Bhavana's creations,"Those Eyes" poem page 55 - Page 3

wow dii ... tumne toh sach mein kamal kar diya! 👏 CIDians ki dil ki baat likhdi yaha!!! hats off to u! 👍🏼 Loved this poem, each n every word made me remember abhijeet 😊 who's in death bed now! 😭 But I know unhe kuch nahi hoga, voh vapas aayenge!!!!!! 😃

salam.......great poem👏👏 .......i love poetry.......specially on abhijeet  tooo kia batt ha bossssssssssssssss tereeeeeeee👏👏

abhijeet sir kalia arzzzzzzzzz kia ha

 

is se pehke ke bewafa ho jayen

keyun na aey dost hum juda ho jayen

to bhi heere se ban gia pahtar

hum bhi jane kal kia se kia ho jayen

to ke yakta tha be shumar huwa

hum bhi totain to ja baja ho jayen

hum bhi majborion ka uzr karain

phir kahain aur mubtila ho jayen

hum agar manzalain na bun payeen

manzalon tak ka raasta ho jayen

dair se soch main hain parwane

raakh ho jayen, ya hawa ho jayen

ishq bhi khail hai naseebon ka

khak ho jayen, kemia ho jayen

ab ke gar to mile to hum tujh se

aise liptain teri qaba ho jayen

bandagi hum ne chor di faraz

kia karain log jab khuda ho jayen........................!

@bidz and jatt thanks a lot for liking my poem

@ bidz.abhi.daya, dayabi, snehal_7s, jatt48, anantanni, sunnyp1414, sneha_fighter, jiya1, bhinder.kamboj, luna_lovegood, visrom, Shagnika

thank u all for liking it waise shagnika i was waiting for some comments as well 😛 😛 😛 Edited by didobhav - 13 years ago

😃 😃 😃 thank u all for liking it and hopefully we get to see some excellent performances today

@jeet- kuch nahi hoga..... he will b fit n fine 😊
par phir bhi jab abhi ko hospital bed pe dekhti hoo tab maan bohot dukhta hai 😭

IT IS JUST AWESOME DUDE U ROCK AND THESE R THE SAME I THINK ABT ABHIJEET AND U HAVE JUST DONE THE WORK AND I SWEARE THAT IF ABHIJEET SEES THIS HE WILL SURELY FALL 4 IT

@Prabha di-thanks a lot di,happy that u liked it

@abhi-daya-thanks for the complement but I'm not a dude
Edited by didobhav - 13 years ago

@jeet don't worry boss he'll be perfectly fine lets watch some great performances today

@bidz what u said is totally correct