"Hamari Love Story"(MayUr SS) PartVII(Ending) - Page 6

ohk....i don't know if i am first or not......but i am happy for commenting....

mayank is so helpful for  his mom.....i respect the boys who respect their mothers....cause that's the essence of love.......i think a boy who can't respect his mother can never love his wife..,..this is what i think....

how sweet! he gave her the stars! how touching!

aww.........i can imagine mayank blushing......and i can definetly guarantee mayank loving his wife...

how touching convo! i love the fact that mayank works for cancer patients.....

even i love this song.....me into singing mode now....i wish i cud sing along with u.......but i loved when their hands got brushed....

wow.......chalo nupur understood his love......atleast cud feel so.....

i loved this para......

They loved the moment with their voice together singing the same song tune and both beside each other, the night darknes they two beneath the beautiful night sky and happiness in heart. Love in the air and breeze touching them and tickling them to make them realise.. be sure there is presence of love in theirlife and someone's getting too special and they want him /her to stay forever.

i loved it like anything!

diiiii.......ek help chaiye.....can u help me frame my story, Can we be together? actually that deals with a person loving a girl who is married.....but the girl is not happy....her husband beats her..tortures her.....so mayank and nupur envelope a bond of frdship......while nupur is afraid of her husband ,RV......aage kya hoga......thodi si help chahiye....what to show? i am damn nervous!

vaise i loved this update!

do update soon

love,
Mahak
Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 13 years ago

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

hi bhoomi every time i read its part my hand want to press the like tab but sad i can press this only one time .......
i love maynk and maynk mom
he never feel low doing household work i like it.......there are some people who thought kitchen is only for girls but i think maynk is so different and her mom she is too .....the idea was so lovely and i love it.......and maynk mom teasing and her lines was too effective ...after reading this i miss maynk's mom in show very much......and then the drive i love maynk's word and nupur tell about her family.........
i love it ......maynk's word "happiness bahut muskil se aati hai is true ....."
i love it bhoomi
want to read next part soon

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

hey

its awesum yr

cont soooooooooon

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

ohk....i don't know if i am first or not......but i am happy for commenting....

mayank is so helpful for  his mom.....i respect the boys who respect their mothers....cause that's the essence of love.......i think a boy who can't respect his mother can never love his wife..,..this is what i think....

how sweet! he gave her the stars! how touching!

aww.........i can imagine mayank blushing......and i can definetly guarantee mayank loving his wife...

how touching convo! i love the fact that mayank works for cancer patients.....

even i love this song.....me into singing mode now....i wish i cud sing along with u.......but i loved when their hands got brushed....

wow.......chalo nupur understood his love......atleast cud feel so.....

i loved this para......

They loved the moment with their voice together singing the same song tune and both beside each other, the night darknes they two beneath the beautiful night sky and happiness in heart. Love in the air and breeze touching them and tickling them to make them realise.. be sure there is presence of love in theirlife and someone's getting too special and they want him /her to stay forever.

i loved it like anything!

diiiii.......ek help chaiye.....can u help me frame my story, Can we be together? actually that deals with a person loving a girl who is married.....but the girl is not happy....her husband beats her..tortures her.....so mayank and nupur envelope a bond of frdship......while nupur is afraid of her husband ,RV......aage kya hoga......thodi si help chahiye....what to show? i am damn nervous!

vaise i loved this update!

do update soon

love,
Mahak

res for being the first one to comment on 6th part! yipee!

*edited*

di......i have no words to describe the beauty of the first paragraph.....

somehow i could feel all the emotions encircling my heart and touching my soul......

how sweet! they spoke lines but understood paras? wow di!

i knew nupur would do his film.......they had to come in a love bond....

but nupur did so much to be in his movie.......she nearly staked her reputation....

wow! hero toh mayank ko hona hi tha!

par main toh yeh soch ke khush ho rahi hoon kki woh log kaise kahenge that its love......

di.......yeh joh story aapne mention ki hai......use aap likhiyega as a oneshot.......

i would love that........but with dlgs too......

i want to desperately see that confession thingy.........cause u write that heavenly!

these poetic or we can can say, these lyrical lines were too good......

are toh kahoo na ki pyaar hai!

beautiful update di!

i loved it completely!

beautiful completely!

love,
Mahak
Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 13 years ago

Hi bhoomi !!!

This is beautiful simple awesome loved it ...... the way u portray the emotions are so touching its like ...... love is so wonderful loved it to d core...n cldnt resist commenting on dis story of urs....

Simply fabulous !!

wow bhoomi i mean yaar i am feeling sad yaar why maynk write those line for nupur well after this i am also searching my maynk...........lovley part nups feel for maynk she did all this for maynk i love it maynk playing opposite nups wow yaar and at last the song i love it waiting for the confession

awesome fic bhoomi cont soon

lovely dear... 😃 i luved the update...as u dont hav a prob of me asking u to update soon.plz update soon 😛 i will be waiting..