se yeh pata hai Armaan?

 

Armaan:Kuch nahi Riddhima'Woh bas.

 

Riddhima:Kya Armaan?Tumne itni badi baat mujhse kaise chupa le?

 

Armaan:Who kuch nahi hai Riddhima.

 

What's the report all about???Stay tuned to know what happens further'

 

Hope you all like it!!!

Please give in ur comments.Your comments are valuable to me.I will take in all ur suggestion and try to improve'

 

ThankYou!!!

Updates
 
Part I-Pg 1
Part II-Pg 10
Part III-Pg 18
Note-Pg 25
Edited by cute_n_sweet - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago

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Edited by cute_n_sweet - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by mrs.sharma


👏
Thanks a lot di.This is my first FF n I am glad that u liked it!!!
Can I add u to the pm list for further updates?
Posted: 13 years ago
@mansibharti-Thanks for reading it.Shall I add u to my pm list for further update?
Posted: 13 years ago
yaar ..just dont give a sad ending....all the best👍🏼
Posted: 13 years ago
Hey! Tum Armaan ko problem mein mat daalna yaar! Please!

Anyway, nice part! Update soon!
Posted: 13 years ago
Btw...I will hit you hard if anything happens in this ff where the song, Tears in Heaven, may be used...I am serious! :p
Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
Hey nice part... Plz add me to ur PM list .... But haan yaad rakhna mere armaan ko kuch nahi hona chahiye ;).....AR FORVER!!
Posted: 13 years ago
well sab ne tujhe to dantliya.. aur aab meri bari.. seriously if anything happens to armaan.. hum tujhe nahi chodingay.. 

i know that u'll not do anything like that..

loved the part sheriya

Posted: 13 years ago
heyyy dear,
awesome one
thanks for PM.
continue soon



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Riddss

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