Originally posted by: Lion_Priya
@...Gauri, Suri, Suhana, Lipi, Guglu, Yogi, Rakhi, Sumi n all (jo bhi mujhe galiyaan dene k mood me hainπ)
mujhe maaf karo yaar...!!! maine kuch parts is ka EDIT kiya hai...!!! actually aaj kal phones aur e-mail k zamane me koi kisi ko khat likhta hai kya...??? par Gauri ne mujhe ek Task diya tha...ki main is par ek SHOT likhun...!!! aur meri kahani ki suruwat toh rajeev se hi hoti hai...aur usi par khatam bhi...toh maine Rajeev par likhna suru kiya aur maine bakwaas likhna suru kar diya...hala ki natiza baht bura tha...mujhe saar peetne ka mann karr raha tha ise padhne k baad...!!!ab yeh sach hai ki is SHOT me ek romantic part tha...par mujhe laga ki kahin yeh kuch jyada na ho jaye...!!! mera dimag kuch jyada chalta hai...yeh toh aap sab jante hi hoge...isiliye...!!!ab maaf bhi kar do...main us scene ko kisi aur SHOT me add kar dungi...agar aap log abhi bhi bore hona chahte hoge toh...!!!
Hmm....the last lines sounded better!! Kisi aur shot me.....hmm....I think it will do for me....waise agar tumne cut kiya hai.....may be it was for better!! Ek writer sabse zyada achhese samajhti hai na? Anyways....main na likhna bhul gayi thi.....wo poems/songs.....jo bhi the....they were beautiful!!!ππ π
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