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Pyaar I-M-Possible(ammy-ridzi, mayur)FF pt31-pg110 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry dear 4 d late comment
it was lovely update
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi Ritu
i loved ur update.
it was hilarious dear.
It was damn funny update.
haas haas k mera halat kharab hogayi.
i loved Mayur n A-R convo and as well Arnu n M-R convo.
though M-R r alike n A-N r alike but i think mayur and AR r the best and the also fell for each other, specially mayur.
hehehheeh Update se pata chal gaya ki mayank really cares for nups.
I loved this update so much
it was superb.
From kiss part to song part everything was just wonderful
Very good update
keep updating

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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks Guys, for liking n commenting... Means alot to me 😳😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Ritu
lovely update dear.
hehehehehe it was nice and funny update.
i loved their fight.
M-N and A-R r really very cute.
hmm mayank was so protective but totally sadu type.
he shouted at nupur front of everyone in the mall
and nups also shouted on him
bapre koi kisise kam nehi

beautiful part.
keep it up



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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 5... nothing much.. only story aghe badaoing 😛

Later that evening/night

*All four------Mayur n AR thinking of the fight*

In Nupur's Room 
Nupur *combing her hair n thinking*: Did I over-re-act? I just over speak sometimes! 🤔

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Ridzi's Room..
Ridzi *trying to concentrate on a book but cant read beyond the first page*: I should have not made an issue out of it' may be really uss se galti hue? 🤔

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Arman n Mayank at some Club'sharing a drink!
Arman playing with his drink rather then drinking it n thinking: Am I really so bad? No! or may be yes.. but a lil bit'itna b bura nai ho!😒
Mayank to himself: I had to shout at her'because she is really so damn freaking careless'if anything would go wrong then?..! whatever!😳

Mayank: Ammy! whats up with u? u are quiet for a change? Any probs?
Arman: ya! A bit personal one!
Mayank: personal? Okay *he doesn't pester to tell* hey buddy, im not use to seeing u like that ok' SMILE!
Arman: eeee 😃 *fakes a smile bt doesn't last long n..face drops*😒 bad try! anyways thats ok! what happen to u? U are looking extra silent today?
Mayank: NO! im FINE!

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Nupur and Ridzi talking on phone'

Nupur: u are saying fine but u don't sound fine at all. kya hua? Mujhe tho bol sakhti hai na? 😕
Ridzi: No Nothing! bass mood nai hai
Nupur: haan yaar, saara mood off karr diya
Ridzi: I swear yaar! Kisne tera mood off kiya?
Nupur: chod!!! Its 12' time for my beauty sleep.. Gud Night, Ridzi! Tu bhi sooja'aur yeh sab faltu baatien.. nai soochte. Mera sarr yeh sab sooch sooch kar chakra raha hai

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In Club

Arman: Nai Sochna! par automatically I start thinking! Nobody talks to ME that way!!!!!
Mayank: just don't think about things that upset u, avoid!
Arman: hmmmm *grumpily*
 
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Next Day Morning!!!
 
(Nupur's home)

Nupur: mommmm, mummy, mumma, my sweetheart! main kya keh rahe thi na'
Mom: kya? Itna maska kyun laga rahe hai?😕
Nupur: actually'aa..umm ur right, shaadi is important thing for a gal'aur aaj nai tho kal mere bhi shaadi ho jayengi'may be in a few years..or months?
Mom: huh? kya bole jaa rahe hai? Seedha seedha bol!😕 POINT PE AAJA!

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(Ridzi's home)
Ridzi: Mere saare friends Italy jaa rahe hai' I also wanna go'plssssssss Papa
Papa: what? OKAY'but u have to pack me in your bag n take me along!
Ridzii: kyaaa?😲 plsss Papaaa 
Papa: No plsss Papa! U ALONE..going...Italy? NO Beta' don't even think I will let you go!👎🏼
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(Nupur's home)
Mom: Bilkul nai!!!! Bhool jaa..
Nupur: mommmmmmmmm please'..
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(Ridzi's home)
Ridzi: please please pleaseeeeeeeeeeee permission de dejye na
Papa: n who is going to take care of u there?

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(At Ammy-Mayank's Home)
Arman: Arman, the Great'I'll take care! I mean I'll take care of the ticket booking n everything.. leave it upto me.. bass u say OK?
Mayank: Get ready to go'.to ITALY! OK! But when u have booked the tickets for?

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(Nupur's home)
Nupur: parso'😃
Mom: itne jaldi? Arre, main tho maan bhi jao par ur dad'u know how worried he gets about u! Dekh, humien tujpe pura vishwas hai' but beta, the world is not gud na'n u are so innocent.. who will protect u from this bad world?
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(Ammy-Maynk's home)

Mayank: Im here'don't fear!
Arman: I know bro, as long as your wit me' no gal can take najahez faida of me!
Mayank: AMMY!😕

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(Ridzi's home)
Ridzi: I never go anywhere na.. n Nupur is also cuming na.. she will take care of me!!!!!!!!!!! and I will take care of her!😃😃
Papa: hmmmmmm! but for how many days?

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(Nupur's home)

Nupur: sirf 10days!!! Only 10/-
Mom: hmmm'OKAY'go start packing
Nupur: but dad?
Mom: samjo ke wo mann gaye!
Nupur: yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy''.your the best mom'thank u

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(Mayank-Ammy's home)
Maynk: n your the worst''' bag packer, Ammy!

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(Ridzi's home)
Papa: Nupur bhi hai so im letting u go'. Go.. 😊
Ridzi: yaaaa?????? I jst love u papaaaa! *hugs her dad*
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(Mayank-ammy's home)
Ammy: I hate u!....always shouting at me
Mayank: for your gud! because u need to be corrected!
Ammy: Okay, Big Brother

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(Nupur phones Ridzi)
Nupur: Ridziiiiii!!!!!!..My Tethli, u r going '😃
Ridzi: 'to Italy! 😃
 
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(Mayank-Ammy's home)
Arman: Hey Italy'😉
Mayank: '.here we come! 😉

 

PS: No worries... No much of DDLJ-ing is gonna happn here 😉😆 n if u like, pls do comment


Edited by ritu1618 - 13 years ago
sreevijayan thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update dear............
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice updt
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi ritu
lovely part
thanks 4 d pm dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow Italy there so much fun
can't wait 4 next update.
today's update was nice
plz update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hay i jst read ur ff
ur ff is awesome do cont soon 👏